The Ins and Outs of Sarah - Pg. 28 (Starcross Ch. 2)
Added 2021-06-10 01:34:14 +0000 UTCWell, that's one way to tell your Mom you have a new girlfriend! Thank goodness it wasn't a video call.
Just letting you all know, there are officially 2 pages left in the chapter now (30 total). Hammered out the script last night, so it's locked in. Don't worry, there'll be more Sarah and Danica in the future, but this little story is almost done.
Comments
Oh god I might have to steal this joke, lol. That's great. :P
Starcross
2021-06-11 23:59:51 +0000 UTC"Yeah mom, Dani and I are really into each other." XD I know, bad pun.
Jiří Švajda
2021-06-11 22:04:39 +0000 UTCIn the interest of clearing up any confusion, her reaction was because they were "doing it" while she was on the phone. Although before this Sarah's mom did not know that the two of them were dating.
Starcross
2021-06-11 00:33:05 +0000 UTCNow I'm curious if moms reaction was because they were "doing it" or that Sarah and Dani are together, part of me is assuming mom knows they are a couple because I'm questioning the "inappropriate" line, great stuff though
Ratsuterra48
2021-06-10 12:42:00 +0000 UTCSarah's definitely going to get a talking to about PDA when she gets home.
Starcross
2021-06-10 04:24:06 +0000 UTCAHAHAHAHAH that was gold pure comedy right there
the dark
2021-06-10 03:48:39 +0000 UTCI love that this implies actual stakes later on! Conflict is the spice of life
Alissa Skips
2021-06-10 03:40:22 +0000 UTCThis is So good. I really love how you wrote that also the illustration is pristine
Britney
2021-06-10 03:29:57 +0000 UTC:P Guess it runs in the family.
Starcross
2021-06-10 02:01:12 +0000 UTCOf all the times to call!
Starcross
2021-06-10 02:00:52 +0000 UTCWorth noting this entire phone call takes place in the span of about 15 seconds, it's hard to think quickly and clearly when you've got a Dani inside you. :P
Starcross
2021-06-10 02:00:24 +0000 UTC“Mom? Now’s kinda the wrong time”
NekoEmily
2021-06-10 01:54:31 +0000 UTCSurprised she didn't mute the call when she realized she couldn't hang up
Shadow Freddy gaming and more
2021-06-10 01:39:03 +0000 UTCSounds like the mom is a bit anal about etiquette.
WilmaWings
2021-06-10 01:37:22 +0000 UTC
