Silver Eyes Ch. 29 (RWBY AU)
Added 2025-05-13 17:58:57 +0000 UTC(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)
A/N: Pyrrha is just happy that everything is working out!
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Comments
100% agreed
Drakeulous
2025-05-13 20:05:47 +0000 UTCCole should just have Amber ask Glynda straight out, or do so himself. It's a simple way to demonstrate cooperation without being entirely passive. Then he can focus on training, and make plans for any gaps that Glynda leaves or avoid conflict if she keeps the schedule full.
R Brown
2025-05-13 18:26:17 +0000 UTCI really think we should not see the scennes, where he is just selling is service, and instead concetrate more on the groupeog partners he already has. I would really prefear it , to see more return partners for him and what they experiment with insteat of seeing just a list of names he has fucked. Maybe Blake also has a petplayfetish, while Weiss ust loves to suck him whenever he wants? Maybe Amber wants to be shown of in an nightclub sometime, while he leads her on a leash, or Glynda discovers a obsession about getting assfucked over her own desk? I really dont think the pokemon mentality of "Gonna catch them all" should come over some charater developement and more time spend on his team in this story.
Rotaugur
2025-05-13 18:25:30 +0000 UTC
