Your comments are getting longer and longer π You should shorten them, because I feel bad for not answering you with so much passion and imagination π
I too agree with Christian about the dialogues, these are simple but effective in showing us who is in charge here ^^ Don't blame yourself for not putting a comment on every page, you are already doing quite enough my friend :) I hope you're feeling better and that this mini comic can help comfort you during your recovery! π
Yes, I had to change the number of pages, because I wanted to reorganize some panels for the last pages, it will be visually more pleasant to read like this :)
I hope you'll like the last page, if not don't worry, we'll surely see this duo again in a next chapter :)
Mousticus
2021-09-14 19:49:54 +0000 UTC
But not where he wants ^^
Mousticus
2021-09-14 19:42:00 +0000 UTC
I agree ^^
Mousticus
2021-09-14 19:41:21 +0000 UTC
Thanks a lot :) I didn't look for complicated or very original dialogues here, but as you say, they highlight the connection between them :) Glad you like this page, I hope you like the last one of this chapter too :)
Mousticus
2021-09-14 19:40:54 +0000 UTC
There he goes ;) right where she wants him
Mono
2021-09-13 17:09:40 +0000 UTC
Great! ... The truth is, you left me without any comment, my friend, because here is the comment of comrade Chirstian, I hit very well to everything described, also, I believe, I feel and I see that just like him, you are already giving them that guideline of communication in the dialogues for his good understanding of the mini boy with his stepmother, that as he mentioned it, that word: "connection" and ovbio and we all know who commands and dominates over whom in this situation affectionate and fun (It is a page of 10! ...) I am sorry I could not give my comment on the previous page that I also liked a lot by the way, but hey, I have been somewhat ill with the flu these past days, nothing serious or to worry about In fact, I'm almost out of it, already feeling a little better, the good thing and incidentally, I sincerely tell you that you are on a very good path and you really surprised me because I am very attentive to details always, I just saw, well in the footer written ("8/9") and I see that with that, you are missing / added one more page for our luck and enjoyment / pleasure, of this great sequel to my favorite mini-comic to date: Β‘My Giantess Stepmother !. .. And hopefully you do not forget these 2 endearing characters my friend, the very lucky mini-boy and the beautiful, statuesque and sexy stepmother of my dreams, who in the future will undoubtedly be missed, to see their growth / evolution in your relationship and of course, your next adventure together and I know you will do just as well Even if you don't have anything planned yet. Best regards to you and your team! And that the successes continue for you and yours. Postscript: I can't wait any longer, to see page 09 / final...
2021-09-12 07:29:21 +0000 UTC
Best present for birthday π
2021-09-11 08:43:53 +0000 UTC
Excellent dialogue choices here. We already have a good understanding of how this connection between the two of them works, but this just further shows the power she has over him.
Add in an excellent angle for wonderful idea, and this is probably the best page featuring these two~ Keep up the incredible work and have a nice weekend!