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A Forest Where the Rain Goes Up | 20 |

Don't worry, I won't confuse ya anymore after this page I think x3 

I tried to recreate the feel of an Ozu film with the last frame. I hope you like how this came out! I can imagine the happy wolf sounds ^^

EDIT: Forgot the design  on Legoshi's hoodie. Sorry x3

A Forest Where the Rain Goes Up | 20 |

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Ah the Crack Crack Rip, I see it now. Imo without a "timeline split" or "dream" visual effect for the unrealized actions it won't be very intuitive to understand for most people. But enough about that, I'll let you get on with the plot. :)

Cuddly Canine

Yeah a lil so that Legoshi doesn't get too cuddly and canine happy in front of others xD Not really in his lap more like Legoshi came over to hug him and is leaning towards him. As for the last panel notice the last page and this one, also the black frame instead of the white, it's not actually happening. It's Louis having very conflicting thoughts, and they are literally represented in his head ( and on the page) as another him. In the previous page you can see the two splitting and even in this one on the top left you can see another set of horns of the original Louis still sitting there, same as in the last panel. I wanted to show in a surreal way and without words what is going on in his head ^^

SpiritD

Louis getting pretty handsy there, very cute. Is he on Legosi's lap? Where did Legosi go in the last panel? Just out of frame?

Cuddly Canine

So happy you are excited to see more and thank you, I loved working on the lighting there too!

SpiritD

Aww, these are such wonderful panels here and the lighting in this one is sooo good! I think it's one of your best here. :D I can't wait to see what's next!

Sirom

Fits a Japanese setting for sure :3, happy you like it!

SpiritD

Beastars + Ozu!? Modern meets classic

CountinSheep

Aww thank you so much, I really wanted to make that one atmospheric <3 Really happy to hear it looks good!

SpiritD

Me too, and yeah when a manga has a black outline it usually means a flashback or something not happening in reality/ happening in someone's head.

SpiritD

That's some real stylish lighting you've got going on in that last panel, my dude. Great work!

Vera

I love seeing Louis and Legosi together like that <3 But all of this is not real, right? Since the page has a black frame 0.0

Sascha


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