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Sexy Steampunk Babes: Chapter Sixty Four

As William’s aether lightened feet touched down on the academy grounds, his teammates landing with similar bursts of aether around him, he gazed up at the Royal Navy’s airships. They drifted overhead, their sleek hulls silhouetted against the dim mid-morning sky.

Much like his own descent moments ago, many mages of the royal fleet were constantly zipping between the vessels and the still smoking city below – providing aid or working to put out fires.

The fleet had arrived in the early hours, cutting through the night like a blade to once more re-secure the airspace above the capital.

Fortunately for him, that had left him with two uninterrupted hours in which the Jellyfish had held sole dominion over the skies. Which was more than enough time for his people to track down the many Corsairs that had been shot down the previous night and either recover them with float-tanks… or incinerate the remains.

The same couldn’t be said of all the pilots. Living at least. Most had stayed near their downed birds, but some had wandered away from their crash sites for reasons that were as of yet unknown to him.

Possibly to help with the fires?

Either way, being plebians and lacking a handheld radio, he figured it would be at least a day before they managed to get the ear of anyone both willing to listen and with the capability of getting in touch with either Xela or himself so that they might be recovered.

Absolute worst case scenario, they’d need to trek back to Redwater on foot.

Either way, pocket radios are next on the agenda, he thought as he strode towards the academy itself.

He stepped into the academy building that was now acting as an impromptu command post for the Queen, given the sorry state of the palace. It wasn’t an unreasonable choice considering that, in the absence of the palace’s command center, the academy held more communication orbs than anywhere else in the city.

It also happened to conveniently be the location the Queen had been located at, after her and her guard finished hunting down the Lunite commandos that had been left stranded when their airships fled.

His eyes turned toward one airship that had been downed before that happened, the tangled mass of metal having fallen onto a training field after being struck by his corsairs’ rockets.

…That part of the night still puzzled him. From the ‘mid-air crew exchange’, to abandoning ground troops, to the fact that said trio of ships chose to flee the battlefield a full half-hour before the warships over the palace attempted their own retreat.

Something had clearly occurred inside the ships over the academy, and it burned him that he still didn’t know what it was. Not least of all because they hadn’t caught those. Which was… fine, they’d not held the Kraken Slayer samples or recipe… which again begged the question of why they’d not moved to reinforce the ships over the palace?

Putting those thoughts aside, he approached the Palace Guards stationed at the office door. The quartet looked more ragged than he had ever seen them. Their uniforms - normally impeccable - were smeared with blood, soot, and ash.

Theater? Perhaps.

Plenty of time had passed for them to clean up since the Royal Fleet’s return. Was them remaining in this state a deliberate reminder to all that came to see her that the Queen herself had fought in the battle?

One of them stiffened as he stopped before them and spoke. “Lord Redwater, summoned at Her Highness’ earliest convenience.”

William caught the flicker of widened eyes. A hint of awe. A subtle nod as they stepped aside and opened the door. “You may enter. Your party may remain outside.”

He turned, giving his teammates a quick nod, before he stepped through.

Inside, he was relieved to see Griffith present, the woman hunched over a desk stacked high with reports of one kind of another, despite the fact that her arm was in a sling.

Oh, he’d already received confirmation that she was alive, but seeing her in person was a relief all the same. To hear it told, she’d been shot down in the first wave of Shards sent up. She’d survived the experience, obviously, but landed on almost the opposite side of the city from the academy and palace both.

He also wasn’t too surprised to see she was still injured. The academy’s many healers could and did heal worse regularly as a result of training accidents during the school year, but with the city in chaos, he imagined their services healers were needed for more critical cases.

The same would be true for what stockpiles of healing potion were within the city.  Last he had heard, Yelena had sent what supplies of the alchemical substance she could into the city itself to aid the common man and woman. Sure, they’d likely been lower-grade potions – little more than first aid in a bottle - but it was an interesting gesture all the same.

Now, whether it was true compassion or political theater that had motivated her, he couldn’t say. His cynical side leaned toward the latter - but in a feudal society ruled by magic, the opinion of the common man mattered far less than it had back on Earth.

It was entirely possible Yelena merely felt… responsible and was hoping to soothe her guilt.

The woman in question looked better than her guards as she sat on an impromptu ‘throne’ in the middle of the room, but her armor was still on. Cleaned slightly, but its presence gave some weight to the reports that not all the commandos had been rounded up yet.

A woman he could only assume was Tyana Lindholm, admiral of the fleet and second in line to the throne stood beside her. The woman certainly had a presence to her as she stood there, her sharp gaze appraising him.

Like a leaner looking Yelena, he thought. A wolf compared to a lion.

He took a knee and waited.

He didn’t have to wait long. Barely a second.

“Rise, Lord Redwater,” Yelena voice called out without preamble. “For it is I who might otherwise bow to you. For it was in our capital’s darkest hour, you and you alone served to turn the tide - with but a single ship. I, and your nation, will forever be in your debt for that.”

He had a feeling that, even though those words were genuine, the woman speaking them was merely going through the motions, eager to get to why she’d really called him here today.

“Your words are too kind. I merely did my duty,” he said without preamble, eager to do the same.

Something she seemed to recognize, both slumping and smiling slightly as he stood up once more. “Good, because while the immediate threat is gone, we’ve plenty of others looming on the horizon.”

Tyana spoke then, the admiral’s voice commiserating, as she eyed her mother. “Make no mistake, Lord Redwater, there will be time for formal thanks and rewards soon. You have my word as admiral on that.”

Yelena waved her hand dismissively. “For now though, we need to talk. Really talk. Which is why you’re here now while the many others clamoring for my attention are not. Including my many advisors who want to know just how this clusterfuck happened.”

Hmmm.

Did that mean Griffith’s presence was for his benefit? Because while it went without saying that Yelena had a soft spot for the dark elf, the instructor’s role as academy liaison wasn’t nearly weighty enough to be part of this kind of meeting if the queen’s immediate advisors weren’t present.

 “Alright. You want a hats off, honest discussion. I’m game.”

The elf snorted at his audacity, the sound utterly unladylike, even as Griffith and her daughter shot both him and the queen scandalized looks. Yelena ignored them, tapping a gloved finger against the armrest of her chair as chuckles faded and her expression hardened.

“Good, because before we start, let me be clear, I have no intention of threatening you to attain the answers I want.” She leaned backward. “If nothing else, I believe I’ve proven to my own satisfaction that threats against you accomplish little beyond engendering bad blood and causing me a headache. More to the point, I’m reasonably certain that if I were to attempt to seize what I think you have - under the guise of it being important for the ongoing survival of our nation – you’ve already devised some outrageous failsafe to ensure such a move would end poorly for me.”

Huh… that was… new.

And he wasn’t sure he liked it. Respect was nice and all, but he preferred to be underestimated and hard to predict.

William shrugged, keeping his feelings off his face. “You’d not be wrong.”

The admiral tilted her head. “Actually, I’m a little curious. While my mother is quite familiar with your antics, Lord Redwater, my own duties have kept me distant from them.”

He glanced at her, mulling over whether or not he’d answer. Eventually, he decided in the spirit of Yelena’s own opening statement, to be honest.

“Many of my shard production facilities are located near, or in some cases, within my territories newly established Alchemist’s Guild. Their tools of the trade are notoriously volatile. Accidents happen on occasion. And while the scale might vary, the longer I am away from my estate, the more likely it becomes that an accident capable of destroying not just my production facilities but my research facilities in their entirety might occur.”

His voice was even. Dispassionate. As if discussing the weather.

To her credit, the admiral didn’t back down, though some part of her seemed bemused. “Some part of me refuses to believe you’d be so callous with your own holdings. Your work. Your people. Your own life.”

“They believe it,” he said, inclining his head in Yelena and Griffith’s direction. “And they, respectfully, are much more familiar with my… antics.”

Tyana glanced at her mother, who slowly nodded with a resigned expression. The admiral turned to regard him again, an unreadable expression on her face.

“Well, ignoring everything else you’ve already done today, I can say that if nothing else, you’ve impressed me with your audacity cadet.”

“Audacity is another word for bravery, ma’am. If an unflattering one.” William grinned, sharp and unrepentant. “And I can’t be brave for bravery is choosing to act in spite of one’s fear. And I am not afraid. Of death. Or loss of status. Or worldly assets. After all, when one has already seen the other side once, a second visit being premature is hardly a cause for concern.”

Griffith’s expression twisted. “So it’s true, you are…”

“Harrowed?” He turned, his expression turning a little sympathetic. “Yes. Though before you all go thinking the worst, I would remind all of you that I’ve been Harrowed for as long as you’ve known me. For as long as anyone has known me. Including myself.”

Griffith and Yelena both looked unsettled by his words, but the admiral? She looked fascinated.

“As intriguing as that is - and it is - for the moment, the precarious balance of your mind isn’t our primary concern.” The admiral tilted her head slightly, watching him like a scholar studying an unpredictable alchemical reaction. “Not least because we’ve already established that any attempt by me to leverage your condition as grounds for incarceration would see everything my mother hoped to gain from such an act go up in smoke.”

William inclined his head, pleased that had been made clear. Because his status as a harrowed individual did give the woman across from him legal precedent to have him declared unfit for… just about anything.

“I’m glad we can be rational about that,” he said, lips curling into a small smile at the joke.

Yelena exhaled sharply. “So, the question now must be asked. Were those really artificial cores powering those shards last night?”

“Out of curiosity, why are you so certain they were artificial?”

The admiral snorted. “Beyond plebeian flight times being limited to ten minutes?” She leaned forward, fingers drumming against the armrest. “There was no aether when they were shot down. But fire instead. You know who I think of when I think fire? Alchemists. And as you so helpfully pointed out, you have them in abundance.” A pause. “Because they were one of the things you requested from me in exchange for the Kraken Slayer.”

William said nothing, but his silence spoke volumes.

The queen’s voice was quiet, but firm. “You’ve developed an artificial core. I don’t have time for you to play coy. My city is in ruins, my vassal fleet is crippled, and I need power. Military power.”

He exhaled, considering. “You still have the cores for the craft shot down last night. More cores than you had this time last week even, with those undership wrecks.”

Yelena’s expression was unreadable. “I am the first queen in history to have more shard cores than I can use. The issue has always been frames. And I have even fewer now. Shards are easier to produce, but at every turn, noble houses resist me - because every frame shaved down feels like the death of a dynasty to them.”

William nodded. It was an old battle - one that, given recent events, seemed increasingly outdated.

“And as we’ve established, shards can kill airships just fine,” the queen continued. “Given enough numbers. And the right armaments. In the past, that meant expensive alchemical cocktails or slow-to-replace enchanted munitions. Which is why cannons remained the weapon of choice for anti-ship combat as it allowed for captains to bring down airships  with conventional ammunition.”

Her gaze pinned him. “But the Kraken Slayer changes that. No more do we need to see entire generations’ worth of enchanting time be used for a single battle. Nor small fortunes spent on expensive alchemical reagents for a similar effect. You proved as much last night. Though only those of us in this room know that you weren’t using enchanted munitions.”

William let the silence hang.

“Fair enough,” he finally said. “If I’m to part with the method behind artificial cores, I’ll be wanting something in return.”

Yelena steepled her fingers. “Name it.”

He met her gaze evenly. “I want the Blackstone lands. You know, once they’re all dead.”

The temperature in the room seemed to drop.

Tyana smirked. “Audacious. Laying claim to territory we’ve not even won yet. A dukedom at that.”

William smirked. “As we’ve established, I’m not afraid of aiming high. I either succeed and reap the reward, or I fail… at which point I’ll be dead. At which point, there’s no point in worrying about it.”

The admiral let out a quiet laugh. “I wonder if that’s a harrowed thing or a you thing?”

William shrugged. “Given I’ve always been harrowed, I doubt there’s much of a difference.”

Griffith looked like she wanted to interject, but Yelena cut her off.

“Aren’t you planning to marry the Whitestone girls?” the queen asked, her tone unreadable. “With your aid, the eldest is set to become the next Lady Summerfield, with you as her consort. Now, if in addition to that, you seize control of the Blackstone title, I’d simply be trading one threat to my rule - New Haven and Blackstone - for another: Blackstone and Summerfield.”

“You’re not wrong,” William admitted. “Though, if it puts your mind at ease, I’d gladly swear a geass that I have no designs on the Lindholmian throne. Nor any desire to see my descendants sit upon it.”

The silence that followed that statement was palpable.

The gauntlet had been thrown.

“Done,” Yelena said at last. “Though I certainly won’t be announcing that as your reward until after the war starts in earnest.”

Which, given the state of the Royal Vassal fleet, would likely be sooner rather than later.

William inclined his head. “Which means that should the day come where I call in that favor, this conversation might never have happened should that prove more convenient for you? Words are as wind after all.”

Yelena’s expression darkened, while Griffith shot him a scandalized look. “Are you questioning my word?”

“Merely your survival instincts.” He smiled. “When we first met, you suggested tying me to an interrogation chair so as to gain  access to the secret of the Kraken Slayer. The only reason you didn’t follow through on that threat was because I installed failsafes to protect myself against it.” Specifically, he’d ostensibly given the secret to the Kraken Slayer to a third party, with instructions for them to release it to the Queen’s enemies should he go missing for a prolonged period.

He hadn’t actually done that. It was a bluff. The parchment that currently sat in the vaults of the Dwarvish banking clans held little more than the recipe for a particularly good chicken soup. Because even were the worst to happen to him, he’d sooner see the weapon in the hands of his torturers than a band of slavers.

Still, as a threat, it was an effective one. And it set a precedent.

Which was why his gaze was steady as he regarded the Queen. “The reason you’re not threatening me now? It’s the same.

The queen’s fingers drummed against the armrest. “So what? You want my promise in writing?”

He shook his head. “We’ve established that if I can’t rely on the power of public opinion should you renege on your promise, there’s exactly one other method that’s guaranteed to be binding. And given I’m already swearing on it. Well, it only seems fair that…” He trailed off deliberately.

Yelena blinked, then let out a quiet, disbelieving laugh. “You’re insane.”

William grinned.

“…Fine.” The queen said abruptly. “I’ll swear your oath. But I want more than just artificial cores. I want all of it. That includes whatever method you used to make Kraken Slayer powered repeating bolt-throwers.”

Ah, so she’d figured out the concept behind gunpowder weaponry. He supposed that shouldn’t have been too surprising. The bolt-bow already existed after all. And he’d practically spelled out the idea of chemical propellent when he ‘came up with’ the spell-bolt in his first year of the academy.

“Your Majesty-!” Griffith began, alarmed.

The admiral, however, remained silent. Watching. Calculating.

Yelena exhaled slowly, hand raised to cut off the dark elf.

“I nearly died last night,” she said, voice softer now. “Many of our people did die last night. If the price of keeping that from happening again is risking my magic on a deal I intend to fulfill, then so be it.” She fixed him with a sharp look. “But, I repeat, I want it all. Everything.

William inclined his head. “Of course. The method behind everything currently aboard the Jellyfish, or present in my territory, will be yours.”

Inwardly, he grinned, positively gleeful.

The deal was struck.

And war was coming.

At last.

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“Are you sure about this, chieftess?” Olga asked, arms crossed, her sharp gaze scanning the disapproving faces of their tribemates as they stood on the Blood Oath’s deck, watching over the rail at the view below.

The former Royal Navy woman turned free orc wasn’t blind to the tension hanging in the air like the charge before a storm.

Yotul, for her part was ignoring it, instead watching as the rag clad humans strode stiffly down the ramp of the newly acquired and newly renamed Green Fury, their movements rigid under the watchful eyes of orcish warriors, each armed to the tusks.

The moment was not one anyone could call friendly, even if the orcs were technically freeing the women.

It was understandable though. Her free orcs hated humans as a rule of thumb, and once it became clear that her people were rebels from the North and had been working with the Lunites to attack the capital, the humans opinions of their ‘saviors’ had likewise shifted.

There was just too much bad blood there.

Orcs had fought for their freedom for generations and humans had fought against them for just as long. Said rivalry had existed since long before the elves had ever deigned to invade.

The enmity between their peoples ran deep, and she knew full well that many of her comrades would rather have put these captives to the sword - temporary enslavement as a point of sympathy be damned.

Then of course, there was the information they were letting walk free. Information that would soon make its way to Lindholm at large.

Releasing these prisoners meant spreading news of orcish involvement in the attack. Which wasn’t bad, but would certainly garner more notoriety for her people. More importantly, it meant word would soon spread that the Free Orcs had seized three underships.

The Blackstones would start hunting them in earnest once more once that secret got out.

…Then again, the Lunites would likely spill that secret themselves once captured. So that reason to see the prisoners dealt with in a more permanent fashion was moot from the get go.

Probably.

“No,” Yotul admitted at last. “I’m not sure. But we’re doing it anyway.”

Olga raised a brow.

Yotul exhaled, watching the last of the humans vanish into the forest beyond. “I’ve lost my taste for spilling the blood of those without the means to strike back. I’d sooner save my wrath for worthier targets.”

There was also the fact that there had been orcs amongst those humans who had just left. Some had chosen to join up with her people, but many had remained with their former crews. Some might argue that they were even more deserving of death than the humans themselves, race traitors that they were.

Again though, Yotul had lost her taste for it.

Fortunately for her, despite some grubbling and glaring, there’d been no argument against her decree to see the former crews of the underships freed.

None would gainsay her. Not now. Sure, once her position had been fragile - in the lead-up to the attack, her rivals in the tribe had watched her like a predator eyeing wounded prey. But with two more underships now under her command? Her standing had never been stronger.

Hopefully, that respect would carry over to the tribal council when she arrived at their war camp with replacements for the very ships they had so shortsightedly lost.

Either way, the Blackstone Demons would soon be reminded of the might of the Orcish people. They thought the war was at an ebb, that their successful ambush of the former Free Orc fleet had broken their enemy’s back.

Yotul intended to show them just how wrong they were.

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The Empress regarded the severed head of the noble responsible for this most recent debacle, her expression unreadable.

None among her command staff so much as flinched at the execution - likely not even the woman herself before the blade swiped out.

“Clean that up,” she said, voice cool, dispassionate as she flicked the blood from her blade before resheathing.

The servants moved swiftly, dragging the body away with the efficiency of long practice. Another knelt beside the bloodstained marble floor, working methodically with a cloth to erase the last evidence of failure.

Such was the price of incompetence in the Khanate.

Especially a failure of this magnitude.

Duchess Slenn’s gambit had consumed vast amounts of resources and manpower - both of which would be sorely needed once winter passed and the summer offensives began anew.

Oh, the Khanate wouldn’t fold - nothing so dramatic as that. The empire had stood unchallenged for generations; the loss of a few ships and commandos wouldn’t change that.

But it was a loss.

And now, the Lunite Empire was on the back foot in the Great Game.

A minor setback, perhaps, but an irritating one nonetheless.

The only silver lining to this whole ill-thougth expedition was that she had little to fear in the way of reprisal. The Lindholmians would know exactly who had orchestrated the attack, but their hands were tied. Domestic strife plagued their lands - enough that they could ill afford a military campaign against her in return.

Just as she couldn’t bring her full might to bear on the wayward colony without the Solites seizing the opportunity, the Lindholmian Queen couldn’t march on Lunite territory without her own northern duchesses smelling weakness.

And that - more than any other reason - was why the Empress had allowed the dearly departed duchess’s attack to go ahead in the first place. If the rumors surrounding the Kraken Slayer’s power had proven true, the rewards would have been immense.

The risks in the event of a failure, however?

Tolerable.

With a sigh, she turned back to the great map sprawled across the table before her, watching as one of her advisors discreetly plucked the silver undership token from its position on the Lindholmian coast.

Her gaze lingered for a moment.

Then, with a flick of her fingers, she gestured to the western front.

“We shift our focus westward,” she said, voice decisive. “We have wasted enough energy on distant colonies when the true war is right in front of us.”

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“Seems your words were prophetic,” Duchess Blackstone remarked as Tala came to a halt before her desk.

Tala inclined her head. “Pardon, Mother?”

“The capital has been attacked,” Eleanor Blackstone said, voice smooth but laden with intent. “A fleet of underships - of remarkably similar design to those employed by the orcs and under development by us - laid waste to the royal vassal fleet and much of the capital itself while the Royal Navy was being led on a wild wyvern chase.”

Tala’s breath caught. “The capital?” Alarm shot through her. “How many dead? How bad was the damage? Was the academy attacked?”

She still had friends there after all.

Her mother merely arched an eyebrow. “Does it matter?”

Tala’s jaw tightened, but she said nothing.

“Yelena has just lost nearly a quarter of her fighting strength - more, if we consider the dubious allegiances of her southern allies,” Eleanor continued smoothly. “Faith in her has never been more shaken. While I doubt this alone will drive her southern duchesses to side with us, a number of counties in our path may well reconsider their allegiances if we march now.”

Tala’s pulse quickened. So it was finally happening.

“I’m surprised the queen survived at all if the damage is as severe as you imply,” Tala rallied. “Did the Royal Fleet manage to return in time?”

Eleanor frowned. “No. Her daughter was as slow as ever. Our ‘queen’ might well have perished - if not for the timely intervention of a single ship.”

Tala blinked. “A single ship?”

“A royal vassal vessel that managed to avoid the initial ambush by virtue of being tardy to the sortie.”

Tala resisted the urge to shake her head at the dark irony inherent in that.

Still - for one ship to turn the tide…

“It seems our Brimstone is no longer the sole carrier in Lindholmian airspace,” Eleanor continued, her tone cool. “And worse still - not the largest either. My sources estimate that this ‘Jellyfish’ that swooped in to save the day housed thirty to forty shards within its hangars.”

Tala’s stomach clenched. “Forty?!”

That was nearly double the Brimstone’s complement.

“Which house did it hail from?” she asked. “I wasn’t aware any of the royal vassals were even thinking about developing a carrier.”

Her mother’s gaze sharpened, her voice heavy with pointed disapproval. “Redwater.”

Tala’s breath caught.

“Seems your former fiancé is maintaining his track record for both innovation and irritation.” Eleanor’s lips curled, though it was not a smile. “If nothing else, he’s been busy.”

Tala barely heard the words. Her stomach had sunk.

“Still,” Eleanor continued, as if the revelation was of no real concern, “this at least proves that last year’s failures were not entirely your own. The boy is a newly risen noble - he should barely have his affairs in order, let alone be constructing the largest carrier the world has ever seen and a shard fleet to crew it.”

Her voice turned cool, calculating.

“No, if we needed proof that he was little more than the Queen’s catspaw, we now have it. If nothing else, the fact that his shards were launching javelins with enchantments potent enough to beggar an older house for generations proves that his house is little more than an extension of the Crown.” She paused. “Likely sold himself into her service to escape your marriage.”

The words stung, but Tala didn’t let it show.

Fool,” Eleanor muttered, almost to herself. “Willingly placing a leash about his neck in an attempt to slip another.”

Tala said nothing, eyes on the floor.

Her mother’s eyes gleamed. “Still, this means the time to strike is now.”

Tala hesitated. “Now? Right after the attack? You have no interest in who orchestrated it? It could be the continental powers in preparation for an invasion.”

“Oh, undoubtedly.” Eleanor waved a dismissive hand. “They were likely the ones who supplied the orcs with their initial designs - certainly they’re the only ones with the resources and desire to orchestrate something of this scale.” A contemplative pause. “Though to what end, I couldn’t say.”

Tala watched as her mother’s fingers tapped idly against the polished wood of her desk.

“Perhaps they hoped to take both Yelena and a number of heirs hostage to force a surrender from us?” Eleanor mused. “If so, either the Solites or the Lunites must be getting desperate.” A quiet chuckle. “Still, such a plan might have worked if half the country weren’t already eager to see Yelena replaced.”

Tala’s gut twisted at the almost casual way her mother dismissed the continental threat.

Had victory in her youth made her too assured of a repeat in the future? Had she convinced herself that history would repeat itself?

The young woman swallowed that thought down.

“So what’s the plan?” she asked instead.

Eleanor’s gaze sharpened.

“We rally the fleet. Gather the admirals. Our vassals, too. It is clear the capital is unsafe and in need of protection in the event of a ‘follow up attack’.” A smirk played at her lips. “Protection that the Royal Navy has proven itself incapable of providing. So the North, as ever, shall step in.”

And there it was.

Their excuse for marching on the capital.

Paper-thin.

But then – good excuses did not win wars.

Fleets did.

And there was no denying that House Blackstone had the bigger fleet.

Tala’s lips curled, slow and sharp as a smile slipped over her face. Oh, she had her doubts about all this, but she couldn’t deny her joy at her overdue reckoning arriving sooner than she’d hoped.

“As you command, my duchess,” she bowed, before turning to leave.

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AN: That's the epilogue of book two.

Now, I've no doubt many of you will want to make requests to see this or that scene before the end of the book. Feel free to make those requests in the comments. I may add them sometimes during my break if *I* feel they won't be covered later or add to the ending.

Trevayne, you may make 'one' comment and if you have other ideas you may reply to that initial comment :D

Hope ya'll enjoyed the epilogue and thanks for your patience. There'll be no charge next month as I'll be taking a break while I prepare for the next book and getting Sect ready for Amazon.
 

There'll be a vote on which series the next book should be based in sometime in the next two weeks or so.

Comments

Came across a V18 engine... for irl large ships. Theoretically an Inline 9 Cylinder engine can be balanced and thus a V 18 cylinder engine something that could be... entertaining if shoved into an aether ship.

MarakEvans

Does anybody else think Yelena screwed up big time? She should have gone after the Al'Hundra cores because with a thousand tons or so of dead kraken it was obvious that the kraken was gone and her cores were up for grabs. That said, Yelena should have stopped there until she had built or otherwise acquired the hulls to use those cores. Instead, she went full steam ahead killing krakens and getting more cores. This merely put a bigger and bigger target on her back. Even if it was known that the Krakenslayer was a limited use magic device with X charges that have been completely used up, she would still be a target. Not only is she the first Queen of Lindholm to have many more cores than hulls to put them in, she probably has more readily portable wealth than any monarch in planetary history. I can see why she did it. It is hard not to pick up all that wealth when it is easily obtainable, but it was still a mistake.

Trevayne

IIRC Blue is taking a one month break and we are not getting charged. He is doing this to edit Sect for an Amazon release and to prepare for the next book. I think it is going to be another steam punk book and it will probably start appearing around the last week in March or the first week of April.

Trevayne

how long is the break? I thought there'd be more chapters...

Shelbee Nicoles

We know that this world is different from OTL because of the presence of magic, both that granted by the Fae and the aether that is produced by mithril cores and shards. The other big difference is the weather. Either this world has much milder weather than OTL Earth, or they have very good weather prediction mages. The great natural enemy of airships on Earth was bad weather. The US built two naval dirigibles, the USS Akron and USS Macon. They used helium, so the flammability issue from using hydrogen was avoided. Both, however, were destroyed by bad weather. That problem doesn't seem to exist on Lindholm. They used sky towers as moorings instead of weatherproof dirigible hangars. They wouldn't do that if they thought storms might be an issue.

Trevayne

I can understand wanting some ambiguity, so perhaps a map without a scale. I would certainly appreciate a map with the territories labeled. I can look at the map and I think I know where all the duchies are, but I could be wrong. Just identifying all the locations would be useful.

Trevayne

It's not really a loophole, Yelena wouldn't ask for Williams future innovations because William would never agree to it. Wouldn't be much different from William becoming her pawn at that point.

Joshua Cooper

So I just did my first reread of sexy steampunk babes. All in all I enjoyed it as expected. (For book 2) Especially the beginning, the marlinne-william plot, the orc plot and the battle finale. In the middle part though things felt a little bit less well paced. At times the scenes, while logical, felt like hitting the nessecary steps for William to aquire his fleet. I'm honestly not sure where we are in his second school year with the time skip and all. Most of all I felt it in the characters tho. I missed Williams team and the academy dynamic as it was in book 1 and characters like the twins, the princesses and his sister could have used a bit more fleshing out. And with the civil war coming up, there might be hardly time for that now. So while I have some scenes I would like to see (convo and sexy time with Griffith, convo with the twins, moms reaction) I wouldn't be against sneaking in some chapters in the middle :D. Anyway, great book, can't wait to read more

XavHD

I wonder if we are going to find out what happened to Cynthia. Presumably she got onto one of the four airships from the palace group that were shot down by the Corsairs. She would not have been on the one rammed by the Jellyfish because that one was the sacrificial rear guard and was not going to be getting away. We know she is a mage and could have escaped via a flightsuit. That said, she would be trying to evade capture in Lindholm territory where everyone is really annoyed with the Lunite scum that badly damaged the capital.

Trevayne

That is way too open ended. Why should William agree to it? He is already offering to help her win her current war and turn over the tech. Also, she has no idea what is possible. Maybe William can come up with more stuff, maybe he can't. Edit: The bigger problem is it is nearly an out of context problem for Yelena. She has already seen that he has invented a lot. He is probably the greatest inventor, harrowed or not, of the past few centuries. We know that his inventions are a small fraction of what he could do with sufficient resources. She has no way of knowing that.

Trevayne

I'm disappointed Yelena didn't catch William inserting his "the methods for everything I *currently* have" loophole into their deal. I thought she'd be smart enough to include his future innovations into her agreement, especially knowing that he is harrowed so probably has more ideas yet to come.

Jacob

He might be deliberately leaving it ambiguous so he doesn’t have to work out distances and whatnot until he knows how it will affect future plot lines.

22junk

Don't we all?

Found&Lost

You just like not-quite-human mommies.

Morpheus

One of the many things I like about this chapter is we are finally beginning to get an idea of who at least some of Yelena's daughters are. We were introduced to the concept that she had several daughters and would be willing to marry any or all of them to William in the first book, but IIRC we didn't get even a single name until Admiral Tyana was introduced in chapter 57. In chapter 62, William mentions another daughter, Yelena's heir, Palmer. In this chapter, William finally gets to meet Tyana and we we get to see some of her reactions to him. It is interesting that instead of the discomfort that Yelena and Griffith are feeling about William's admission of being harrowed, Tyana looks fascinated. It looks like Yelena is running Lindholm as sort of a family business, with Tyana as admiral commanding the Royal Navy and Palmer as heir and chief deputy. Palm,mer may also be the foreign minister. We still don't know the names of any of Yelena's other children, or even how many there are. I suspect that she has at least 2-3 more, with one serving as finance minister and another as effectively home secretary. There may also be one serving as minister of magical affairs. Looking forward to finding out more about them in the future. Now that the existence of some of William's secrets has been revealed and he has become a national hero, the extreme secrecy can be relaxed. Queen Yelena doesn't need to route all her communications to him through Griffith.

Trevayne

Blue I noticed you have a drawing some time ago of the lands of this world. Any thoughts on mapping out the regions and which territory is rulled by whom? I'd love to see the world mapped out in that detail. Thanks !

MS

My understanding was that the orcs were the native population of Lindholm and the humans moved in later, by sea. Then the elves developed airships and conquered everybody. I think most of the dwarves are in the mainland as well. It gets complicated because I am not sure any of the populations actually evolved here. I expect they were all magically transported on purpose or by accident from their native worlds to this one.

Trevayne

Huh, my reply ended up as it's own comment. That quote doesn't imply that Humans ever invaded Lindholm. It only states that the Orcs and Humans had fought each for generations before the elven invasion, and that the Humans were winning by then. As far as we know, the world only has two continents, the Elven one, with Lunites, Solites, and wood elves. And Lindholm, which is home to Humans, Orcs, and Dwarfs. Elves were transplanted into Lindholm as part of the conquest, while populations of Humans and Orcs ended up on the Elven continent due to the slave trade or migrants, not as a native population. There is nowhere the Humans could have invaded Lindholm from. Instead, it's likely both Humans and Orcs are native to the South and North of Lindholm respectively, and fought each other for dominance of the island. I fight the Humans mostly won.

Andrew Lechner

Replying to @Random Information and @Andrew Lechner - The Doolittle raid wasn't stupid, it was a reasonable risk to conduct an attack to boost morale. They expended a few B-25s to get a big morale boost, even if it did not do much material damage. That said I fully agree that it would be a foolish thing for Lindholm to try now. They have to deal with the Blackstones first before they do anything in response to the Lunites. I disagree with the idea of trying a pre-emptive attack into Blackstone territory. There is just too much risk of not having those ships available for the main battle. The big problem is there is very little long range scouting available. They may know that the vassal airships are going to a mustering point, but they don't know where that point is and while airships are large, they are very small compared with thousands of square miles of sky. The only place the two fleets can guarantee finding each other is at the respective capitals. The RN wants to defend near its capital so they can use the ground-based shards as well as their own. Thus they should wait at the capital and fight nearby so that wrecks will not fall on the capital.

Trevayne

Pretty sure blue stated that the orcs had ruled all of Lindholm until the humans arrived. There was ongoing warfare between the two until the airship using elves came out and conquered everything. Then the Elven empire collapsed into the civil war between the Solites and Lunites and Lindholm seized its chance to be independent. It sounds like the analogy would be the orcs are like the Navie Americans and they have been slowly pushed back into wilderness areas by the arrival of the humans and later elves. The Blackstones are the humans closest to the remaining free orc areas, which are forested mountain wilderness. Edit: Here is the quote. Orcs had fought for their freedom for generations and humans had fought against them for just as long. Said rivalry had existed since long before the elves had ever deigned to invade.

Trevayne

Edit: this comment is a reply to another comment accidentally posted as it's own comment. I would note that there is no indication that Orcs once controlled all of Lindholm. Humans specifically have been mentioned as natives to the island, who ruled before the elven conquest. Judging by by how the Blackstones were in the Sunlands even back then, the free Orcs had likely already been pushed into the northern mountains by that point.

Andrew Lechner

As fun as that would be, it's a pretty terrible idea at this point. The Lunites suffered the total loss of all forces used in the attack, as such, they still have no idea about William's tech. Any attack into Lunite territory has an intolerable risk of even one or two corsairs getting shot down, and the engines or weaponary being discovered by Lunite salvagers. Not the mention that any corsair lost would now be unavailable to Blackstones, or that the Blackstones could launch their assault while the Jellyfish is still conducting the raid. No, any retaliation against the Lunites must wait until after the Blackstones are delt with. On that note, a preemptive raid on the Blackstone fleet, either while it's in transit to the capital or even while it is still gathering in the north, could prove incredibly successful. Those explosive rockets are the perfect tools for hunting down lone Blackstone vassal ships while they are still on route to the main fleet.

Andrew Lechner

There is an interesting discussion on the nature of war in this world. Here is what Blue said back in chapter 2. Looking for all the world like a Civil War era ironclad rebuilt from the ground up to fly, even from this distance he could see dozens of portholes for its gas-powered cannons dotted across the things gleaming metal hull. To the rear of it, two powerful rear-mounted propellers pushed it through the blue skies above. Every now and then, small bursts of blue-green aether burst from the sides as its many aether ballasts corrected the ship’s altitude. And emblazoned proudly across the stern was the symbol of House Ashfield, a white raven over a field of darkness, purple and orange flecks spattered across the periphery. Despite himself, William could admit that it made for an intimidating sight. While all things had their place in the line of battle, it was an undeniable fact that airships stood at the apex. They were the ultimate expression of power in this world, able to destroy entire armies with impunity from the safety of the clouds. Able to cross an entire continent in a matter of days. In a world of swords and bows, the only thing that could realistically challenge an airship’s might was another airship. Although the politics is feudal and the tech is sort of 19th century with airships and crystal communications, I don't see how the warfare can be. I don't see a role for say medieval or even 18-19th century armies in a world where if they go into the field, they can get destroyed by airships and can not do anything in return to the airships. This suggests that the role of land forces is more a mix of police/security and commando/raiding roles. They can keep order and go into buildings or underground areas where airships can't go. However, massed armies are not seen in the field because they are hopelessly vulnerable to airships. This can work because of the feudal nature of warfare. The peasants work for the local lord. If the lord changes due to a war, they don't stop working out of loyalty to the previous lord. They keep working because they don't want to starve. The warfare between the Blackstones and the orcs is different. It is a race war where the Blackstones want to kill or enslave every orc to get revenge for everything the orcs have ever done to them. The orcs want to kill or drive away every Blackstone human. The whole big island/small continent of Lindholm was originally orcish territory. The orcs' dream situation is that all the humans are driven out and all of Lindholm is theirs. That isn't going to happen and hopefully, Yelena can reach a peace where the orcs keep what they have, with maybe some additional Blackstone territory and slavery is no longer allowed. I mention this because given the Blackstone airships and their expressed hatred of the orcs, I am trying to figure out why they haven't killed them all. Why haven't they tried to burn the forests and every field of crops they can find? How do the orcs survive? I expect the orcs are still alive because they are better adapted to the northern mountains and can forage and hunt, along with raising crops in smaller patches hidden in the forests and hills. They may have underground mushroom farms as well. The real problem with trying a modern-style war is if it is population against population, the side that wins in the air can win on the ground by killing off most of the opposing population. Then they can deal with whatever is left with their smaller ground forces.

Trevayne

Replying to @Katz - Remember, these are not OTL dirigibles, these are armored airships using magical gas for lift. The Ork airship in the story was a captured Lindholm airship with about 300 Orks on board. If the Blackstone fleet has 40 airships with a crew of 200-300 each, that is 8,000 - 12,000 people. Assuming half are available as a landing force, those airships can put down 4,000-6,000 troops to keep order. For that matter, once they have defeated the defending airships, they can use an airship shuttle to bring in more troops. They aren't going to march, say 50,000 men over hundreds of miles of countryside for weeks or months when they can fly them in in days. Especially since, if they haven't gotten all the opposing airships, those troops can easily be killed by any hostile airship that comes by. The only way to avoid that is to detail airship escorts to fly over the marching troops for the weeks to months of their march. Much easier to just use the airships as a relay to fly them over or use nautical ships to move them along the coast. Also, Blackstone thinks of this as a hostile takeover. It is a feudal style, replace the rulers and the peasants will go along conquest. It is not the nation of Blackstone fighting the nation of the rest of Lindholm. Blackstone fully expects to win the airship battle, kill and/or capture Yelena, and then replace her dynasty with the Blackstones. They expect the people will go along with this because that is how things work in feudalism. The war with the orcs is different. That is a race war where Blackstone wants to kill or enslave every orc. The orcs want to kill or drive away every Blackstone human. The whole big island/small continent of Lindholm was originally orcish territory. The orcs' dream situation is that all the humans are driven out and all of Lindholm is theirs. That isn't going to happen and hopefully, Yelena can reach a peace where the orcs keep what they have, with maybe some additional Blackstone territory and slavery is no longer allowed. The real problem with trying a modern-style war is if it is population against population, the side that wins in the air can win on the ground by killing off most of the opposing population. Then they can deal with whatever is left with their smaller ground forces. Good point about the orcs. I expect the orcs are still alive because they are better adapted to the northern mountains and can forage and hunt, along with raising crops in smaller patches hidden in the forests and hills. They may have underground mushroom farms as well. I mention this because given the Blackstone airships and their expressed hatred of the orcs, I am trying to figure out why they haven't killed them all. Why haven't they tried to burn the forests and every field of crops they can find? How do the orcs survive?

Trevayne

The Doolittle raid was stupid in ww2, and it would be really stupid now. Focus on current enemies attacking you - revenge can wait until you are strong enough to mete it out.

Random Information

Absolutely not enough troops on an airship to hold much of anything. Maybe in feudalism works if you beat the other big guy you become the big guy through homage. Peasants and commoners don't care, new boss same as old boss. But occupying a fully hostile population with just troops on an airship? Not doable. Hell, maybe airships can float, but they still need supply lines. Run out of cannonballs, then what? Run out of food, then what? Run out of WATER, then what? Your guys get ambushed while going to shake down food or water from the local population. What do you do as an airship captain? Bomb who? Bomb randoms to increase resistance? The way the Blackstones did with the free orcs, having had GENERATIONS of fighting, and no closer to 'winning'? The way war is so far depicted is very 'chivalrous'. One to one mage duels, achieve submission through defeating the other 'army' and homage and treaties. Eleonor is absolutely not ready for a doctrinal shift in which everyone resists, despite them being in exactly the same situation with the free orcs, and not achieving anything.

Katz

Replying to @katz - Sure, but they don't need to march across the land. They aren't a conquering army that travels across the surface to capture a city, they are troops carried by airship that serve as occupation military police or a raiding force to go into buildings or tunnels where airships can't go. The firepower and the ability to occupy is in the airships themselves. The captured territory does what the airship commander wants or else. Remember, air forces can't hold territory in our world because they don't have persistence ( they can't hang around indefinitely) and they can't easily put people on the ground to go into buildings. Neither of these things is true for airships in this world. They can stay over a conquered city indefinitely and can put troops on the ground to go into buildings or tunnels. The bigger point is that there are no armies that march across the land to take territory. Any army that tries will be destroyed by airships that it can not defend against. This also means there are no front lines in the conventional sense. Any attempt at building, say a trench line, can be destroyed by airship or out flanked from the air. Warfare resembles naval warfare conducted between groups of islands more than it resembles the land warfare in our world.

Trevayne

Airforce cannot hold territory. They must have some loyal ground force, otherwise they get to the capital and then what? "We're in charge or else we bomb you"? Without a ground force to actally enforce the law and will, then you don't have a takeover.

Katz

No, it was big beautiful sexy model Amazon warriors with the sex drive of a teen boy who just hit puberty!!!. God i love shi'vati women.

MS

100% yes

MS

Fair enough, but the war was over when it started. You just signed up for a monster size, no lube.

Found&Lost

My first story was about big purple orc ladies dominating Earth. You tell me :D

Blue Fishcake

"Just as she couldn’t bring her full might to bear on the wayward colony without the Solites seizing the opportunity, the Lindholmian Queen couldn’t march on Lunite territory without her own northern duchesses smelling weakness." Scratch all my previous suggestions, a short short story involving Plebian pilots conducting a Dolittle Raid on these asshats is necessary

DMR1

Not all of them. :)

Trevayne

Trevayne Immediately does the exact opposite and makes sure to reply to every single comment in the comment section 🤣

Spintool

My big question to Blue. Okay, you just struggled to get through 3 combat chapters alone and next book starts with a civil war? Are you a masochist?

Found&Lost

As the saying goes, there is no kill like overkill. A Des Moines would be great, but he has to make the ammo. He could probably get 2-3 Corsairs worth of rockets for one salvo of 8" ammo.

Trevayne

Good idea. The outside perspective I would like to see is Olzenya's sister, the one who got her sent to the academy as a royal house cadet. I expect she is cursing her good fortune as she will probably rise pretty high due to her membership in team 7, something that was definitely not expected. IIRC Olzenya wants to be the captain of the Jellyfish. I think she may well do even better if William needs a reliable noble to fill an empty count ship in Blackstone.

Trevayne

Thinking about another possible motivation for the attack, Blackstone ignored the mithril cores. Given Al'Hundra and the other Grandma that have been killed, I expect Lindholm has more cores awaiting ships than it had ever had, probably 20-30. That is a lot of wealth, mire than enough to attract a "pirate" raid.

Trevayne

An interesting question is what else the Blackstones have been developing. We have seen that they created the Brimstone, the first airship designed and built specifically as a dedicated carrier. Given that, I think they are focusing on shards as the future of air warfare, although they don't have anywhere near William's information resources. I do wonder if they have tried to think up some better defences against shard attacks. The Lunites only had pivot guns along with their main guns. The latter can't begin to traverse fast enough to hit a shard. I would expect to see another talk in the next book before the battle between William, Yelena, Tyana, and Yelena's spymaster about what is known about anti-shard defenses in general and Blackstone's in particular. I expect things like multiple shard autocannon mounts (like an OTL quad-.50) on Blackstone airships and possibly some provisions for firing enchanted fireball or lightning bolt rounds from the main guns at shards. They may not be able to track them laterally, but they may still be able to try to put shells into incoming shard formations. They have been the most advanced of the ducal navies in Lindholm for years and have been honed by the war with the orcs. I doubt that they would place so much emphasis on shards without thinking how to counter an opponent who also uses shards.

Trevayne

I doubt he will try a pre-emptive attack. It is better for political reasons to make sure it is absolutely clear that it is the Blackstones and their allies who are rebelling and conducting a treasonous attack on the crown and its forces. They also don't have the time. The Blackstones have just decided they will mobilize and attack. William and Yelena expect it , but they don't know yet that it is happening. They are also tied up with damage assessment and recovering from the attack on the capital. They also have military reasons to wait. Every additional day is time for William's people to make new rockets, fuel, and spare parts. He may be able to repair some of the shot down Corsairs. He can give pilots a chance to fly Corsairs, including possibly some of the RN pilots, who much more experienced than his own. For that matter, the Queen;'s vassals will be looking over their airships and see if any of them are repairable. They will of course be keeping their cores, so the Queen only has seven new mithril cores from this battle. She might have time to shave down to make shard cores if she has the shard airframes to use them in.

Trevayne

I agree that more worldbuilding would be useful. IIRC the only known noble ranks are counts and dukes. Most OTL systems had a few more titles like barons, viscounts, etc. ITTL it seems that the five ducal holdings (Royal, Blackstone, New Haven, Southshore, and Summerfield) all have several Counts under them, but is that all there is? Are there any levels besides Duke that have subordinate nobles? As for Bonnlyn, she seems to be from a rich merchant family. As such, she would be a wealthy commoner, except that she is a mage and thus noble. She is going to the Academy to train as a Mage-Knight so she can formally become a noble. IIRC she just wants to make and sell things, but her family pushed her into the academy so they can now have an in with the nobility.

Trevayne

Regarding William and the Blackstones. (I'm just thinking to myself as I've already reread stories 3x, ugh waiting will kill me) So, now that William has the ok to take over the Blackstone lands, or he'll get the queens gauze agreement soon enough, does anyone see William going on the offencive? A successful attack on the Blackstone home/castle could serve as a very strong message to Blackstones vessels and allies to stand down and go back to the kids table. Destroying Blackstones airships and any manufacturering sites. Many even get Lady Blackstone at the same time.

MS

Agreed, cause I’ve noticed bluefishcake had been getting better and better with world building with each new series. But coming from a single characters point of view, one’s understanding of the wider lore is limited purely to the main story. I’m a lore junkie and will ravenously fiend for more information and expanded lore… obviously preferring when it’s handled with care. So some expanded world building and alternate perspectives to events is always fun. It also helps to shape our understanding of tone of the setting a bit more with characters outside of the normal loop reacting accordingly to current events. Like that one sniveling noble boy who was jealous and mad at our MC seeing the red water fleet single handedly saving the kingdom now getting even more jealous with envy over his success on his own but also having a grudging admiration and respect fro the MC. Like he still hates him, but not for being ungrateful and instead being mad that the MC actually succeeded and is doing so well on his own.

Hunter

Replying to @MASC - I agree it would not be easy, but it is probably easier than persuading Yelena to give up Lindholm territory. In addition to not wanting to give up land, how do they keep the Lunites or Solites out? I also agree that keeping Tala around would be a good idea. She knows more about the Blackstone territory than anyone else William has access to. Right now William can offer the orcs an end to the slave raids and an end to the war against them. I expect the orcs might be willing to stop their own attacks in exchange for being left on their current land. Your suggestion of a joint security force is a good one, and William can try to staff it with orcs and humans from southern Lindholm. They will still need orcs and humans from the North who know the territory, but the Southerners will be an example that the two groups really can live in peace and work together. The conversation with Tala is also one I am looking forward to. William can say to her something like "Look, you rebelled against the throne and lost. You know the penalty for that is death and that I am getting the Blackstone lands. If you care about your people and want to live, you can help me govern them and tell me how to get them to at least tolerate my rule. If not, more of them are going to die in pointless rebellions. If you marry into my house, at least some of them are less likely to do things I can't ignore."

Trevayne

Pirate exposition or riot!

Katz

Will would need to address his own house before dealing with his neighbours as there are going to be a lot of vassals with ancestral/cultural hatred for the Orcs as he is dealing with the equivalent to the Confederates once he takes over. If he’s too forceful in his reforms he could start getting revolts from both the commoners & nobility of his new Duchy as they will see him as the race traitor that usurped the Blackstones. Will might also need to somehow rescue Tala from the chopping block and force her into a political marriage in order to give a facade of the “old regime” in order to secure some level of begrudging support from his new vassals. Plus I san see his sister asking him to save her “best friend” like he did for her. Also Will could use his knowledge of 21st century politics and create some kind of intergovernmental entity like a peace keeping force that is operated by both the Free Orcs and the Kingdom. Then he just needs to come up with a system of Orc antonymous governance that everyone find tolerable, which is going to be the impossible part.

MASC

Replying to @karl grimm - That was true and it was because his mother had taught him that negotiations didn't achieve anything. Just look how his mother treated him over the Flash Bang spell, his spell, essentially stolen by his mother. He is starting to realize that talking can work if you don't start out under the other persons control. He successfully persuaded his mother to see things his way regarding Olivia. Talking didn't work before he became a Count in his own right. For another example, he just talked with the Queen even though he commented that the Queen had previously threatened to imprison him and torture him to get the Kraken Slayer secret. He bluffed with a threat to release the information to everybody. In this chapter, he threatened that his workshops might burn down if he was detained.

Trevayne

Excellent suggestion and I need to read that now !

Laenthis Tranchesoleil

The problem is that Will tends to rely on undiplomatic solutions. Virtually every time he has a problem even with his mother and sister he goes for the uncompromising brute force approach. The only exception is when Marline directly suggested a compromise approach to solving a problem.

karl grimm

I would kind of like to see a little more worldbuilding like more on the relationship between the the higher and lower aristocracy as well as between the aristocracy and the lower classes. Is most of the population tenant farmers? I get the impression it's more like a tax system where the Lord gets most of the taxes than old style serfdom. I guess Bonnlyn is more like an upper middle class or minor nobility. Also wouldn't mind more on creatures like Wyverns, like why do only Orcs use them? Also did our sexy pirate friend manage to escape?

karl grimm

Once this is all wrapped up, I’d love to see an epilogue chapter from the far(?) future about how William is perceived as the first (to our knowledge) mostly-sane Harrowed

Larynx Punchworthy

Another interesting issue with the next book is whether William goes back to school or just gets an honorary graduation. Now that Yelena is in on some of his tech, I expect she will want him to work on that. There are lots of people who need an academy education to serve as a Royal Marine Knight. William is now a key researcher/technologist. Sending him back to Blickland would be like telling Bill Gates that Microsoft is very nice but you really need to go back to college. It would be funny though. If he had a reputation at the beginning of year two for the team duel and having his own airship, it would be heading into orbit now. He has just saved the Queen, the Academy, and won the civil war. He has also made a fair portion of the curriculum obsolete. I expect he will go back to the academy periodically as a guest lecturer. He has to help bring the curriculum up to date.

Trevayne

Reply to @MS - Yes, I think he said he was going to do a poll on patreon to decide which series gets the next book. IIRC he did a test poll (non-binding, just for his curiosity) back in November and Sect won by 5-10%. However, that was before much of book 2 and its climactic battle, so the preferences may have changed.

Trevayne

Replying to @karl grimm - I think he would like to go for full democracy, but I think his discussions with the Queen will lead toward a constitutional monarchy like Britain in the 18th or 19th-centuries. From the Queen's perspective, this would give the nobles a more productive area for competition and provide the commons as a counterbalance.

Trevayne

Agree, although child is a bit harsh. To Yelena he looks to be 19, so a young adult, not a child.

Trevayne

Replying to @MS - That is a good idea, but I doubt they could set it up immediately. I expect the Lunites got the fleet together by offering rewards and kept it together with the threat of their airships sinking anyone trying to leave. I expect the fleet dispersed as soon as the Lunites left and the RN showed up. Assuming they survived, they would have to be reassembled, although Lindholm could just suggest that kind of arrangement. The Lunites needed a large force in one place as a decoy. Lindholm just needs the pirates to be pirates although maybe make them privateers going after New Haven ships.

Trevayne

Thinking about the next book, I wonder if the focus will be on William and the Orcs. It could be leading up to the battle between the RN and Blackstone, but I doubt Blue will want to do a book that covers a few weeks of prep time and then a battle. He has said he doesn't like battle scenes and a book like that would be just a short build up and a battle. What would be amusing and possibly annoy the readership is if the book starts with Eleanor sitting at her treason trial and trying to figure out how it all went so horribly wrong. She had thought they were winning, until her shards were all shot down and there were still 20-30 of those new enemy shards making that horrible noise left. Then they started to take her fleet apart, firing fire lance salvos without any sign of slowing down from outside pivot gun range. It had become hideously apparent that her ships were effectively defenseless, mere targets for those terrible shards, occasionally joined by that weird twin-core shard from Whiteshore. After losing half her ships without damaging the enemy, she surrendered. There was nothing she could do. While I like a climactic battle as much as the next person, I don't see how the battle with Blackstones can be the climax unless the entire book only covers 2-3 weeks. If it isn't going to be the climax, then maybe Blue doesn't have to describe it over several chapters. Edit: On the off chance Blue decides to do something like this I freely relinquish any and all rights to him.

Trevayne

Same. Even worse wasn't Blue going to decied which Sexy Babes story will be worked on after march? Space, Sect or Steam? I like Sect but Steam is my favorite and reason I do patroen.

MS

I could see the pirate fleet used as an external pressure point towards New Havens shipping trade. It would suck for new haven to have all their trade ships go missing. The slaves could go free and crews detained, goods would go to pirates. Would also serve to keep all the pirates away from your own ships and interests.

MS

Good question. I agree it is something of a loose end. I don't know if it needs a scene. I think it could be handled as a stray thought or regret by Admiral Tyana that she couldn't wipe them out before returning to try to save the capital. IIRC the Royal Navy was about to attack when they would have been recalled to try to rescue the capital. The problem was Tyana had more than enough air ships to kill them, but it would have taken time. I don't think she would have split her force, leaving a few ships to deal with the pirates because the 12 Lunite airships might have come back and attacked those ships. Given that, I expect the pirates dispersed and got away. Thinking about it, I wonder what the Lunite diplomat does. Does she go back to Lindholm to resume her diplomatic duties or does she go back to Lunite territory for a new job?

Trevayne

Replying to @Matt Bradock - Not in this story. Remember, there are no effective air defenses aside from shards and airships. Troops trying to march or do anything on the ground without airships are nothing but targets. The only times we have seen them used is repelling the commando attack and guarding the kraken corpse. They are guard and garrison units. They occupy territory after the airships destroy or drive off the defenders.

Trevayne

March, yes. Air Force starts the war, but it will be the boots on the ground who secure the territories conquered. The airships are just first to the party.

Matt Bradock

What about the pirate fleet?

Katz

nice

Marius Petrauskas

I'm catching up, but I really....REALLY want to see Yelena's meeting with Wil in the mindscape to set up the Geis. When you realize the person you thought was a child was closer to your age or possibly even OLDER.

Dancingrage

Pretty sure Clarice wasn't even mentioned in this chapter. It did resolve the uncertainty about Griffith, but we still don't know how Clarice is doing. Thinking about it, he arrived by flight-suit from the Jellyfish in response to the Queen's summons. His team was mentioned as coming with him, but none of them are even mentioned and they stayed outside. I wonder why they even came. The really cynical part wonders if he was asked to bring them by someone who thought they might be useful decoys if they haven't found every last Lunite command. I would like to think he wouldn't bring them as decoys, but perhaps as moral support. On the plus side, they have all now seen him go into an audience with the Queen. Thinking about Olzenya in particular, her ambition is another reason to stick with William. I would be surprised if Blackstone is the only noble house attained or left without a head or an heir as a result of the upcoming battle. Even if she is only thinking about being the Jellyfish's captain, I could see William giving her a vacant county in the Blackstone lands or at least recommending that Yelena do that. Edit: Thinking some more about Clarice, I expect she is OK. I think he got a message that she was alright just like he got the one about Griffith. If she wasn't OK, or was missing, I doubt the Queen would have mentioned his plans to marry the Whitestone girls, the twins, so casually.

Trevayne

I can see why you might think that, but no. Khorne is all about war and violence for its own sake. I am pretty sure that William would be happy if he could get his way without war, but it is really hard to manage that in a feudal structure. I think you meant this section: Inwardly, he grinned, positively gleeful. The deal was struck. And war was coming. At last. I don't see him as loving war like a proper berserker, but more that he is tired of agonizing about better preparations and now it is time to execute with the tools he has. In addition, he is relieved and happy that he reached a deal with Yelena about trading his tech for the Blackstone Duchy and he doesn't have to worry about being committed to an asylum for being harrowed.

Trevayne

Developing dome of the minor characters might be welcome. A scene of what Griffith was doing during the attack might be good, her being shot down might add tension. A scene of the twins talking to William after the fight might be good, technically I don't know if he confirmed Clarice is all right maybe I missed it. For that matter a NSFW scene with the twins wouldn't be unwelcome at some point in the future.

karl grimm

Is he actually going for full democracy? I assumed he was going for like a constitutional monarchy. Something like Great Britain with a House of Commons to balance out a Monarch and house of Lords. Going full Democracy will be a lot harder in any case since some bloodlines are just magical. If you say all men and women are created equal in this world you look ridiculous.

karl grimm

Who said anything about a Jeffersonian democracy? I think he will try for a constitutional monarchy resembling 18th or 19th-century Britain. A parliament with power divided between commons and lords (keeps the aristocracy involved) with the monarch still having some power.

Trevayne

Reply to @ZBTmaniac - I agree with you. I was just surprised that there are that many wrecks intact enough to do that with. I wonder how long it will take William to fix them?

Trevayne

All this helps William’s democracy plan, except he is going to make the most American of errors. The thirteen colonies had centuries of humanist thought that lead to the revolution of the elites who were mostly classically educated. But trying to setup a Jeffersonian democracy in a land where even the educated have no understanding of democratic principles will not work. The last twenty five years of history proves it is a flawed plan.

Richard Anderson

Replying to @Jacob - I think he could destroy it entirely, which would probably be something like the French Revolution or English Civil War, or significantly reduce its power leading to something like the British government of the mid-1700s or mid 1800s. In both cases, Parliament had most of the power, but the monarchs (the first three Georges and Victoria) certainly still had a fair amount of power. The problem with the first option is that it killed a lot more people and the monarchy eventually returned in the form of Napoleon or Charles II. I doubt William's political skills are good enough to impose democracy and completely get rid of the monarchy. I think he can turn the current system into a constitutional monarchy where it is mostly democratic but the monarch retains some power. That way he has the monarch's backing which helps stabilize the new system. He gets Yelena's agreement by showing her some of Earth's history in their geas-formation dream.

Trevayne

Pretty much. Especially if it is Eleanor Blackstone realizing after her airship has been seriously damaged by a rocket volley, that there were no enchantments on the rockets, no magic at all.

Trevayne

I agree that there is confusion between frame and mithril cores and mithril shards. Here is the full text: Yelena’s expression was unreadable. “I am the first queen in history to have more shard cores than I can use. The issue has always been frames. And I have even fewer now. Shards are easier to produce, but at every turn, noble houses resist me - because every frame shaved down feels like the death of a dynasty to them.” I agree there are several points where things are misplaced. I think this paragraph should be reworded so it reads: Yelena’s expression was unreadable. “I am the first queen in history to have more mithril cores than I can use. The issue has always been airship frames. And I have even fewer now. Shards are easier to produce, but at every turn, noble houses resist me - because every mithril core shaved down to make shard cores feels like the death of a dynasty to them.” This is actually getting to be a serious problem for Yelena. She has more easily portable physical wealth than any ruler in her planet's history. I am only surprised that there haven't been more attacks by people looking for those cores. Especially since airships mean you can fly over the borders to get straight to where you think the loot is.

Trevayne

Replying to @Jacob - I expect she is less surprised by the shards. IIRC people knew William was producing shard frames and thought the idea was that he could sell them to Houses that had wrecked their own shards but recovered the cores. Here she probably figures that Yelena supplied the cores, probably by shaving down one of the cores recovered from a kraken nest. This would go along with her assumption that Yelena supplied all the enchanted weapons used, along with the pilots.

Trevayne

Yes, I am not looking forward to going through withdrawal in March.

Trevayne

Replying to @Logan - I agree Blackstone does not completely trust New Haven, but they do have a shared interest in keeping slavery going. They would certainly prefer it if New Haven keeps the other two duchies, South Shore and Summerfield out of play. However, even if they stayed home, I think Blackstone would still go for it. I could see New Haven saying "We thought we agreed to attack next year. We have 6 ships refitting and need a month to move with our whole fleet." If Blackstone gets this, I expect Eleanor might decide to go anyway, figuring if she can take out the RN quickly enough, the other Duchies will not do anything because Yelena will be dead. Some of the Crown Vassal ships might be repairable, so Yelena is at her weakest now.

Trevayne

Agreed. At least until the Lunites and Solites finally reach a decision in their war, every other conflict in the world can be seen as a component or potential gambit in that war. IIRC the two powers have made at least three attempts to conquer Lindholm outright in the last century because they see Lindholm as a potentially valuable province that might swing the balance in the big war their way. For the Lunites, this was just one more attempt to move the needle in their direction. Now as for the fronts in this war, it looks like there will be three. The battle for the capital, the Orcs attacking Blackstone, and New Haven moving against Southshore and Summerfield to keep them from reinforcing the Royal Navy at the capital. The capital battle is the decisive one. If the RN loses there the other duchies will make a separate peace and Yelena and her family will be exiled or executed. If the RN wins, Eleanor Blackstone and some of her people will be executed for treason. The interesting question is what happens to New Haven. Blackstone's fleet will have been wrecked and their House attainted. Their Duchess will die. Tala might also be executed or might just be married off into another house. The Blackstone family as such will disappear. New Haven is more interesting. Depending on just how things go, their fleet will be still intact. I think Yelena will be reluctant to wreck another 30-40 ships after losing her own crown vassal ships, the Blackstone fleet, and any RN ships destroyed in defeating Blackstone. Lindholm as a whole will have lost over 70 ships (over a hundred if they also have to destroy the New Haven fleet) and I think Yelena realises that these losses make them a more attractive target for the Lunites and especially the Solites ships. I could see her offering New Haven a deal. It could look like this: New Haven turns over half its ships to the Crown vassals and Royal Navy in exchange for the Crown Vassal cores. This weakens New Haven and rebuilds her Crown Vassal forces. New Haven also agrees to end the slave trade. In exchange, New Haven gets to live and is not attainted and the house isn't destroyed for treason. They can also eventually rebuild their forces because they are getting a core for every ship they turn over. I have no idea if this is what Blue is thinking, but it is at least a possibility. Note, if they had any idea that New Haven was working with the Solites they would not offer this deal.

Trevayne

Replying to @Blue Fishcake - Fully agree that political leadership shouldn't be inheritable, but it is really hard to implement. Unless you have a blanket ban on the offspring of a democratic political leader going into politics, even without any official or unofficial favoritism, they are going to have an edge. Children who grow up watching their parents deal with politics are going to have an advantage from that knowledge. It may be offset by their opponent's advantages, but it will still exist.

Trevayne

Replying to @MS - I think she is eager to attack and ignoring questions. I think there are also some issues with the information she has received. In particular, I find it hard to see her getting accounts of the Jellyfish having 30-40 shards using lots of enchanted weapons that don't mention that these shards make noises unlike any others. I speculated in another post that the Queen's spymistress might be editing some of their reports. As for the Krakenslayer's use as a weapon, I think you are right. She probably thinks it is an extremely expensive alchemical device that is only cost-effective when used to recover multiple mithril cores from a kraken nest. That would explain its observed use on Krakens and lack of use anywhere else. It also gets used on Krakens because nothing else can kill them while there are lots of weapons that can be used against airships. Regarding the underships, yes, there was a conversation between Tala and her mother where Tala urged her to warn the Queen about the existence of underships. Eleanor said no. She wanted Blackstone to develop them for her own surprise attacks. Right now they are probably being delayed to keep the secret, since revealing that Blackstone knew about them and didn't tell the Queen would be bad politically.

Trevayne

“We rally the fleet. Gather the admirals. Our vassals, too. It is clear the capital is unsafe and in need of protection in the event of a ‘follow up attack’.” A smirk played at her lips. “Protection that the Royal Navy has proven itself incapable of providing. So the North, as ever, shall step in.” And there it was. Their excuse for marching on the capital. Paper-thin. But then – good excuses did not win wars. Fleets did. And there was no denying that House Blackstone had the bigger fleet. This isn't a stupid plan, based on what they know. As with many other plans throughout history, it is what they don't know that will wreck them. I expect Eleanor's problem is a combination of age and impatience. She has been plotting to overthrow the royal family for at least a few years, ever since the start of the Crown's abolitionist stance. She thought she had winning plans built around the schemes to grab the Summerfield duchy, but they failed. Here, from her perspective, she has received a completely unexpected gift from the heavens in terms of the destruction of most of the crown vassal airships and the weakening of Yelena's position. Naturally, she is eager to jump at it so the immediate attack. I expect it will take a week to ten days to get her forces together and a few more days to reach the capital. That is where she knows she can find the Royal Navy which she needs to defeat to win. One small quibble, would a force that is entirely airships use the term march? I don't think any military force on this world has actually marched anywhere outside a parade field for a long time. I suggest flying to rather than marching on. As for the bigger fleet, yes, Tala is correct, Blackstone has the bigger fleet. However, they are about to find out the hard way that bigger does not always win, especially if the other side has a better fleet. Edit: Another thing about this section is that Eleanor insults her daughter by suggesting that William became a tool of the Queen to escape marriage to her. Apparently, neither can even imagine moral opposition to slavery, despite the fact that that was William's justification for why he did not want to marry her, both in the letters he sent and to her face at the academy.

Trevayne

Good point, I'm wondering if she's not getting "all" the story of what happened, like getting just enough info to make the wrong assumptions and thus hanging herself. Also, did I read it correctly that Blackstone is developing underships? I also a little at a lose that she's supposed to be this military tactician yet isn't worried about what other uses the kraken slayer device could be used for. Does she think it's only an expensive and thus limited produced weapon? Ok my rant is over and can't wait to read her reaction when she realized "she done F'd up and found out"

MS

This

Revitika

Replying to @ChaosAndBunnies - We know the throne room and lots of the palace got wrecked, but we don't know if the throne itself was damaged. William's intent might be to destroy the throne as an institution or at least weaken it by inserting democracy, which would reduce or eliminate the throne as an institution and not just a piece of furniture.

Trevayne

I don't think they are doing much now. William's mother is probably wondering just how things got to this state and Olivia is finding things to do under estate arrest, like painting Corsairs. I would definitely be interested in their reactions to Blackstone's death or execution and William becoming the new Duke, along with one of the twins becoming the new Duchess of Summerfield and marrying William. In particular, it would be interesting if Lady Ashfield's reaction is something like "Holy crap! I thought I understood the basics of political plotting. Clearly, I am a dabbler and William is the master." On the bright side, at least William is not her direct feudal superior. That position is reserved for the elder twin, even though she is his spouse.

Trevayne

Thinking some more about the Eleanor Blackstone section, there is one thing she overlooked that she should have known about. She speculated that the intent of the attack might have been to capture the Queen and enough of her nobles to try to force a Lindholm surrender. Unlike Queen Yelena, Eleanor didn't even consider the idea that they were going after the Krakenslayer. Given what she knows, her plans are reasonable. It is what she doesn't know that is going to bite her. She knows the Krakenslayer exists so ignoring it as a possible motivation for the attack is a mistake. I also wonder about the damage reports she received. There was a large explosion beneath the palace. Could anything except the Krakenslayer have caused it? For that matter, are there any means known to this world to cause a really big explosion like that? The only thing I can think of would be a grain elevator explosion where a spark from something sets off a flammable powder in the air. Although maybe magic keeps those from happening. I expect the Alchemists would be extremely interested if they did happen.

Trevayne

Which was the second victory? If you mean the Brimstone against the orcs, their under ships were not really conventional forces. If anything, they were second rate carriers using wyverns rather than shards. They didn't have any defensive armament because they had to be ready to submerge in minutes and could not have unsealed gunports.

Trevayne

I agree, except for the horrifying ammo consumption, it would be a great addition to Williams arsenal, but personally I want him to add autoloading 8" cruiser guns to an allied airship. Because if he could teleport a Des Moines class here it would be glorious

MaybeASquid

I can't think of much on his current battlefield that a GAU-8 would be the right answer for, but "don't fire too long or the recoil will drop you below your stall speed" would be an entertaining discussion to have.

Jonathan Gibbons

Honestly, a pov of William's sister or mother would be nice to see. We haven't gotten a lot from either of them, and I'm sure either would have some interesting reactions to everything that's happened recently.

ChaosAndBunnies

I don't think it can be more in smithereens than it currently is

ChaosAndBunnies

You're essentially right. Orc territory is Blackstone territory.

Blue Fishcake

Well, that, and his plans to install democracy. Which is not - or shouldn't be - an inheritable position.

Blue Fishcake

One thing I am really interested in seeing in the next book is how William plans on dealing with his new northern neighbors, the free orcs. I know he wants to create an independent free orc territory but he thinks Yelena will disagree. I wonder if he can finesse the issue by asking for the orcish territory as part of Blackstone and just turning it over to the orcs. As long as the taxes are paid, does Yelena really care how the orcs are governed? The really tricky part will be trying to talk to the orcs and get them to stop raiding. He can offer them peace and the end of slave raids, he he has to defend his people on his side of the border. They are going to fight back if they are attacked. He is going to have a difficult enough time getting them to stop raiding. After all, they have been at war for centuries. On the plus side, Yotul seems to be tired of it as well. If she becomes the leader of the free orcs, the two of them might be able to give peace a chance.

Trevayne

Replying to @MS - Perhaps, but Tala will recognize that she and her mother were engaged in treason. They were starting a civil war against the monarchy. The normal penalty for losing such a war is death, at least for the leaders. I agree Eleanor is likely to die, but probably at the hands of an executioner. William has been planning for ten years, but the war is starting significantly earlier than he expected. If he had five Jellyfish carriers and 200 Corsairs, it would be a curbstomp. As it is, they may only be even in shard numbers and inferior in ships. Yes, the Corsair-Cs are better, but their pilots still need a lot more seasoning and experience. The average Blackstone pilot is probably a bit better than the average defending pilot (the RN is about as good, but William's pilots bring the average down). Even if it is a curbstomp, just look at how many German women married British or American troops after WW2. Despite the fact that their new husbands may well have killed their family members (probably not directly, but fighting in the same battles). Tala has another reason. I think she cares about her people. If she is offered the chance to advise William as the new Duke, she might well take it if only so she can try to mitigate the effects on her people. Especially, if she realizes that William is on good terms with his teammate Verity, an Orc.

Trevayne

Agreed, here is the quote from chapter 62: If Yelena was truly gone, then the civil war had just swung wildly in Blackstone’s favor. Sure, Princess Palmer, at least, was safe. She was far to the South, treating with the Southern Duchies in a vain attempt to mediate the Southshore succession. But once she returned to claim the throne…

Trevayne

Thanks for looking that up. I had forgotten about that.

CM

Ok i had to look that up. Never got into Warhammer. I don't see it, now I do think the harrowing and some weird effect of him using his special harrowing is drawing him into the chaos. I think him cooking helps him keep his balance.

MS

Careful, that's Williams obvious dolt your taking about. But yes she needs a good mentor for learning the ropes of running a land holding.

MS

Excellent idea, it's been a while and he needs to cook. To defrag his hallowed mind

MS

And a fae sitting on old man's shoulders

MS

> I’d gladly swear a geass that I have no designs on the Lindholmian throne. Nor any desire to see my descendants sit upon it lmao good one. of course none his descendants are gonna sit on the throne once it's been bombed to smithereens

John

Probably closer to the 7 day mark. If you want to hit after something like this, you really, really want to move so fast that the battered but unbroken defenders don't have time to realize they've already lost.

DMR1

Replying to @trevayne - and when William kills Tala's mother, and large number of family and friends? He's expecting Blackstone and vessels to attack very soon. Given he's been planing for the last 10 years it's going to be a bloodbath for everyone not on team William.

MS

The queen- "what does that boy have that's got Griffens clam so wet all about?" The queens after finding out- "...out of breath and drained....oh I understand now"

MS

Blackstone might believe they can solo things, but without Summerfield in their pocket New Haven might actually need to fight the southern duchies instead of just staring them down while the Blackstones fight the queen (iirc that was the original plan with Olivia as duchess of Summerfield) Regardless, the Blackstones don't trust New Haven enough to have them sitting around doing nothing. They don't expect the alliance with the sollites, but they do expect New Haven to try and rally the other elven houses to support them claiming the throne should the blackstones be too greatly weakend in the fighting.

Logan

I love all your work, but this one has definitely been my favorite. I’ve seen your hesitancy for writing battles but you absolutely knocked it out of the park with this one. My only regret is that more is not immediately available but I’ll be here for whatever comes next!

Logan Matthews

It was mentioned in a previous chapter that the 1st in line (palmer I believe) is off in the southern duchies trying to mediate the succession crisis

Logan

3-4 ships likely can't guard the entire border. If they're clumped up (to beat the 3 orc ships at once) then the orcs attack somewhere they are not. If they split up to cover the whole border then the orcs can overpower the ships while they're isolated from each other. Granted this all depends on how big the border/coastline is but even 3 orc ships they can tie down a much higher number of Blackstone vessels Edit- yes I can see the Blackstones leaving behind 3-4 ships if they think there's only one orc vessel (the initial missing one), it'll just result in those ships getting destroyed by the orcs unless the Blackstone split off more ships to go home and guard

Logan

Thinking some more about this, the news about the orcs will leak from the prisoners/slaves the orcs are releasing. However, I expect that will take some time. I think they are being dropped off along the coast, probably several hours of walking away from the nearest inhabited area. That gives the orcs more time to vanish. I think the Blackstones will get the news in a few days. I doubt they will leave more than 3-4 ships at most.

Trevayne

Let’s gooooooooo!

Mark

Replying to @Dragoon and @Katz - I would be interested in that discussion too. It would be seeing them trying to define an out of context problem. Yes, William did a good job of interfering with the Queen's invisible spies, but that wasn't the real problem. That problem is they did not think what he was doing could exist. It is like the President chewing out the CIA for failing to detect Estonia's development of a perpetual motion machine. They had no idea that artificial cores were possible

Trevayne

I feel like that’s exactly what that whole scene is trying show, she is arrogant and overconfident, and that makes her sloppy. Her prejudice makes her dismiss anything outside her world view as impossible. Orcs are dumb brutes so it’s impossible for them to innovate, men are just tools they can’t think for themselves. Tala’s surprise and wondering if her mother is overconfident because she had victory in her youth is basically a nod to the audience, like “yes this is exactly what you think.”

Moonlightwind

I'm more surprised that she isn't more surprised by the existence of the 40 shards. I'd assumed that her intel on the royal forces would be detailed enough for their sudden existence to at least raise an eyebrow (even if their origin is mis-attributed). If her intelligence on the Queen's forces have that much margin of error, and she's fine with that, that's just sloppy of her.

Jacob

A how many front war are we looking at, the North moves on the Queen. While the Blackstone fleet is gone the free Orcs hit the under defended duchy. This sounds like the wars in the eighteen century, we Americans forget that the French Indian war, the revolution and war of 1812 were just one front of a global war between the British and a rotating alliance of European forces.

Richard Anderson

I endorse all of this suggestion as well :-)

Jacob

I'm also still rooting for thermite to appear in book 3 :-)

Jacob

William has perfect recall of the original design but probably doesn't have the actual engineering skills needed to integrate the two technologies together successfully for things that are that complicated & with that many interacting design trade-offs.

Jacob

I'd like to hear Yelena's reasoning to bring her 2nd-in-line admiral daughter into the loop (while also excluding her direct heir) and don't feel like it was ever answered or even hinted at.

Jacob

I endorse all of this suggestion :-)

Jacob

Going to be interesting how the more traditional factions will feel toward carriers. In 1 year 2 separate carriers have scored major victorys against a larger conventional force. It's also fun to see his plan for a free orc nation get started.

JR9364

That's my guess as well. Either abolish it all together or make it a powerless figurehead

Jacob

The scene where they sit around eating chicken shwarma is important

BobDinosaur

I think she means westward because the Lindholm is definitely east of the main continent the Lunites and Solites are fighting over. Arguably it should have been northward, but it is still true to move the Lunite focus from Lindholm west towards the Solite border, which is north of the Lunite areas.

Trevayne

Piggybacking on that sightly, it would be really amusing to have Aether used to provide vectored thrust. Because a Corsair in the hands of trained plebeian is terrifying. But a Corsair in the hands of a mage knight capable of a cobra maneuver or a J turn? That might well be unbeatable.

Sea Wolf

Here is the part from chapter 30 that suggests current William doesn't know: The fae floated behind him. And for a moment, he was tempted to ask what question an infant William Ashfield asked it that had resulted in the entirety of GEORGE STATFIELD’S mind being downloaded into his – forever wiping away whatever might have once been the young boy. He didn’t, of course. There were simpler ways to commit suicide. No, instead he simply had to deal with the consequences of that boy’s actions. Pretty sure that Blue doesn't want to get into it. Similarly, we know so very little about who George Statfield was. Unlike most characters in fiction, we know next to nothing about who the MC is besides what he tells us. His words and actions suggest that he likes democracy and hates slavery, but we don't know why, for example.

Trevayne

I don't think the Solites were planning on invading with New Haven and the Blackstones. They want the two Duchies to take out the Royal Navy and the monarchy. Then New Haven stabs Blackstone in the back and the Solites pick up the pieces and put New Haven in charge of their new province of Lindholm. The real question now is whether New Haven joins Blackstone in an immediate attack. IIRC the original plan was for New Haven to neutralize the duchies allied to the Crown (Summerfield and Southshore) while Blackstone took on the RN and Crown vassals. Now the Crown vassal airships have been wrecked so Blackstone might think they can do it themselves.

Trevayne

Loved the Chapter from Bonnlyn's dad's POV. Perhaps more from Team 7's families as an outside perspective on William? I would especially appreciate seeing Verity's family move in to their new home.

Jack

Has it been stated that William lost his memories? I might have missed that, or forgotten it. If that's the case then I'd like to see a flashback back to the day before William was hallowed. What happened that made toddler William do what he did, even if it's just for us readers to witness.

CM

All I can think of is the tiktokker that goes into companies backstories

MaybeASquid

If the plan is for the Solites to invade along side the Blackstones and New Haven then it will take some time to coordinate, and the Solites may want to do their own assessment of these new weapons since the plan is already complicated by a mid-battle backstab. The Loyalists only need enough time to build more ship breaking missiles and a handful of whatever the twins’ plane was called. Plus the Free Orcs are plotting some retaliation which could keep them occupied a bit. I don’t think they’ve learned about the Solites yet but even so I’m feeling optimistic.

22junk

Maybe, but she's a bit of an oblivious dolt so...

Morpheus

A fine finale! I know it'll probably be a while now before this story gets continued, but what a set-up for the next book! (Also, that little remark calling out Trevayne got a good laugh out of me! 😂👍)

Baron Von Mott

I agree it would be interesting, but I don't think William knows. William the toddler's mind was wiped by the answer and George's memories did the wiping. At this point, I don't think anyone but the Fae know and William(George) is really reluctant to ask them.

Trevayne

Don't forget his sister having a crisis that her brother is a harrowed.

DMR1

So buddy, what's in the research queue? This is a clothes washer! I'm making things that spin! Then I'm going to make other things that spin!

DMR1

And a conversation from our instructors to Redwater about how things shook out.

DMR1

There is also one where our dear cadet Ashfield in this circumstance would look at Tala Blackstone and say: "YOU DARE?!"

DMR1

There have been so many suggestions that I'd love to see, but the one that I haven't seen suggested yet is the how William became hallowed. Specifically the conversation between William and his fey, and have that scene as a flashback when William's mother confronts him about being hallowed.

CM

Replying to @MS - You may be right. However, I don't think Tala has drunk quite so deeply of the Blackstone Kool-Aid as her mother has. Not every Southerner remained unreconstructed after the US Civil War, for example. I think she has a chance at least. The real proof will be seeing if she can deal with orcs after losing.

Trevayne

Replying to @MS - Pretty sure Lady Ashcroft has been forced to side with the crown. William has burned too many of her bridges to the Blackstones. She might well try to suck up to them if they win, but I really don't see that happening.

Trevayne

Fully agree that this is an excellent epilogue. However, Marcille and Clarice are both political climbers and shard enthusiasts. There is not a chance in hell of their backing out. They want Summerfield too much and they probably want William's shard knowledge even more. They might even agree that he is mad (after all, the rest of his team thinks so), but he is their kind of madman.

Trevayne

Replying to @MS - I think the 8-10 minute limit was for a plebian pilot flying a conventional mithril-shard-powered shard. A plebian pilot can fly one until the aether gas tank runs out because as a non-mage, they can't get more aether. A Corsair-C with an internal combustion engine can fly to the limits of its fuel endurance, probably a few hours. An interesting idea would be to combine the two and use aether gas to lighten the Corsair and improve performance because the same engine power is moving a lighter aircraft. Those would need mages as pilots though. Although thinking about it, a lot of shards got shot down. If William has more Corsair-Cs than pilots, I imagine there are lots of pilots looking for shards to fly. Given the superior performance, I doubt they would object to the noise and smell that much.

Trevayne

Random aside: There is an AU out there in which William’s mom didn’t scheme with the Blackstones or replace William as heir, and now the entire nation is looking nervously at the Ashfield county which just saved the capital single handed. Second random aside: Williams mom might also be aware of this and might be kicking herself a little.

Sea Wolf

Whose side will lady ashcraft side with?

MS

The only scene that I think should be added to the epilogue is a discussion between the Solite Empress and Duchess New Haven similar to the one in chapter 30. It would discuss what they know and if New Haven should join the attack with Blackstone. It would improve Blackstone's chances, but if they fail would probably also get New Haven attainted as well. I guess it depends on just whether Blue wants to clear the board in Lindholm or keep New Haven around as a future threat. Given that the Solites and Lunuites are still both around as future big threats, I don't know if New Haven is needed, but that is just my opinion.

Trevayne

I thought the artificial core shards had more time? Or was the 40 shards a mix of gas engines and the limited flight ether charged shards

MS

Them going to a movie theater and watching a documentary about the bombing of Dresden/Tokyo with flashes of trench warfare while eating popcorn.

Isak Mark

Oh, and George's *cough* Will's family not learning about his harrowing to it's fullest extend but some more insight and reconciliation on both their parts. Like what's will going to do for house Ashfield.

Isak Mark

Extra content: the twins reuniting, some yelling about how one of them wasn't there for the takedown of the Wyvern's first ship, then more yelling directed towards William as he shows them all the artificial cores and weapons, maybe have his other partners there as well

jkbscopes

Another scene I would like to see in the next book is this one. The Blackstone fleet approaches the capital and announces their intentions as per Duchess Eleanor: “We rally the fleet. Gather the admirals. Our vassals, too. It is clear the capital is unsafe and in need of protection in the event of a ‘follow up attack’.” A smirk played at her lips. “Protection that the Royal Navy has proven itself incapable of providing. So the North, as ever, shall step in.” After their fleet is shot out of the sky and the survivors are captured. Queen Yelena quickly convenes Eleanor's treason trial. She then states at the trial that "Since the Blackstone fleet has been shot down and destroyed, they have demonstrated their clear unfitness to defend the north. Given that, House Blackstone is attainted and stripped of its titles and holdings. They are assigned to Count William Redwater who has amply demonstrated his ability to defend the right this day."

Trevayne

A row of Hitler's buzzsaws meet a blackstone boarding party

jkbscopes

William making pancakes with the queen before their harrowing session? pros: degenerate cons: degenerate

Isak Mark

“I nearly died last night,” she said, voice softer now. “Many of our people did die last night. If the price of keeping that from happening again is risking my magic on a deal I intend to fulfill, then so be it.” She fixed him with a sharp look. “But, I repeat, I want it all. Everything.” That in a nutshell is why I am really glad Blue decided not to kill her in the battle. Yelena may be a feudal queen intent on staying a monarch, but she actually does care about her people. She and William may yet end up fighting, but there is a chance for discussion and diplomacy. William may well still think it will come to a revolution, but there is at least a chance that he can persuade her of the advantages of a constitutional monarchy. I doubt very much he can get something like the 2024 UK, but I think he might be able to get something like the UK circa 1765 or 1832 (1832 is better because of the great voting reform and the formal end of slavery in the British Empire).

Trevayne

If anything happens to Tala, I would kill everyone in this room and then myself 😂 Honestly, she is just to precious and deserves better. I hope for a reconciliation on the battlefield or maybe even a enemies to lovers / mentee thing.

XavHD

Editing note: talking about when they figured out that the shards had engines, the admiral snorts but the dialogue sounds like it comes from Yelena

MaybeASquid

Edit suggestion: Yelena exhaled sharply. “So, the question now must be asked. Were those really artificial cores powering those shards last night?” “Out of curiosity, why are you so certain they were artificial?” The admiral snorted. “Beyond plebeian flight times being limited to ten minutes?” She leaned forward, fingers drumming against the armrest. “There was no aether when they were shot down. But fire instead. You know who I think of when I think fire? Alchemists. And as you so helpfully pointed out, you have them in abundance.” A pause. “Because they were one of the things you requested from me in exchange for the Kraken Slayer.” I think the words The admiral snorted should either be a separate paragraph or replace admiral with Queen because Yelena spoke the preceding and following words.

Trevayne

Well done! The epilogue you wrote is very well done. The dance of give and take between the crown and William, now slightly more complex with the addition of the Queen's daughter...the Orcs and their situation... the short sighted arrogance of the Khanate... It's all really well written and it is great to get glimpses into their perspectives. As for what I would want to see...the frantic discussion between the Twins and William. Their reactions to learning (or at least having thir suspicion confirmed) about his harrowing...the explanations of radios, internal combustion fighter aircraft, and Kraken Slayer Javelins. I wonder if the Twins will even want to marry him after all of those explanations, or if they would back out of their engagement with a 'dangerous madman'.

Kaywye

Same, for me the steam story seems to "flow" better. I like them all but steam is fav.

MS

Another scene that would be amusing is a potential future. This couldn't happen until at least the middle of the next book, but it would be amusing to see William confirmed as a Duke in charge of the Blackstone territories and the Queen telling him his first task is to persuade the Orcs occupying those areas to leave. He then tells the Queen he wants Verity to be a Marchioness to rule the Orcish lands to the North as his chief vassal. He tells Verity that he is going to end slavery and stomp on any attempts to raid the orcish lands and could she please do the same on her side of the border. Verity would have home rule and expected to provide normal feudal levies/taxes. In a world with the Lunites and Solites eager to get a foothold on Lindholm, I think this is the best deal the Orcs can get.

Trevayne

Oh I so missed that on my first reading. Personally I think her upbringing and hated for the orcs, along with huge amounts of PTSD, would prevent her from a redemption arc, I think she'd rather die going down fighting William. She has to much hate and anger, William is also a male which in this world is the lesser sex, so she's got the whole I was beat by a male hate included in her feelings.

MS

Extra scene I would like: a funeral oration for the Plebeian Pilots who died. After all they are the real heroes of the battle.

Random Information

I mean, it wasn't as much 'missed' as 'the invisible spies kept being shooed away because William knew about them'.

Katz

I agree they could easily get crushed between the two forces. While they send their fleet to deal with the Royal Navy, they are relatively defenseless at home. It would be ironic as they approach the capital and start the engagement with the RN to get an orb message saying Orc airships are bombarding Castle Blackstone. The tech disparity isn't that bad, at least against the orcs. They know about the underships, even if they think the orcs only have one. They might leave a couple of airships behind, probably their weakest. I expect the Orcs have learned a lot from the Lunites about how to fight their airships.

Trevayne

replying to @O - If he bombed it, he would have been say 19-25, so born no later than 1926. We know he was around 88 when he died the first time so no later than 2012. He could have used wiki, but I figured he dies in 2024, so was born in 1936. That is why I doubt he flew the Corsair operationally.

Trevayne

The truly amusing thing is by the information she has, she isn't wrong. The problem is she doesn't have any idea about the information she doesn't have. Her big folly is that she is so determined to seize the opportunity and strike while the Crown is reeling from the battle at the capital, that she doesn't think she needs to get more information about these new shards and just how William won. Edit: The really fascinating thing is that her sources told her 30-40 shards were involved but none of them mentioned the unusual sounds they produced. It almost makes one wonder if Queen Yelena's spymistress has gotten to some of Blackstone's sources and persuaded them to edit their reports.

Trevayne

I’m here for the Tala redemption arc!

Brian Roger

'he imagined their services healers were needed for more critical cases' Are healers and services meant to be the other way around? And now I have to wait for the next book :d

Benneb

That is an interesting question. As of the meeting between William and the queen, William did not know why the three ships left early. I suspect they will find out from interrogating prisoners at the academy, but the prisoners may not even know if they were in combat or in buildings at the time. It really depends if any of the captured airships managed to get an orb message to the airships over the capital before they were captured. I think after interrogating them, I think it is a reasonable conclusion that the orcs took the other two ships and fled, but I don't know if that word will leak, or how fast it happens if it does leak. It isn't nearly as obvious as the sound of the Corsairs. Since Eleanor is trying to move quickly, I doubt she will find out until after her fleet has left. The question then becomes how long will it take the Orcs to find out that the Blackstone fleet has left. It would be really amusing if the Orcs realize that their enemies are going south with all their ships and choose that as the time to attack Blackstone.

Trevayne

You know, there is a certain irony that the standard imperial shard is called the drake and it’s about to be replaced by the Corsair which “roars” and “spits fire.” Also Eleanor talking about the battle of the capital so confidently and dismissively while getting basically every single thing wrong is so fucking funny. She’s so arrogant but doesn’t know basically anything, there is so much irony there lol.

Moonlightwind

It should definitely help if a mage is present. Might allow for some wild designs for stuff like the big shards the twins have. More lift from the core allows smaller wings means less air resistance means faster. Also allows heavier design means more resilient design.

Ohmps

He may not have strolled through it, but it's possible he bombed it.

O

Replying to @Blue Fishcake - Good point, but I am pretty sure he has seen a dramatization or any number of post-nuclear apocalypse movies. If he can remember the details of a symphony well enough to record it, I figure he can remember a documentary well enough to impress (terrify) Yelena.

Trevayne

Before. I see the seeds for realizing that this is tactically stupid. She basically half said akd half thought it already, and the more info they will get from that battle, the more they will realize what happened and the more other houses will not side with them. Might be enough

Ohmps

There absolutely needs to be a conversation with Griffith before you shut everything down. That's my ask. Beyond that Yelena by accident has put herself in a position of power. By elevating and supporting Redwater from the start followed by him leading the saving defense at the end, this would be like if Pearl Harbor ended with the entire enemy fleet in ruins instead of the way it did. The commoners will absolutely rally behind her on this one. And the Blackstones... they are going to be completely blindsided because when he has even more corsairs launching from the ground and the air in defense of the capitol as Redwater sets up the first real ADIZ for it we're going to pretty much see it become the anvil to the Jellyfish being the hammer should anyone attack again. And with a geass formed alliance, this puts Yelena and Redwater in a unique position of trust. The Blackstones are dead, they simply just don't know it yet. My bonus ask is that you write up a short para or two about him mending fences with his family, aka, forming them into an allied house to Redwater and discussing the "upgrades" to the house airship that will make it his airborne version of a rocket cruiser/battleship hybrid. Also, the Trevayne callout. LOL.

DMR1

I'd point out that George, whatever else he might have been doing, was definitely not strolling through Hiroshima in 1945 if he also lived long enough to make use of Wikipedia.

Blue Fishcake

I think a WW2 battlefield would be impressive, but if you really want to show the horrors of industrialized warfare, a stroll through say Hiroshima on Aug 7, 1945 would do it.

Trevayne

A redemption arc seems possible to me. The real question I have is what happens to the losers in a Civil War in this society. I expect Eleanor is getting executed or dies in action. She is also getting attainted, so the Blackstone Duchy is taken away. What I don't know is whether William will become the new Blackstone, taking that name, or does he become the Duke of Redwater or is told to pick some other name besides Blackstone? For that matter, I could see him adding Tala to his group since she knows the territory better than any other member of his circle. Edit: The real test of Tala's redemption arc will be seeing if she can deal with Verity. Olzenya learned and adapted.

Trevayne

Agreed. The only weapons we have seen mentioned as airship-mounted anti-shard weapons were the pivot guns. They are better than nothing, but probably not much better than that. Especially since they are up against Corsairs that fire rockets from outside their range. Assuming the Blackstones have 35-40 ships, that is probably 20 shards from the Brimstone, another 18-20 from 3-4 light carriers, and say 60-70 shards from the rest of the ships at 2 per ship (say 110 total shards). After they are dealt with, I expect the Blackstones will be torn apart. The Royal Navy should have about 35 ships. They probably also have a couple of light carriers for 10-12 shards, the Jellyfish with 40, and another 60-70 on the regular ships (about 110-120). However, they also have the three airbases around the capital for another 60 shards. The Corsairs have a performance edge. The Blackstones probably have the pilot edge, at least over the Corsairs. However, now that secrecy has been lifted, William can offer the RN any empty Corsairs for use from the airfields.

Trevayne

She seems to be the only faction that is underestimating literally every single one of her enemies. Gonna be fun to see her downfall.

Business Casual

Pretty sure it is just that. He wants to see the monarchy become a democracy, either as a republic or a constitutional monarchy. Either way, the power of the throne will be seriously reduced or eliminated. Given that, it was easy for him to swear that he did not want to put himself or any heirs on the throne.

Trevayne

Also, idk how the dreams work, but I am DYING to see the geass between the queen and William. And a KILLER setting would be a WW2 battlefield. Maybe a "starts in a cafe, oh wow this is a cool world I can't wait to use all this tech" "oh yeah? Wanna see where that gets us? Here's Normandy. I want to help. But I NEED to avoid this"

Lanze

Oooo "the words stung" Tala always was incredulous that William saw a marriage with her to be so awful, but for Tala's own mother calling marriage with her "a leash around his neck" has got to hurt... maybe lay the groundwork for a little introspection? Please please PLEASE Tala redemption Arc after her inevitable climactic defeat! 🥺

Lanze

From what I can tell it looks like even steel hulled airships seem to be somewhere between rated warships and central battery ironclads, given that they’re spoken of as having gun decks as opposed to anything like a turret, Crucially, even with shard tech known for some time there doesn’t seem to be much if anything in the way of dedicated anti aircraft weaponry, sights or anything of the sort. If that’s right it means that a fleet’s main protection against anti-ship capable shards is other shards, and the fact that weapons capable of bringing airships down are generally sparingly used. That certainly sets the stage for some absolutely monumental slaughters, since if I’ve read everything correctly, most fleets will be little better than targets to properly armed shards once their own shard cover is dealt with. The queen understands this. The Blackstones do not. They’re still expecting enchanted and alchemical munitions to be limited in supply and used sparingly. Not used in every single engagement in multiple sorties. I wonder just how far the northern fleet is going to get? I have a feeling much of it depends on whether or not they give the queen enough time to throw together a meaningful shard force. It wouldn’t have to be much. It sounds like 50 to 60 aircraft would be a close to insurmountable obstacle.

Sea Wolf

And he'll have earned each one.

Andrew Lechner

This seems like it was supposed to be referring to shaving down cores, not frames - "Shards are easier to produce, but at every turn, noble houses resist me - because every frame shaved down feels like the death of a dynasty to them." Same paragraph, it seems odd to say that the issue has _always_ been frames, after specifying that previously no queen had vastly more cores than she could use, but perhaps "Our issue has always been frames", because as soon as Redwater was part of "us" the issue became frames to put cores in.

Jonathan Gibbons

The main scene I am looking forward to is the reaction of William's family (and really, everyone) to the news that William is not only harrowed, but has been so since he was a baby. That will especially be a shock to his mother and sister. The Blackstones learning, probaly after getting captured, would also be quite a scene. All their assumptions about William as a royal lapdog thrown out with a single word. Assuming that they didn't realize right about the time their ships start exploding by non-magic means.

Andrew Lechner

Whelp, Eleanor going to get a wake-up call real quick. She's making a lot of assumptions based on very little information. But ah, the time for glorious war is finally here!

Maddest Hatter

Ah, time for war, glorious war. The Blackstones are about to charge headlong into William's guns, and they have no idea of the danger that awaits. I am puzzled about William's promise not to seek the throne. Maybe he really is content to serve under a elven monarchy so long as slavery is abolished. More likely, in my opinion, he will simply seek to destroy the throne rather than claim it.

Andrew Lechner

One thought I've had while reading this chapter is would a conventional engine plus aether core shard have a better flight profile then just a petrol powered plane? Lindholm has an excessive number of cores at this point. The planes could only be flown at full power by mages but William has access to some mages.

Alex LordThorsen

Amazing chapter, and brilliant lawyering that William is agreeing to a geas to ensure that he doesn't want the throne, but still allowing him to overthrow the government and install a new system instead. In return he didn't even agree to share everything he knows, just what he's already built. He hasn't even gotten to jets and radar yet, which would still make him absolutely untouchable. And to top it all off he's getting the Crown to speed up production and distribution of technology that will inevitably shift power to plebians. Yelena has just agreed to the end of her rule (and the foundations of her civilization) no matter which way things turn out. A scene from Griffith's perspective would be lovely, maybe with some plotting to bring Will under control by Yelena and Tyana. If they aren't able to control Will via threats to him, trying to control him by tying him into their bloodline with a child seems like a logical next step.

Jay

Yes i will claim he wasnt really harmed by feudalism. Because thats not feudalism thats just property rights and sexism. Marriage deals still happen in some parts of the world between rich people. A kid being denied something or forced into something they dont want isnt a characteristic of feudalism. It happens im everything from the most liberal of democracies to the most authoritarian one party state. Sure the reasons might differ, but it can and does happen. I was trying to point out that shes educated and will know about the topic. The roman empire wasnt feudal, as feudalism is a specific social system. Sure there are many versions of feudalism, but they have common traits not shared with other forms of aristocratic and monarchic rule. I agree that she probably has other priorities at the moment. And yes you do need to deliniate between reader and charter knowledge. She heared how wiliam phrased himself, how he said the oath he offered. She knows that the exact terms are important. This is all knowledge she has and her not reacting to it is in my opinion detrimental storywise. Her only focus in that secene to me seems to be wiliam. And as you pointed out her magic matter alot to her so she would be paying attention. To her they are talking about a very important thing, she wouldnt in my opinion half ass it. I agree that the other matters might mean she would think it through fully, but she wouldn't need to to have concerns and change the term. Eitherway i think those changes would add to the story overall in the long term. It would create situation create preasure on wiliam in how he acts and what choices he makes.

morten.p.h

Replying to @missionz3r0 - That wasn't my second comment, it was my third. :)

Trevayne

I know. there was initially a error where he referred to Summerfield as Ashfield. but he has since changed it.

Morpheus

As for other scenes to include, I would second the suggestion for a meeting with his mother and the other Ashfields. It might be even better to include it later on, after the Blackstones have been crushed. I can just see him telling Janet Ashfield "Do you still think the Blackstones are going to win Mother?" Bonus points if the question is right after Eleanor's execution.

Trevayne

I'm thinking Zuhkov from death of Stalin

MaybeASquid

I tried to think of what I wanted to see from sect or space over steampunk, and am coming up woefully empty As for scenes 1. The family's reaction to understanding Will is harrowed. My favorite excerpts so far have been from his family's POV 2. Award ceremony 3. Meeting among Wills wives 4. Will cooking and eating a meal with his team and wives 5. What's in the research queue

MaybeASquid

Replying to @Admiralthrawnbar - I thought he said I can make only one comment regarding a future scene and any other comments on future scenes have to go under that one.

Trevayne

Err, given William's childhood of constantly being told no to pretty much everything he really wants, can you really say he wasn't harmed by feudalism, seriously? This is a different world. What European monarchs may have known about their past is not relevant. The only previous government we know about is the Elven world empire and it was probably also somewhat feudal. The wood elves may have a different arrangement, but nobody knows what it is. The Dwarves may have a Venetian Republic type deal, but nobody else seems to use it. As for the technology deal, the Queen almost certainly thinks these are the key technologies, the ones she needs now to survive the civil war she thinks (correctly) may be coming. Maybe he has some other tricks, maybe not, but she needs everything on the Jellyfish so she is willing to deal with that. The other thing you are failing to account for is this is probably not Yelena at her best as a negotiator. She has just survived a battle that ended a couple of hours ago in which she was nearly killed. She is still running her government as it struggles to deal with the disaster in the capital and she has to prepare for a civil war. To say she is not one hundred percent focused on this negotiation is an understatement. Maybe she would have picked up on your points if this was the only thing she was worried about, but it very clearly isn't. Her big worry now is surviving the civil war in the next month. She then gets to see if the Solites (and possibly the Lunites) want to try again, assuming Lindholm is too weakened by the casualties from the civil war. Only if she is still on the throne after that do William's plans matter.

Trevayne

Oooh! And William cooking for them all!

The Fire Piper

I was originally planning to say more Sexy Sect Babes. But I'm addicted to George.... I mean William's adventures.

Stormtrooper

First of we cant say wiliam has suffered because of feudalism at all. I also agree that george is more in control most of the time, its simply think that point of contention would make for intresting story telling. And could help high light internal conflict in wiliam. Which would help explore him as a character. It would add alot to him story wise that i think is lacking thus far. Second yelana doesn't have to think he wants to abolish the monarchy. That wasn't my point, but he might still want someone hes not related to on the thrown instead of her. Shes smart enough to know of the concept of a puppet ruler. And peasant revolts were a thing that feudal rulers had to deal with. Though i find that unlikely her. Feudalism is probably not the only political system to have ever existed, and even European feudal monarchas often had some knowlage of the old greek city states and the roman republic. Or they had advisors who did. On the technolgy i agree she probably thinks its likely its everything. And in my opinion the storey overall would benefit if it was as it would prevent the sexy sect babes book three problem. But my point is the second he specifies it she should become suspicious after all why would he specify on the jellyfish or on his lands she should be asking herself if he has something thats yet to be develop simply for lack of time or something outside his lands. She is a competent politican and ruler. She knows how to keep secrets. She knows how to play games with secrets and especially word games. If she wasnt competent she would have already lost the throne or more of its supporters.

morten.p.h

“We shift our focus westward,” she said, voice decisive. “We have wasted enough energy on distant colonies when the true war is right in front of us.” Does she mean eastward? This is the Lunite empress talking about the Solite enemy, right?

22junk

William inner dialogue confirming he is a disciple of Khorne?

zmessing11

Hah. My bet is you comment as you read. One you get to the end, you'll see why this second comment of yours is funny.

missionz3r0

Seeing his family reaction to his harrowed nature and reaction to him saving the day

JustShadow

Summerfield is the duchy, William and the Ashfield family are from a smaller holding (either a barony or a county, I’d assume)

Jake the L

I disagree. She is a feudal monarch. As such, she is predisposed to think of adversaries as people trying to go after her throne and take it for themselves. We have seen zero evidence of any areas not ruled by feudal monarchies where a monarch was overthrown and not replaced by another monarch. Why would Yelena think that could happen when it has never happened before? As for the tech, she has already seen William create lots of things she has never seen before. She has no idea that they are a mere fraction of what he could create. Thus, getting access to everything on the Jellyfish including the Corsairs, their engines, and their weapons seems to her like she is getting everything. We need to remember not to confuse reader knowledge with character knowledge. This, in particular, is why I am so interested in a future scene where Yelena gets to see what Xela saw when she made her geas with William to keep his secrets. I also disagree that William and George are really separate people. Occasionally, I think "William" reacts based on his upbringing in Lindholm, but 95% of the time George is running things. In particular, why would William disagree with what George is trying to do? He suffered under a domestic monarchy, right alongside George.

Trevayne

I’d like to second the award ceremony scene. Everyone deserves some recognition for their deeds thus far. (I also imagine William looking like a North Korean general at the end of the war.)

OrangeSpaceProgram

For extra scene suggestions 1. Griffith having a crisis that the guy she's in love with is a harrowed. 2. His MOM having a crisis that her SON is a harrowed 3. Feelings talk between William and Verity. 4. The other twin sister's fate, and Will being asked just what he loaded into their shard. 5. Marlene scene. I'm honestly not sure what, but given she's been basically his main confidant, I kinda want them to have a scene of some kind 6. Tyana talking to him about being harrowed. Given her interest I almost expect a scientist sort of research talk. 7. Yelena's accommodations during the reconstruction, (unless she just stays at a base or something, which wouldn't be to interesting) 8. Ozlenya and just WHAT is up with her animosity for her family. 9. The reaction/party of his plebeian pilots once they return home victorious. 10. Something super sexxy? He haven't had that in a bit come to think of it.

Morpheus

Introducing the twins to wire guided bombs ala fritz X for their bomber. Truly make them untouched while lethal.

Ben

Oh, I think thats a grand idea.

The Fire Piper

But thats the thing they already see harowed people as volatile, she shouldnt need to and she has more than enough perspective to realize there would be other ways for wiliam to threaten her position without breaking that oath. So the oath shouldnt be enough, i also think she should react to wiliam saying everything currently on the jellyfish. She again doesnt seem to be meant to be stupid, in fact its pointed out that wiliam doesn't think she is if i remember correctly. When she says everything she should mean it, and therefore she should question why wiliam then specifies. She knows shes dealing with an problem thats to a degree out of context. She doesn't really lack imagination we have seen no evidence of that, its just that most of the tech wiliam has in his head are outside what she usually works with. Though i agree she doesn't have as much leverage would be optimal. On another i do belive it would be better story wise if that wasn't a goal or if it casued conflict vetween wiliam and george. After all we have seen enough indications that those are two different people, not a fusion into one. We see that during the oathbreaker rant with his mom and on the jellyfish last chapter, and around his sister. That would be interesting to explore.

morten.p.h

Ashfield county under Summerville Duchy. Get the Duchy, you get all under it

JR9364

I hope the new book will show us proper riflemen. Lets see how blackstone handles a M1 Garand or a Mauser

Darth

Yup, Steampunk Babes is definately my favorite thus far. Keeps getting better and better. As far as what I would like to see inbetween books is a downtime scene with William and all of his women kicking back and maybe getting a little saucy with each other over Williams attention ;)

The Fire Piper

Elenore Blackstones push south looks like it's going to run into some orc-shaped obstacles soon. Once the word gets out as to the orc's involvement in the attack the Blackstones are gonna need to leave behind a decent chunk of their fleet or vassals forces to protect against the Free Orcs new ships, otherwise they're gonna take a lot of damage to their homes while they fight the royal navy

Logan

I too and excited for more factorio with punch wizards

Admiralthrawnbar

I almost feel sorry for the Blackstones. They think they’re at the tip of the spear tech wise and the reality is they’ve badly misjudged what’s going on because they’re still operating within the framework of the existing paradigm. They’re going to be dealing with two separate arms revolutions from two separate parties that both hate them. I’m sure the size of their fleet and skill of their crews will count for a lot but this sounds like a WW2 pacific situation. If they don’t win quickly they’re going to lose badly. Should be fun to watch. If you’re going to add scenes, Blue, I wouldn’t mind something with the Twins or a reaction from Willian’s family. But this was quite enjoyable so thank you.

Sea Wolf

Dude already broke the one rule he was given twice and it hasn't even been an hour

Admiralthrawnbar

My request for final scenes to the book: 1. The Queen's award ceremony for William and others, followed by 2. William's award ceremony for the new Ace pilots, including Top Ace Mary Sue! 😜

David Ellis

Talking about extra content, I would be interested to see a post audience scene between Yelena and her spy master about how they completely missed Redwater's developments.

Dragoon

Cliffs this good should be a warcrime. I know what series I'll be voting for lol

Mathrian

The problem is she lacks leverage and imagination. She needs William's tech to defend Lindholm. He has offered a binding geas that he will not attempt to put himself or his family on her throne. To her, that is enough. She doesn't realize that he wants to strip the throne of power. Her imagination doesn't go that far yet. For that matter, she also doesn't that William's magic is not nearly as important to him that hers is to her.

Trevayne

I really wonder who's grinning at the end of the first scene....i have this image in my head of William and the shadow of an old man behind him with a devilish grin.

Caleb Gurney

Thank you!

Andrew

I think they’re likely just trying to prevent someone from collecting what’s left of the engine. As far as the common folk and other nobles know, those were simply strange and loud shards. Collecting or destroying them staves off the public recognition of artificial cores just a bit longer which is an advantage for our boy

ZBTmaniac

Thinking about it, the scene inspired by this chapter that I would most like to see in the next book is the shared dream to form the geas between William and the Queen. If she could see what Xela saw, she might well ask how his world was governed to create those marvels. That could lead to a discussion of why William thinks democracy is better than a feudal monarchy. That could lead to a political discussion where she asks if there are any monarchies in William's world. If he is honest, he will mention the British and various other examples as decent governments with little power for the monarch and Saudi Arabia and North Korea as examples of problematic monarchical power. He could ask her, how do you ensure a monarch is a good ruler and how can you get rid of them if they aren't.

Trevayne

So the Blackstones take the capitals weakness as a chance to attack. I imagine William would of guessed that action to be a highly likely event. How long until the attack, a few days, a week? I'm guessing 1 to 2 weeks tops. Williams been busy creating planes so.e other weapons we know about. I wonder what other surprises he'll have for the Blackstone fleet. He wants their territory "once they are all dead" he's got a plan and weapons already waiting for them.

MS

I am the only one hoping that the queen places some broader limitations on wiliams oath. Like she knows hes harrowed and that he doesn't seem to care about alot the things other do. I kinda hope she broadens the limitations William mentioned to something like taking no action that threatens the crown, or shall not lead or aid any rebelion against the crown. After all shes supposed to be someone with alot experience in politics and legal rulings. I think it would add like overall as i feel like Williams victories have been just undesserved, especially when i dont really think we know him as a character at all really.

morten.p.h

Agreed. It is interesting to see that Tala is more unsure. She has at least had direct contact with William. I expect part of the problem with Eleanor is that she is getting older and wants to see what she sees as the triumph of House Blackstone while she is still leading it. From the elvish perspective, her short lifespan is leading her to rush things. Granted, she is also trying to take advantage of an opponent's perceived weakness, before the crown can get itself back together.

Trevayne

was the duchy "summerfield"? isnt william's mom ashfield?

Morpheus

I’ve really warmed to this iteration of the Sexy Babes franchise. Congrats Fishcake, you’ve done it again you mad bastard. Saying that, I think we all know what the results of the vote are going to be 👀 Jack Johannsen, my beloved, it’s time for your mighty return!

Toby

Great update, and I am honored by the attention. Lots to think about. In no particular order, it looks like Eleanor Blackstone is going for it. She has gotten the basic information, that William's carrier defeated the attacking under ships and that it carries 30-40 shards. She doesn't seem to think there is anything odd about those shards. From the discussion between William and the Queen with Griffith and Tyana, it looks like the other two need to bring Tyana up to speed. She clearly is not as familiar with William's antics as they are.

Trevayne

Second to last paragraph doubts is split

Cordell Patrick

Is "Ashfield" meant to be "Summerfield" in the opening section?

Arkyrion

Love the work as always. Good steampunk books are rare.

Batou

Quibble, I think the Queen means Summerfield when she says Ashfield. Summerfield is the duchy becoming vacant that the eldest twin will get. Ashfield was William's original birth family in this world.

Trevayne

Ya know, for the stereotype of arrogant elves, it's the Human Blackstone matriarch that's really coming off as the most arrogant here. She's underestimating and dismissing Will, the Crown, the Free Orcs and the continental empires all at the same time lol.

Bellboy

Third! Where is my consolation price?

Deinos

Second. I wonder why there are Corsairs being recovered by balloons. At a guess, some of the pilots felt safer trying an emergency landing rather than bailing out.

Trevayne

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