The Age of Chaos Ch. 28 (Original Fantasy)
Added 2025-03-09 22:00:12 +0000 UTCA/N: Oren and Sophia feelin’ angsty.
But how is the rest of Goldriver doing in the wake of this attack?
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Comments
Quite the emotional roller-coaster of a chapter! Somber and heart-rending start, via Sophia's mini-breakdown over "failing" to sway Aureo and the River God's burial, to a karmic payback middle with Aureo's accidental "gift" to the people of Goldriver being harnessed by a probable surviving nobleman to hide the crimes he and others dud to Aureo, to a lovely cliffhanger ending that sees our heroes facing down....Law reborn? Sophia's previously unknown grandfather? Oceanus? Definitely some deity of significant power, based on Oren's mental comparisons to Law...but we dealing with a villain or a vengeful family member?
Alun Lewis
2025-03-10 22:54:31 +0000 UTCSad to see that Sophia was right and that Aureo had faithful in the city still, but that twist of the dagger (lol) makes it all the better imo. Hype for tomorrow!
Will Something
2025-03-10 06:41:18 +0000 UTCNope, purely coincidental tbh. Love how things sometimes just work out like that!
Cambrian
2025-03-10 00:08:25 +0000 UTCHaha, if I made Oren and Sophia face Raythe's boss this early they'd probably die. Would be a bad way to cut short the entire story xD
Cambrian
2025-03-10 00:08:01 +0000 UTCHuh, what do you know. I was right. The old man was Raythe's boss pulling an Odin.
Avalon
2025-03-09 23:23:45 +0000 UTCDid you time the reveal to be ten chapters after the Chekhov’s Gunman loaded their gun on purpose? I read the now public chapter and I can’t help but wonder on that.
anony
2025-03-09 22:59:43 +0000 UTCHeh, you'll have to wait until tomorrow! :P
Cambrian
2025-03-09 22:45:57 +0000 UTCWait, what!? How!?
anony
2025-03-09 22:36:53 +0000 UTCDun dun dun!
TheSinful
2025-03-09 22:28:39 +0000 UTC
