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Hey there!
I wanted to put together a little survey after finishing the Natsuki sequence. The goal is to help me improve for future projects and make these stories even better!
It would mean a lot if you could take a few minutes to fill it out – your feedback is super appreciated! <3

If there’s anything else you didn’t like or would like to see improved, feel free to let me know via DM or in the comments!

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Absolutely loved it and I am looking to more like it! Story was good backgrounds were great Natsuki was great! The only thing that I thought could be improved that I'm only bringing up because you're asking for improvement is that I wish in the last page there was at least one or two lines of her being genuinely appreciative as sort of a follow through of the "if you really hated it" line in part 7. But that is incredibly minor, and I really want to see more of these!

gbp9

Absolutely LOVED it!! I can’t think of anything I would change: loved how she progressed, how big she got, how different parts would focus on different parts of her body, everything. Really really looking forward to another series like this if you end up doing on!

Toreba


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