Helping with grades page 02
Added 2023-02-27 01:02:59 +0000 UTC
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Page 3 - The guys argue about who will be right behind the girls going up ladder. Wong says hey look over there, its Julia's mom. Andy and Jake look over and Wong scoots up ladder with his head under Nat's dress. Like the reward/demerit idea just don't drag out too long so the gang can get to some serious sex.
hal
2023-02-28 23:11:36 +0000 UTCThe story looks familiar so far. Maybe for the studying part there can be a give and get reward system, for every lesson learned successfully the girls get a reward and like wise for not learning, every lesson not learned requires a demerit, i.e. no rewards. Looking forward to seeing more. Thanks for the art.
Robert B.
2023-02-27 19:58:52 +0000 UTCJust noticed Julia and Nat's eyes in 4th panel... the light has turned on...heh. Very nice Mark.
hal
2023-02-27 14:56:43 +0000 UTCLooks good so far. If you are still taking request/ideas. I think a lot of comics skip over the kissing scenes, especially showing a full body of both during those panels. Thought it stuck out in “Under a spell” as being good. Feels like that would be a good pose in this story.
Antonious
2023-02-27 02:49:40 +0000 UTCHeh... doesn't look like a lot of studying is gonna get done...
hal
2023-02-27 02:27:11 +0000 UTCHmmmm . . . Lots of set up action here . . . and it 'looks' like Nat and Julia have figured out the payment issue . . . also! heh . . .. So, 3 guys 2 girls . . . ooooh!
RH
2023-02-27 02:10:09 +0000 UTC
