Fate/Gamer Night - Chapter 12

Don't mention it.

IchaIchaSennin

Ok thank you for clearing that up for me.

Shirou Emiya

I will always post 2 chapters of the story chosen for the current round of updating

IchaIchaSennin

Question will there be two chapters of Fate/Gamer Night per month, or will you post one chapter of Fate/Gamer Night and another of your works per month?

Shirou Emiya

<a href="https://pastebin.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://pastebin.com</a> You just copy your chapter here, and then post the link.

Helixzero

Any suggestion?

IchaIchaSennin

Maybe you could put your chapter on a pastebin and link it here, this way we can either download it or read it online.

Helixzero

There will be two new chapters on here this month (and from now on), while free readers will only get to read this chapter.

IchaIchaSennin

Question will there be two chapter updates from now on for patron or did we pay just to access November update early.

Monstermash

No, those are very excellent points. I shall keep them in mind for the future. Keep them coming. :)

IchaIchaSennin

I think it's the way you put Taiga's point of view in between the lemon. In my personal opinion, it would have been better if you describe the screen through her view. Let her see another side of Shirou that she didn't know exist. But the reason why it's lacking is because of the sudden point of view switching. It's kinda disrupt the passion you see. Also when i imagine Shirou being forceful, the words that pop into my mind is 'grip' or 'press'. As in ' he hold her waist from behind in a tight grip, small yet strong fingers pressing on her soft skin'. I think it would be better if some details like that are put into the lemon, to emphasize how proactive Shirou has become when it comes to sex. But it's just my opinion. I like the way you write and hope you keep your style. Just pick out whatever ideas you like. :)

Lemegeton

Criticism. I like that. In what do you think it's lacking?

IchaIchaSennin

Hmm is it just me or the lemon in this chapter is quite lacking compares to the previous ones ? Not that it's bad or not hawt or anything. Just my personal feeling that's all.

Lemegeton

That sucks. Oh well. You gotta do what you gotta do.

Eternity Smut

Addendum. Due to Patreon renewed policies about NSFW content, I'm definitely NOT going to post my stories here. It will all be handled via downloads from other platforms. Sorry about the inconvenience.

IchaIchaSennin

Is it possible in future to include FB2 format of chapters? Thanks for the good work!

I can easily do both. I'm just afraid Patreon will screw up my formatting.

IchaIchaSennin

I'm not sure about the others, but I would prefer if chapters could just be posted directly here instead of having to download anything. While I know in my head you wouldn't try and sneak in some kind of virus with your chapters or something, I'm just really leery of downloads.

Canadian Tick