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PHOENIXES v15 peek #5

The development of v15 is in its final stages. I just reviewed all the new content and was shocked by how rich it is. I guess I’ve packed too much stuff into this update again. Right now the overall progress is about 85% complete.

I’m still trying to add more content to this update. After going through the new scenes, I feel that Juliana’s story is not erotic enough. I’m thinking about how to improve it.

In v15, Juliana’s story will have significant development, and it will also branch out into a full storyline for a new girl, Theophano. Balancing these two characters’ roles is a challenge—I want the new girl to be captivating enough for everyone to like her, but I don’t want Juliana to be overshadowed. I think I still need some time to polish the script.

Also, I’ve changed Theophano’s hair color to pink to to make her look more distinctive (it might not be obvious in the peek image since it’s a nighttime scene with poor lighting, but her hair is indeed pink). This girl will have a heavy, dark storyline (compared to other storylines we have so far), and I can’t wait for you to experience it.

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Comments

Can't wait to take off.✈️

Goodman Gch

Also, HOOLY DOOLY those CLAWS in image #15 - I love the detail and intricacy there, and how much potential damage they can do if the holder of them changes their intention even slightly... I'm very impressed..!

Awkward Space Man

Personal opinion: Please don't panic/rush about Juliana's story being "not erotic enough" too much. The fact that it's a bit slower of a 'bloom,' in my opinion, feels like it balances out compared to the likes of how quickly some other's relationships develop, and still feels faster than everyone's favourite catgirl's story (which, again, I feel is respectful). ...Maybe it's the culture I'm from, so please take this as an opinion only,* but I feel like "rushing" the two younger character's sexual development, especially since they are both presented as 'interested' rather than "seeking" the exploration up to now, would be walking a really tricky line RE: borderline predatory, manipulative or entrapping behaviour [very sensitive in my background] *Opinion - Just like buttholes, everyone has one, some spout more crap than others. Don't think too hard about that one.

Awkward Space Man


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