Double Trouble - Pg. 14 (Starcross Ch. 4)
Added 2023-08-23 17:45:39 +0000 UTCAs the group awakens, everyone attempts to piece together exactly what's going on.
Comments
loving the latest chapter! Also, your artwork has definitely improved a lot over the last few years!! Looking forward to seeing more!
Ladlegard
2023-08-25 06:01:24 +0000 UTCMax was the one who asked them to meet at the beach Max was the one who informed them of the party, being hosted by the "horniest" sorority on campus Pretty sure lifeguard girl knows Max in some capacity
Ladlegard
2023-08-25 05:59:28 +0000 UTCNice surprise to wake up to, to say the least. Also wondering who the pendant will be passed to once Sarah finds the last (2?) volunteers, and antics to follow. is Dani opting for it, or since it was covered that she was slightly effected by the pendant already, would she even want to use it??
Darth Mario
2023-08-24 23:11:41 +0000 UTCI thought about having the lifeguard's story play out in the chapter after this one, but decided it was ultimately pretty obvious where things were going with her and it didn't make a ton of sense to drag things out. Plus, while I was writing, I realized this encounter makes a very good catalyst for things to come in the story. Also, this whole situation may not be quite as much of a coincidence as it appears. ;)
Starcross
2023-08-23 22:49:55 +0000 UTCWhoa, was not expecting the lifeguard to turn up so soon. I figured she'd be the fourth person up her ass, not the third. Like what's the chances that she ends up at the same party as these two in their Big Belly Witch costume? Besides the plot, I mean. Small town they live in. Chekhov's Gun fell off the shelf and fired in the next chapter here.
CVNeu
2023-08-23 21:32:33 +0000 UTCWelp just gonna have to keep her for interrogation for a while
Dresden Michael
2023-08-23 21:21:45 +0000 UTCOmg, love this. What amazing page
Britney
2023-08-23 18:34:53 +0000 UTCShe definitely got the full experience!
Starcross
2023-08-23 18:00:01 +0000 UTCSeems like she went for the deep dive!
lofis
2023-08-23 17:47:35 +0000 UTC
