Shantae's At It Again
Added 2014-09-27 01:19:09 +0000 UTCTrying my hand at Shantae again to see how things have changed since I submitted my first piece to Eka's Portal: http://aryion.com/g4/view/252155 Still not satisfied with little things here and there, but I hope to have this one done pretty quickly.
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Thanks for the feedback, I've actually fixed this sketch up a lot since I posted it here and most of the changes you suggest have been taken into account. I'm looking forward to posting the complete version soon.
Starcross
2014-09-28 00:32:22 +0000 UTCLooks pretty good to me so far. The only way I could say more is if I knew which stage of vore/digestion Shantae is at. e.g: Part-way through digestion. If she's JUST ingested someone though, you may wish to make the stomach bigger/fuller, depending on the pred/prey size ratio, perhaps even giving her some pudge around the hips, thighs, and butt, if that's your vore/unbirthing style.
JanusDaGuardian
2014-09-27 15:52:45 +0000 UTC
