The Unyielding Stag Ch. 122 (GoT AU/Invincible)
Added 2025-09-24 21:10:24 +0000 UTC(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)
A/N: Eighty years later. Been a wild ride guys.
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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1E2mWtcFxCKPx6fAxtTnlxTMpDMDzt_4HWbZqI4ez_Es/edit?tab=t.0
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And of course, thank you all so much for reading!
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CkLance
2025-11-18 07:51:38 +0000 UTCYet another story binged 🥳
CkLance
2025-11-18 07:45:36 +0000 UTCIt should have been mark who showed up…
Smithz
2025-09-27 19:01:02 +0000 UTCWell...since some of the kids and grandkids are female, Axel certainly should be completely non-averse by now to getting violent with his mother due to presumably sparring with them over the last 80 years. So no holding back even a bit like he did initially with Dany...though I think the eventual victory over Mom won't lead Axel to take the same steps of conquest he did with the former Dragon Queen. 😉 Still, probably the only really satisfying way for this story to have ended was this kind of cliffhanger finale...where the reader decides how things go from here, though I can't see any of Axel's offspring or descendants NOT trying to fight their grand/great-grandmother themselves if Axel did end up losing. All in all, a great ending to a magnificent story, Cambrian!
Alun Lewis
2025-09-26 17:00:51 +0000 UTCPretty sure the Viltrumites are functionally immortal, since they grow stronger the older they get, which slows their aging. So they will never actually die of old age.
Sith2go
2025-09-25 22:41:33 +0000 UTCTYFT story. Kinda wish Brienne got made a knight or to the Queensguard or something
Kluvial
2025-09-25 16:58:49 +0000 UTCGreat work cant wait for the next big story
Banana Man
2025-09-25 12:56:19 +0000 UTCIn regards to my previous comment on the earlier chapter, I'd say this is indeed a very good 'middle ground' between Axel getting his ass kicked by his mother but not ENDING the story on that. It's interesting to see Axel being on par with his mother in terms of strength, despite only living for like a hundred years. I assumed since he didn't really have anything challenging him and only a couple of near-death experiences, he couldn't really improve that much except with the help of the Seven. I failed to account for the fact that of course his children would be Viltrumites too and he'd be doing plenty of sparring with them lmao. Obviously, they wouldn't be nearly on par with him either, but at least in numbers they'd help him hone his edge. Then the Seven (and Daenerys) help seal the deal from there. My head-canon is either: 1. The fight is almost equal but with his mother ultimately being slightly stronger and more well trained and thus beating the ever living shit out of him for most of it until Axel somehow squeaks out a victory at the last possible minute by catching her off-guard in some way. Then she gets to stay and spoil her thousand grandbabies for the rest of her years, helping them prepare for the next arrival from the Viltrum Empire. 2. The fight is again mostly equal, with Axel putting up one hell of a fight, only he can't quite squeak out the win. Then we get a sort of mirror of the Mark/Omni-Man scene, except it's less the emotional attachment that makes her spare him (since there's precious little) but pride at how he almost managed to beat her. And since Axel refuses to back down even near-death (because he's UNYIELDING), she's forced to forfeit the duel to avoid killing him, allegedly because she doesn't want 'reprisal' from her grandchildren, but that's really just an excuse. After that, she's 'forced' to stay because she can't go back to Viltrum a failure. End result is the same as in the first. All-in-all, this story was a lot more fun to read than I was expecting given the premise of an obviously overpowered MC in a world mostly consisting of 'primitives'. I really wasn't sure if it could be interesting since it would be hard to create stakes, but you did a wonderful job of it (even though I still hold the opinion that Axel could have defeated the Night King by himself for Round Two if he just used his speed properly). Interested to see what daily write you pick next. I know that won't be for a while, but I'm looking forward to it either way.
RichterQ87
2025-09-25 11:49:50 +0000 UTCUnyieldible.
RJKY
2025-09-25 07:58:21 +0000 UTCI actually have a 10 year old Originals Self Insert that I wrote where he built an empire as an immortal and everything so here's a link. Admittedly it was written a decade ago lmao: https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/all-of-eternity-at-my-fingertips-tvd-to-si-complete.2071/
Cambrian
2025-09-25 03:50:44 +0000 UTCAs I said in the previous chapter, just saying "thank you for this" isn't enough. Thank you so much for this story; it was a fantastic adventure. I didn't realize that the word "unbreakable" meant something like "invincible" after all, lol. I really appreciate that without that, nothing would still be alive after 80 years and remain young and beautiful. If you could write your next story in the world of The Boys, Fear the Walking Dead, or The Originals/The Vampire Diaries, that would be amazing. Especially the last one, because, despite all the stories I've seen, none of them take the time to have the character create a kingdom as an immortal vampire; they're always directly involved in the main plot... I would like to just watch from the sidelines, I wouldn't ask to be directly involved in the main story. I would create my own kingdom, an island where I would be the king, and I would create a secret army that would rule the world as I see fit. I would prevent World War I, World War II, and many other things...
Calvin Ellis
2025-09-25 03:46:25 +0000 UTCThank you so much for writing this fun story. I really appreciate you sticking to your guns despite the burnout. Hopefully your next daily story will be just as a banger as this one.
Suika Nine
2025-09-25 01:51:46 +0000 UTCYes, indeed. I enjoyed this as much as Iron Resolve. I haven't started on the K-Pop Demon Hunters one yet because I haven't seen the movie, but I bet I'l really like that one too. Great job Cam!
JLG33
2025-09-25 01:05:09 +0000 UTCThanks for the story and nice epilogue, as always, your works are among the best.
oscar enrique sampedro lopez
2025-09-24 23:02:26 +0000 UTCExcellent story, through it up with your other best works
Freewat
2025-09-24 22:51:40 +0000 UTC
