A New Dawn - Trailer
Added 2024-09-23 08:04:50 +0000 UTCHere's the finished trailer I mentioned yesterday. Let me know what you think!
Cheers!
Comments
I understand.
WhiteRaven
2024-09-26 06:38:34 +0000 UTCI'd rather it be spoken from a third person point of view. I don't play the game as if I'm her and it being presented as if we are her bothers me. I understand the first part is talking in third person but the last part isn't and it doesn't sit well eith me. I'm changing her not me...
GooPop
2024-09-26 00:51:07 +0000 UTCNo I did only vaguely suggest that with the "change the world, let the lust change you" sentences. Thank you for great feedback!
WhiteRaven
2024-09-25 07:01:30 +0000 UTCI bought Replica and using it for the AI voices. It is actually pretty good but might look into other AI voice labs because it is quite limited.
WhiteRaven
2024-09-25 06:58:59 +0000 UTCYes I could have used more suggestive sentences. There's always trailer no2. Which would be revised to fit this better.
WhiteRaven
2024-09-25 06:58:00 +0000 UTCI like this! I totally forgot to add that part.
WhiteRaven
2024-09-25 06:57:52 +0000 UTCYeah a voice over would be good. Then the words on screen simply emphasise key aspects. Like for instance, don't think you've made much of the fact that it's a choice based storyline. There's a lot of crap out there is hit a button. They don't offer the plates a chance ro evolve the protagonists lusts
Craig Robinson
2024-09-24 04:16:50 +0000 UTCHave a AI program do Boris Karloff's voice for the words. scarier an creepy
Masterdruid
2024-09-23 15:55:46 +0000 UTCYea! No.
Knob
2024-09-23 15:07:06 +0000 UTCHappy to provide or work on wording for you, that's just off the top of my head whilst pulled over at the side of the road. The pics you gave used offer a tantalising glimpse of what the game might offer. The wording however can be much more suggestive.
Craig Robinson
2024-09-23 08:44:34 +0000 UTCI think it's a great idea. Perhaps some sort of suspenseful music though. Beyond that I think the wording could be adjusted to more clearly indicate the premise of the game. To emphasise that the protagonist is an innocent member of the aristocracy at the beginning a virgin (I've often thought the game might benefit from more of a focus particularly at the beginning on an attempt to maintain her virginal status) in a world at war in which both sides have given into decadence, vice, and the gratification of their basest carnal desires. "Will you help our hero maintain her innocence in a world at war characterised by carnal gratifucation, or ensure our reluctant hero quickly overcomes her purity and ruling class morality in favor of appeasing her libidinous lusts? The choice is YOURS!"
Craig Robinson
2024-09-23 08:41:41 +0000 UTC
