Melina
Added 2022-08-25 06:18:44 +0000 UTC
Comments
Melina is so beautiful...
Rasalgheti
2022-08-25 14:07:02 +0000 UTCThanks for the suggestions, I will make those improvements in my future works.
2022-08-25 07:06:26 +0000 UTCI love how the suit looks with her head still in normal shape, love how he kisses the mask, and I love how he sniffs her boots like a perv. Very erotic, thanks for adding that.đđđ In my opinion, the suiting scene could use another page where he tugs her mask or legs into place. Some pages feel abrupt, missing a transition. You could add a boot on the floor in page 30, add the school uniform outfit on the floor on page 32. Just my two cents suggestions.đ Thanks for the update, SuperHeather.đĨ°
Chilla
2022-08-25 06:31:56 +0000 UTC
