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Silver Eyes Ch. 36 (RWBY AU)

(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)

A/N: Cole tries to step in and be the reasonable one. Unfortunately…

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cKkakJReqsDJgB3rKAzokPgqu2Om548vSQkq3dgfeAg/edit?tab=t.0

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A/N: If you see any mistakes in posting, let me know ASAP so I can fix em!

Comments

Good catch, thank you very much for pointing that out! Fixt now

Cambrian

Hi! It’s been a while, I’m catching up on pretty much ALL your stuff from the last few months. I noticed a discrepancy; Unless Joan has 15 SIBLINGS, one of these has to change: Ch. 29 “one of eight daughters” Ch. 34 “I have seven brothers” You could change the Ch. 29 thing to “siblings” and sync the numbers, perhaps? Anywho, glad you’re still going strong!

SpiritCrystal

Nice chapter! I'm loving the 'literally all the huntresses-in-training are horny disasters, but in different ways' thing you're going for. Makes Beacon a really entertaining setting.

Phraxius

i would vote for option 2.5, she demands that he fucks joans ass istead. Phyrra could say something like fucking her pussy should be a reward for something noteworthy, and she has not earned it jet. use it as a form of motivation to better herself in the future.

Rotaugur


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