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You are right. Im gonna correct it. Thanks ^^
Zorro Re
2022-03-20 20:32:59 +0000 UTCCouple of possible minor typos: "comming" should probably be "coming", "stunt weapons" is more likely meant to be "stun weapons".
Dewi
2022-03-15 02:56:47 +0000 UTCI love how bunnyboy is so clearly evil, but largely in a moral compass way. He's got that twisted fascination, but he also wants to understand it; there's a sense it's like a game or a puzzle to him, as much as there's also that feeling of 'he'd probably make superinfected if he could get away with it,' too. I love the conversation, too, and how easy it is to follow their body language as much as the narrative. You capture some amazing, movie-like angles, too, especially in the last two frames! I adore the way you do that and how you move everything around, it must be so much more work for you but it really helps a lot with keeping the reader engaged!
Deadhorse
2022-03-07 14:33:33 +0000 UTCThe animosity towards this "doctor" seems quite universal.
Olaf
2022-03-06 08:44:13 +0000 UTCThat is one smug bunny
Amber Dawn
2022-03-06 07:02:47 +0000 UTCSo glad this is out so soon. I was worried I was gonna have to wait a while to find out what happened.
Vebril Eladriandill
2022-03-06 03:51:52 +0000 UTCThat scientist is based
Natasha Frost
2022-03-06 02:00:36 +0000 UTC
