Naruto: Rogue - Chapter 3 - The Fox and the Lonely Flute
Added 2024-10-21 13:02:26 +0000 UTCChapter 3 - COMPLETE
Man, on a roll with this one.
Summary: Naruto, in the midst of his training, has a chance encounter with an orphan girl, which throws him into the path of what would become known as one of Konoha's bloodiest and most infamous nights...
(Don't worry, more DBZ updates on the way. Maybe some Halloween themed ones as well.)
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CHAPTER LIST:
Chapter 1 - Prologue - https://www.patreon.com/posts/98583415
Chapter 2 - A New Ninja Way - https://www.patreon.com/posts/113365312
Chapter 3 - The Fox and the Lonely Flute - https://www.patreon.com/posts/114420295
Chapter 4 - Blood and Family - https://www.patreon.com/posts/naruto-rogue-4-118995637
Comments
Awww that ending was nice. 🥰
MDD
2024-12-30 19:58:32 +0000 UTCAlways lots of room for improvement. As he will discover, he is a fish in a big lake.
TWF
2024-12-30 14:36:00 +0000 UTC*Pg. 51* **Top 5 Panels** 🥰🥰🥰 Our Girl’s Finally in the right Hands **Bottom 3 Panels** 🥹 their first interaction! 🥲 I am so happy to see her with him now I can’t stand it
GamerLegend09
2024-12-30 14:30:16 +0000 UTC*Pg. 50* **Top 3 Panels** The best Boyfriend you’ll ever have **Bottom Panel** 😏 Yet 😏😏😏😏😈
GamerLegend09
2024-12-30 14:21:30 +0000 UTCNaruto is getting ALL THE BITCHES.........believe it!
Key JX
2024-12-30 14:04:55 +0000 UTCBelieve it……😃!?
GamerLegend09
2024-12-30 13:50:33 +0000 UTC😏 not Babbayaga?
GamerLegend09
2024-12-30 13:43:57 +0000 UTCNaruto basically kicked these guys's asses with ease and still says I need to get stronger little man I think only a chunin and up could match you
Chase Garcia
2024-12-29 13:38:09 +0000 UTC*Pg. 49 Pt. 2* **Bottom Left Panel** 😌 Ahh don’t beat yourself up over it, 😁 with your Level of Strength (😏 in the TWF-Verse) I imagine it’s hard to find that Gray area between Holding Back and Killing a Bad Guy
GamerLegend09
2024-12-29 13:32:21 +0000 UTC🤣😂🤣😂Naruto is the damn boogeyman 😂🤣😂🤣
The Jonizuka
2024-12-29 13:28:16 +0000 UTC*Pg. 49* 😩 FINALLY!! 😣 that was just too painful to watch (🤭 really enjoyed the finisher though, 😁 and that look he gave him before he Struck too)
GamerLegend09
2024-12-29 13:26:33 +0000 UTC*Pg. 48* **Top 2 Panels** 🤴🏻 have you not yet realized the weight of your Inferiority? **Middle Panels 3 Panels** 😑 I give him an E- for sheer Stupidity **Bottom 2 Panels** 😒 and an F for his Dumbfounded persistence
GamerLegend09
2024-12-29 13:22:20 +0000 UTCI love your Naruto work and I love this Badass Naruto, truly Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Omar DeLaHoz
2024-12-28 13:36:57 +0000 UTCIt'll be over in the next page or two. Naruto battles do go considerably longer than most Dragonball battles (5 min Namek time not withstanding.)
TWF
2024-12-28 13:23:53 +0000 UTCProbably cause those guys are thugs at best, but it's getting a bit boring.
Julian Fratzscher
2024-12-28 12:25:31 +0000 UTC*Pg. 47* 😑 no…really…what Scenario…😒 if our boy could take your Gang and smash your Shurikens apart like Tiny little clumps of Dirt, who’s to say he won’t rip off your manhood from your body for all the Torture you’ve wrecked!? (😅 sorry if that was a little too Graphic, 😍😍😍 Tayuya’s been my Favorite of the Sound Five Ninja Team ever since I’ve seen her first appearance in chapter 118)
GamerLegend09
2024-12-28 05:41:09 +0000 UTC*Pg. 46* 🙂↔️🙂↔️in what scenario was this a good idea you Guile Street Fighter Wannabe
GamerLegend09
2024-12-28 05:26:58 +0000 UTC*Pg. 45* **Top 2 Panels** 🤨 Y’know…🤔 you’re not wrong. **Bottom Right 2 Panels** 😕 this poor little Girl **Bottom Left Panel** 😑 This Damned Idiot
GamerLegend09
2024-12-28 05:20:06 +0000 UTCNSFW Naruto Vortex Penetrator vs The Fury Tama Fox
Key JX
2024-12-28 04:34:25 +0000 UTC*Pg. 44* 😥🙏🏻 oh god please be a Male
GamerLegend09
2024-12-28 04:26:21 +0000 UTC"Ah moment"😭
De'Andrae White
2024-12-27 07:19:55 +0000 UTCPage 45 It was at this moment he knew...he f***ed up
Qrow Nightshade
2024-12-27 05:13:48 +0000 UTCI'll have to go back and read that then. But fair enough. Idk how I feel about Naruto mastering anything at such a young age, but I trust your judgement so we'll see how it goes. I just don't want Naruto to be insanely broken to the point he's able to go through enemies with relative ease as that removes stakes, as well as an opportunity for Naruto to grow as well as rely on his teammates, and learn from any defeats he may face. Sorry for the trouble.
Ds179
2024-12-27 05:12:17 +0000 UTCUhh... this was covered in Chapter 2, not sure if you read it yet. The text in his training manual specifically outlined what Uzuken was and what it was developed for, and he learned the fundamental aspects of its mechanics in the last few months and mastered it while training with the Fox Goddess's familiars. I'm sure you remember the feats he could accomplish with his bouldering training. It was very clearly outlined what his specialisation is and what he could do this his clans type of training. When Team 7 is formed, the three members will specialise in these specific attributes of shinobi combat. Naruto: Taijutsu and Fuinjutsu Sasuke: Kenjutsu and Ninjutsu Sakura: Jiujitsu and Genjutsu I'm going to focus on the ninja triangle aspect and original premise Kishimoto originally set up with his story with Team 7s structure, but he never followed through on, and this will start with Narutos skillet being polished up in preparation for that.
TWF
2024-12-27 02:20:31 +0000 UTCHmm...I'm torn on the matter. On one hand I do like the idea of Naruto being highly advance for his age, but what I fear is that you're going to make him borderline OP, and that will be a detriment to other characters as well as himself. That and him also winning every fight as I feel there's lessons in defeats. A warrior who never fails, never learns. So while I'm iffy in regards to the idea of Naruto teaching these bullies a lesson, him developing a style to overcome gentle fist? How exactly did he know about the gentle fist anyways as that's supposedly a fighting style specifically towards the Hyuuga? I'd understand if he spent time with Hinata and she told him about it, but to specifically develop a style to counter gentle fist at his age, feels like a hard sell. It's trendy waters if you ask me, as Naruto while he is strong, there has to be limits. Otherwise he'll end up being a Gary Stu, and that's one of the things I hate about Isekai characters with the exception of 3 (Subaru, Rudeus, Kazama). On a side note I do love the Durarara reference you did with Naruto acting like Shizuo.
Ds179
2024-12-27 01:23:09 +0000 UTCMerry Christmas everybody and holly hell Naruto is bringing in the hurt very masterfully and I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
EtheVoice
2024-12-26 20:51:12 +0000 UTCwell he gave those bullies emotional damage
Chase Garcia
2024-12-26 17:24:06 +0000 UTC*Pg. 43* **Top and Middle Panel** 😯 oohhh **Bottom 2 Panels** 😰 aw geez now I hope they are a Male so I won’t feel too bad about their injury……😖 Yeowch!!
GamerLegend09
2024-12-26 13:52:40 +0000 UTCGood Lord, that was vicious, I don't know if her arm will heal properly, I'm just surprised that she isn't screaming yet.
Robert Walker
2024-12-26 13:43:50 +0000 UTCI hope this Christmas was very merry to you 🎄
The Jonizuka
2024-12-26 12:24:04 +0000 UTC*Pg. 42* **Top Panel** 🥸 either these men are dead or my watch has stopped **Middle Right Panel** From the look on His Face they’re gonna feel that one tomorrow **Middle Left Panel** 😬 Ohh boy **Bottom Panel** wait…🤨 “is” that a boy?……from a distance I assumed they were a Female but up close they look more like male
GamerLegend09
2024-12-26 10:36:22 +0000 UTC*Pg. 41* **Top Panel** ☺️ I love that Shatter Frame **Middle Panel** 😇🙏🏻 you deserve this **Bottom Panel** 😆 BAM!!!
GamerLegend09
2024-12-26 09:58:56 +0000 UTC*Pg. 40* **Top & Middle Panel** 🤕ooo I felt that one…😏 not sorry for them though **Bottom Panel** 😑 you sir have the right to receive DOUBLE the Damage for the use of a Potentially Lethal Weapon (😒 regardless of it being wooden or not)
GamerLegend09
2024-12-26 09:49:44 +0000 UTCThank you. Good to be back.
TWF
2024-12-26 09:48:11 +0000 UTCThings have been busy. I enjoyed Christmas very much. Hope you had a good one too, friend.
TWF
2024-12-26 09:47:58 +0000 UTC*Pg. 39* **Top Right Panel** 🙃 foot **Top Left Panel** I’m gonna assume that Girl’s from the “Branch” House of the Hyuga Clan….why else would a Hyuga turn over to the bad side **Middle & Bottom Panel** ☺️ fast…just like his dad
GamerLegend09
2024-12-26 09:37:07 +0000 UTCHey I hope you truly had a blessed Christmas!!! It's good to see you back, I do hope things are going wel!!
Robert Walker
2024-12-26 08:49:08 +0000 UTCWelcome back Write🙏🏾
De'Andrae White
2024-12-26 08:47:21 +0000 UTCIt's been a looong week. I have family and extended family from overseas visiting, and I had a party and Christmas prep. Also, I was gonna do more stuff this morning but wouldn't you know it, I have to run an errand to deliver a relatives passport, since they forgot it.
TWF
2024-12-25 23:05:32 +0000 UTCWhen is the next update?! 😡
MDD
2024-12-25 20:16:13 +0000 UTCThank you for your understanding. Merry Xmas.
TWF
2024-12-24 05:51:55 +0000 UTCAwesome thank you for letting me know also Marry Xmas
Jesus
2024-12-24 02:28:08 +0000 UTCIts Christmas. Kinda hard to get stuff done with other family commitments. It's not finished yet. Still ongoing.
TWF
2024-12-24 02:27:14 +0000 UTCIs this chapter completed or still ongoing.
Jesus
2024-12-24 02:01:53 +0000 UTCAmazing work love the story you have a great imagination.
Joseph c guillory
2024-12-19 22:38:13 +0000 UTC😌 well played sir
GamerLegend09
2024-12-17 00:03:55 +0000 UTCHad bro hittin the windmill type shit😭🤣
De'Andrae White
2024-12-16 20:02:01 +0000 UTCLol. I was waiting for you to comment on the anime reference. But it looks like I did a good job choosing a more obscure reference this time.
TWF
2024-12-16 03:44:46 +0000 UTCIt was Durarara!! 🤦🏻♂️how did I miss that?!, 😬 I’ve watched that Anime over 50 times!
GamerLegend09
2024-12-16 03:27:45 +0000 UTClol. Shizuo Hiwajima. Anime: Durarara!!
TWF
2024-12-15 22:22:12 +0000 UTCYooooo, I know that clothes flying off reference but for the love of everything I can’t remember what anime it was
DarkTitan5010
2024-12-15 18:38:37 +0000 UTC"Now that my knuckles are warmed up, we can begin."
Julian Fratzscher
2024-12-15 16:58:53 +0000 UTC*Pg. 38* **Top Panel** 😦 and STILL going **Middle 2 Panels** Yup, it’s real **Bottom 2 Panels** 🫤 well…..🤷🏻♂️😊 he’s not wrong
GamerLegend09
2024-12-15 14:50:27 +0000 UTC*Pg. 37* 😳 straight up knocked the clothes off
GamerLegend09
2024-12-15 14:43:33 +0000 UTCI forget the anime but I've seen the clip your referencing that was good
Killer RakeemStar
2024-12-15 14:42:56 +0000 UTC*Pg. 36* 😵 OOHHH!!!!!
GamerLegend09
2024-12-15 14:41:06 +0000 UTC*Pg. 35* 😨😬…meep
GamerLegend09
2024-12-15 14:39:43 +0000 UTC*Pg. 34* **Top 2 Panels** ……the silence is real **Middle 2 Panels** Girlie, you better duck. Dumbasses….. ya betta pray **Bottom 2 Panels** 😳😳😳 Holy Shit that’s Hardcore
GamerLegend09
2024-12-15 14:35:25 +0000 UTCHow fast one must be to spin off their clothes?
Efiong Uwah
2024-12-15 14:27:21 +0000 UTCShizuo Heiwajima type shit on pg 36 Punch that boy so hard that he made somersaults out of his clothes ☠️
The Jonizuka
2024-12-15 14:23:44 +0000 UTCNaruto: Tekkai!
Julian Fratzscher
2024-12-13 21:56:38 +0000 UTC*Pg. 33* **Top Right Panel** 😅 it’s no act bub **Top Middle & Left Panel** 😉 I doubt even a Smart Thug would take an out (😊 well…maybe 4 times out of 10 **Bottom 2 Panels** 😳😳😳!!!……..🤦🏻♂️! ,🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️!! ,🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️!!! ,🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️!!!!!
GamerLegend09
2024-12-13 17:49:03 +0000 UTC😊 Mate take as long as you need
GamerLegend09
2024-12-13 17:27:28 +0000 UTC*Rock Thrown at the back of his head* 👊🏿 CRASHOUT UZUMAKI!!!! 👊🏿 coming to a theater near you 🫡
The Jonizuka
2024-12-13 15:56:38 +0000 UTCPg. 33 It's ggs for the whole gang🙏🏾🤣
De'Andrae White
2024-12-13 15:26:29 +0000 UTCThis is giving me dragon of dojima vibe
Chase Garcia
2024-12-13 15:10:06 +0000 UTCOof. I just finished my period of work. I was on death's door yesterday. Sorry for not many updates. Fatigue hit me hard. Will recover and bounce back shortly for these holidays. :)
TWF
2024-12-13 15:08:14 +0000 UTC*Pg. 32* **Top Right Panel** 🙄 y’all must think ur real tough ganging up on a girl like that **Top Left Panel** 🤨 waitaminute don’t these idiots know he has the 9 tails in him? **Middle Right Panel** 🤭 I’m sorry I can’t take this “Leader” seriously when I’m thinking that hair’s compensating for something **Middle Left Panel** 😏 Dropouts, I figured…the Scratched up Headbands on few of the members gave it away for me……..☺️ next to their Yakuza poser-like attire too of course **Bottom Right Panel** 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 **Bottom Center & Left Panel** 😌 oh he’s smooth….calming her with just a Glance of his guaranteed expression for her safety
GamerLegend09
2024-12-11 13:35:32 +0000 UTC*Pg. 31* **Top 2 Panels** 😆 YOINK!! **Bottom Right 2 Panels** 🙂 and there it is **Bottom Left Panel** 🥰Their First Encounter🥰🥰🥰
GamerLegend09
2024-12-10 23:03:45 +0000 UTC*Pg. 30* **Top Right** 🙁 aww what? **Top Left** 😠 excuse you!? **Bottom Right 2 Panels** 😤 oooo I wanna kick his ass so bad **Bottom Left Top Panel** 😑 that says a lot about your capacity bub **Bottom Left Lower 2 Panels** ⌚️🧐 and 3…2…1…
GamerLegend09
2024-12-10 22:30:58 +0000 UTCPotentially.
TWF
2024-12-10 19:59:27 +0000 UTCIs that the same flute she'd be using in canon? (Also, saw a theory that Tayuya might be an Uzumaki. Any thoughts on that? )
Julian Fratzscher
2024-12-10 15:53:55 +0000 UTCThat face tells me he’s playing nice and is ready to throw hands, if the chapter cover wasn’t enough of an example
DarkTitan5010
2024-12-10 14:28:03 +0000 UTCPg 30 THE CHAMP IS HERE!!!!!!
The Jonizuka
2024-12-10 13:56:02 +0000 UTC😁 you caught that too huh? 😊 good eye
GamerLegend09
2024-12-10 02:22:02 +0000 UTCOh wow you used a line from Aladdin nice. And her first act of kindness will Come from Naruto.
Robert Walker
2024-12-09 06:21:16 +0000 UTC*Pg. 29* **Top Right** 😅 why does that Ninja on the Right remind me of a Hyuga? **Top Left Panel** “I’d say she’s more like a RAT than anything else” ……Like a…😏 “Street” Rat? 😏😏😏 **Bottom Right Panel** 😠 Hey! She’s still a Girl ya Jerk-off show some tact **Bottom Left 2 Panels** 😑 clearly Thug F didn’t have much of an Edumacation to tell the difference between a Blow Gun from a Woodwind Instrument
GamerLegend09
2024-12-08 17:59:54 +0000 UTC*Pg. 28 Pt. 2* **Top Right Panel** 😯 ooo 😄 what a lovely background **Top Left Panel** 🙁 poor kid **Middle 2 Panels** 😫 Girl can’t catch a break!? **Bottom 2 Panels** 😖 Crap!!
GamerLegend09
2024-12-08 17:38:00 +0000 UTC*Pg. 28* 🎶😄 just a little snack guys🎶 (😆 couldn’t resist)
GamerLegend09
2024-12-06 15:18:42 +0000 UTCPg. 27 And there we have Tayuya.
Julian Fratzscher
2024-12-06 07:46:11 +0000 UTC*Pg. 27* **Top 2 Panels** 😆 I F#####G LOVE ONIGIRI **Middle 2 Panels** 😕 hm? **Bottom 2 Panels** 🫢 (Gasp) 🤩🤩🤩 YES!!
GamerLegend09
2024-12-06 04:07:06 +0000 UTC*Pg. 26* 😉 now that is Konoha’s Best Neighbor right there
GamerLegend09
2024-12-02 00:28:08 +0000 UTC*Pg. 25* 😁 take it in Fellas, that Strength is au natural (😆 that Eye Bulge though)
GamerLegend09
2024-12-02 00:11:49 +0000 UTCFair enough but it was a mule
Robert Walker
2024-12-01 23:57:41 +0000 UTC😂Except no goat this time (Penelope) 😂😂😂
GamerLegend09
2024-12-01 23:35:23 +0000 UTCReminds me of Hercules.
Robert Walker
2024-12-01 15:27:20 +0000 UTCPg 25 Naruto got the overpowered country strength 💪🏿
The Jonizuka
2024-12-01 10:28:33 +0000 UTC☺️ Happy Thanksgiving Joseph 🍁🦃🍽
GamerLegend09
2024-11-29 17:58:42 +0000 UTCHappy thanksgiving.And thank you for making so many wonderful works of art.
Joseph c guillory
2024-11-29 05:51:01 +0000 UTC*Pg. 24* **Top Right Panel** 😬 oof, yeah there’s no fixing that **Top Left Panel** 😃 oh hey he looks like Brock **Middle 2 Panels** 😄😄😄 and he’s a friendly! Ohh thank goodness 😅 now he’s got the type of face you’d want to be friends with **Bottom 2 Panels** Yup 🙆🏻♂️, our boy’s got this
GamerLegend09
2024-11-29 02:52:57 +0000 UTCTime for our young boy to flex
DarkTitan5010
2024-11-28 12:49:47 +0000 UTC*Pg. 23* **Top 4 Panels** 😊😊😊 look at this Kid being all chipper an junk **Bottom Panel** 😐 ohhh…..😥Careful kid…you have friends now but things could still get ugly
GamerLegend09
2024-11-27 16:17:16 +0000 UTC☺️ once they get better of course
GamerLegend09
2024-11-22 17:15:46 +0000 UTCMore to come.
TWF
2024-11-21 13:54:04 +0000 UTCI am so happy naruto is making friends early in his childhood then getting hated by everyone else.i love your stories 💗 💕 ❤️ 💖.
Joseph c guillory
2024-11-20 23:48:09 +0000 UTCIs this chapter completed or will there be new pages made
Jesus
2024-11-20 05:36:21 +0000 UTC*Pg. 22* 🥹🥹🥹 I’m not crying!! 😭😭😭😭😭YOU’RE CRYING!!!!
GamerLegend09
2024-11-16 05:55:19 +0000 UTC*Pg. 21* 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 How did you end up tasting it!!?
GamerLegend09
2024-11-12 12:58:15 +0000 UTCAll right, Solid friend bonding moment, awesome
DarkTitan5010
2024-11-10 08:16:43 +0000 UTCOwning up to your mistakes and trying to be better, nice 👍🏿. Also, nice little artist inspiration there, he kept at it and he got a lot better for it even tho he wasn’t so strong in the beginning
DarkTitan5010
2024-11-08 20:32:26 +0000 UTC*Pg. 20* 😣😣😣 oh come on I just forgave you! 😩 don’t go throwing guilt in my face on top of it!
GamerLegend09
2024-11-08 14:38:47 +0000 UTC*Pg. 19* 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰…yeah, I much prefer this non-Sasuke obsessed Sakura much more
GamerLegend09
2024-11-08 14:35:46 +0000 UTC*Pg. 18* **Top Right 2 Panels** 🤩🤩🤩 ok yeah that is cool **Top Left Panel** 😯 oh?….😏 pretty stealthy there Ino, 😎 I see you **Bottom Right 2 Panels** ☺️ yeah expect to feel that emotion a LOT **Bottom Left 2 Panels** ☺️ I’ll bet he could knock Guy Sensei’s and Lee’s socks off too from that move
GamerLegend09
2024-11-08 13:52:23 +0000 UTC*Pg. 17* **Top Right Panel** 😳 What th- 😠 Where’d she pop up from!? **Top Left Panel** 🤨 wait wuhh? **Bottom Right Panel** 🥰 mmmm **Bottom Left Top Panel** 😧 ugh…. 😤 well she certainly changed her tune quick **Bottom Left Lower Panel** 😐…..🫤…..😌 alright she passed the Tama Test so I guess I can forgive and forget (🎶Happy by Pharrell Williams Plays🎶)
GamerLegend09
2024-11-08 13:16:52 +0000 UTCIt also helps making Iruka more sympathetic.
Julian Fratzscher
2024-11-07 13:46:10 +0000 UTC*Pg. 14* **Top Middle and Right Panel** 😁 that smile’s as bright as the Sun **Top Left Panel** 🥰 dawww look at this father-figure in the making **Bottom Right 2 Panels** 🙃 the intelligence on our boy could probably give Shikamaru a run for his money **Bottom Left 2 Panels** ☺️☺️☺️ is it even possible to turn off the cute with Tama? Even a grown adult like Iruka would be admiring them😉
GamerLegend09
2024-11-07 12:54:18 +0000 UTC😗…….😌 ok that’s fair,
GamerLegend09
2024-11-07 12:29:54 +0000 UTCThere was a poor transition between Iruka reacting to Naruto's technique and Naruto hugging Tama, so we went back and added two additional pages of Iruka thinking back on Naruto's development. My favourite scene was Iruka reacting to ALL the furniture in his classroom being bolted to the ceiling- implying Naruto did that as a prank.
TWF
2024-11-07 12:25:04 +0000 UTCIf this theory comes to fruition then at least he can be redeemed in the Rogue universe
GamerLegend09
2024-11-06 15:57:53 +0000 UTC😁💢 I almost missed that Sneak page 🙂 but hey these things happen…😉 could happen to anyone really
GamerLegend09
2024-11-06 15:55:44 +0000 UTC*Pg. 13* **Top 3 Panels** 😆 hah, Classics **Bottom 2 Panels** You could even say he’s developed a certain “Spiritual” Guidance 😏😏😏
GamerLegend09
2024-11-06 15:53:40 +0000 UTCHmm, Danzo has made his appearance, I'm guessing he will be an ally or enemy depending on the situation. I think he will definitely help Naruto get stronger because Danzo's goal is doing what he believe is best for the village so helping Konoha's Jinchūriki become stronger to be able to protect the village better would line up with said goal. So I wouldn't be surprised if a scroll suddenly appearing in Naruto's home that tells Naruto all the details of and how to use the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu.
SparkyZinger
2024-11-05 15:19:32 +0000 UTC😁 And no one’s saying you are, I’m just randomly curious by nature, besides, I understand exactly what you mean by feeling conflicted. Most Anime series show little elements of a potential relationship that you don’t know will stick or just come out of left field and surprise you with a different one. BUTT! Even if it’s sometimes not what I expected to happen canonically much like you I can still appreciate it’s tender moments that said ship gives to its fans all around 🥰🥰🥰
GamerLegend09
2024-11-05 09:49:23 +0000 UTC😌 yeah I can understand that
GamerLegend09
2024-11-05 09:42:05 +0000 UTCOookay…I think I figured something out. Naruto does indeed try that sealing technique out. On obito which causes him to lose his Kamui. In that image you showed before this chapters start.
Silverstrike
2024-11-04 15:33:52 +0000 UTCAlso I wasn’t much of a fan of SasuSsku but it’s canon they’re married so 🤷🏿. I’m not downplaying it but it’s not my favorite pairing, canon or not but hey it happened and I do like some of their moments. So not my favorite but it’s got its moments
DarkTitan5010
2024-11-04 13:46:10 +0000 UTCThat’s good to hear
DarkTitan5010
2024-11-04 13:43:34 +0000 UTCNo, and I’m not one of those fans that crazily hate her because she’s still someone I’d pick given the scenario but I never got a great attachment to her. She’s not useless but she’s not a draft pick either. Ya get what I mean
DarkTitan5010
2024-11-04 13:42:43 +0000 UTCAh, I see… I should’ve looked at the bigger picture 🙂↕️🙂↕️
GamerLegend09
2024-11-04 11:29:26 +0000 UTC😐 mixed how? Do you Ship SasuSaku?
GamerLegend09
2024-11-04 09:36:15 +0000 UTCMore like it's associated with the Uzumaki Clan, who basically pioneered the principles behind the Hiraishin. Stands to reason they developed ways to counter it.
TWF
2024-11-04 09:34:24 +0000 UTCShe's a totally different version from the Canon one. Here she doesn't develop a toxic obsession over Sasuke, but instead, due to Naruto interacting with her early, she starts moving down the path of forming a healthy crush on him.
TWF
2024-11-04 09:33:17 +0000 UTC*Pg. 16* **Top 2 Panels** 🤔 huh…. That technique has to have come from his dad’s side of the family **Bottom Right 2 Panels** 😄 oh hey like the Rasengan Training **Bottom 2 Panels** 😎 Ahhahhaaah Helloooo~
GamerLegend09
2024-11-04 09:32:49 +0000 UTC*Pg. 15* ☺️ atta boy Narut- 😳😳😳 **See’s bottom 4 Panels** 😠 aw Bull-toad Crap!
GamerLegend09
2024-11-04 09:20:12 +0000 UTC😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
GamerLegend09
2024-11-04 09:11:24 +0000 UTCOk, so the first seal works if its physically touched but the next level is when someone uses their Shunshin to stop them if they use it in the AOE. Also, is Sakura catching feels cuz I personally am mixed on that
DarkTitan5010
2024-11-04 09:05:57 +0000 UTCPg.14 Heavy foreshadowing against his Obito
De'Andrae White
2024-11-04 08:55:14 +0000 UTCNot DANZO oh my god I can feel the F***ERY BREWING ALREADY
DarkTitan5010
2024-11-04 02:49:01 +0000 UTCOh great now Danzo is interested…hope his fox lady can protect him. Also Danzo saw the fox too.
Silverstrike
2024-11-04 02:20:58 +0000 UTCOh fuck off Danzo!
Ds179
2024-11-03 23:25:09 +0000 UTCPg 12 Danziddy (Danzo Diddy) spying on a minor NO DANZIDDY!!! 👀
The Jonizuka
2024-11-03 14:41:23 +0000 UTCYou made Naruto as a prodigy just like Sasuke and that is another total shock of this manga awesomeness. But I hope they can be best friends and not hated rivals only after many years being apart and losing one of their arms later in the process over the war arc if there ever is going to be one.
EtheVoice
2024-11-01 05:04:06 +0000 UTCPg. 12 😭😭😭😭😭
De'Andrae White
2024-11-01 04:48:46 +0000 UTCI love that, when a character knows they’re strong so they have to practice restraint so they don’t overdo it. 🙏🏿
DarkTitan5010
2024-11-01 03:18:11 +0000 UTC*Pg. 12* **Top 2 Panels** Ah still a work in progress…..😁 would’ve been funny if it cut a hole In the building too. **Middle Panel** Yeah that’s right 🖕🏻😛 eat s### ya negative nancies **Bottom Right Panel** 😠 forGET! you too Ino **Bottom Left Panel** 😗 At least this teach is smart enough to know exactly what type of move he used
GamerLegend09
2024-11-01 03:05:21 +0000 UTC*Pg. 11* 😤🙌🏻 boom…….(😊love the indirect short appearance of the Uzumaki clan emblem in the Middle Right Panel)
GamerLegend09
2024-11-01 02:51:55 +0000 UTCNaruto Be Like: Now Make Me a Sandwich… extra tomato and turkey… make it snappy 🫰
The Jonizuka
2024-11-01 02:45:11 +0000 UTCAaaaaaahhhhhhhh amazing I loved the new pages
Jesus
2024-11-01 02:42:18 +0000 UTC*Pg. 10* 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 Now that’s using his element on a whole new level
GamerLegend09
2024-10-29 03:26:19 +0000 UTC*Pg. 9* **Top Right Panel** I mean… 😅 if you were near splash zone, wouldn’t you step away too? **Top Left Panel** 😊 Tama gets it ** Middle and Middle Right Panel** 😑 please make them eat your dust **Middle Left Panel** 😆 PIVOT!! **Bottom Panel** 😎 Lookit Dem Gains
GamerLegend09
2024-10-29 03:09:36 +0000 UTC*Pg. 8* 😎 It’s about time for our boy to get noticed
GamerLegend09
2024-10-29 02:35:12 +0000 UTCMan, what a bunch of no name background characters... just a flock of sheep.
Julian Fratzscher
2024-10-28 22:00:27 +0000 UTCWhy does that stance seem so familiar could someone let me know which anime that's from
Chase Garcia
2024-10-28 17:55:14 +0000 UTCNaruto on pg 9 be like: BITCH AT ME BUT SEE WHAT HAPPENS 😌
The Jonizuka
2024-10-28 15:43:21 +0000 UTCI love your Naruto art then your DBZ so this is a MASSIVE TREAT!!!!!!!!!
Omar DeLaHoz
2024-10-28 15:30:06 +0000 UTCMan, you just gave me another reason to LOVE your artwork. When it comes to hand signs, I personally love when characters can fully flex each part of their finger and seeing Naruto do exactly that for his stance hit me SOOO HARD
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-28 14:36:21 +0000 UTC😁 I’ve got a tingly good feeling about both of their looks
GamerLegend09
2024-10-28 10:51:43 +0000 UTCHmmm, Hinata and Sakura with almost the same look towards Naruto, suspicious to me but we just gotta let it play out
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-28 09:12:16 +0000 UTC😏 I wouldn’t be too worried bruh
GamerLegend09
2024-10-28 02:30:11 +0000 UTCI hope there's something between Naruto and Hinata
Aaron Burke
2024-10-27 19:04:29 +0000 UTC*Pg. 7* **Top 5 Panels** 😄 is it weird that I’m feeling a sense of pride right now? **Bottom 3 Panels** 🙃 I can’t wait to see the look on their faces
GamerLegend09
2024-10-27 15:26:01 +0000 UTC*Pg. 6* **Top 2 Panels** 😊 ever the diligent Teacher **Middle Panel** 🙄 I sure didn’t miss all the fangirling for the lone wolf type… 😏 I do like the slight change though **Bottom 2 Panels** 😅 does the teach “not” notice some students having lost heart after that recent performance? Or is he just trying to push them past that?
GamerLegend09
2024-10-27 15:21:50 +0000 UTCI love this Naruto version very much, I wonder how tall he'll grow to I wonder.
Omar DeLaHoz
2024-10-27 14:40:20 +0000 UTC*Pg. 5* Y’know I may have had my own reservations about Sasuke, 🙂 but the kid has certainly come far despite his own set of unfortunate future events in the canonical timeline
GamerLegend09
2024-10-27 14:09:46 +0000 UTCHaaaa can't wait to see the next 2 pages it'll be so amazing
Jesus
2024-10-27 08:40:14 +0000 UTCHe has, in Chapter 1 when she chased him away, thinking he was bullying Sakura. But that misunderstanding gets cleared up later. (This is a good idea you proposed. I'll consider it).
TWF
2024-10-27 08:06:39 +0000 UTCNaruto about to humiliate the whole class
Chase Garcia
2024-10-27 08:04:51 +0000 UTCQuestion: Has Naruto already meet Ino or at least one or both her parents? I ask because the Yamanaka Clan owns Flower/Gardening Store so when needing to take care of the lawn and plants of his new home, Naruto could've possibly gone to their store to get gardening supplies.
SparkyZinger
2024-10-26 21:04:07 +0000 UTC*Pg. 4* **Top 2 Panels** 🤬 yeah that’s right run off with those Tails Tucked! **Middle 2 Panels** 😊 good work kid **Bottom 3 Panels** 😏 There it is
GamerLegend09
2024-10-25 13:16:40 +0000 UTC*Pg. 3* **Top 3 Panels** 😠 ooooo these irrationally jealous little brats **Middle 2 Panels** 😌 now this is something else I’ve always wanted to see ** Bottom Panel** His own potential anger, not fueled by the 9 Tails 😈 but by pure raw Fury and emotion
GamerLegend09
2024-10-25 12:29:23 +0000 UTCHe’s got GAME, and we know he means it too
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-25 01:39:50 +0000 UTCNaruto CASA NOVA Uzumaki got game on pg 3 💪🏿
The Jonizuka
2024-10-25 00:12:27 +0000 UTCShe’s Write’s OC for this series, the first I’ve seen her was in the Naruto Harem Post 😏😏😏 (Edit) 😅😅😅😅 I also just recalled her on the 1st page/cover of Chapter 1 - Prologue
GamerLegend09
2024-10-24 00:26:50 +0000 UTCIts looking like it'll be even more amazing my respect and congrats also thank you for giving us this great managa\comic story arcs
Jesus
2024-10-23 21:44:12 +0000 UTCUh oh, who’s the girl getting bullied, obviously an Uchiha but have they ever come up before?
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-23 11:08:44 +0000 UTC*Pg. 2* **Top Right Panel** 😄 ahhah I knew I was right **Top Left Panel** 😕 aww man **Bottom Right 2 Panels** 😠 what the heck!? How’s that her fault? (💢Fully Invested now🔥) **Bottom Left Panel** ……🥺🥺🥺…😭😭😭😭😭how would anyone be mean to a purely Drawn character like her?
GamerLegend09
2024-10-23 09:22:37 +0000 UTC*Cover/Pg. 1* ☺️ Here enters my favorite sound ninja Tayuya 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
GamerLegend09
2024-10-22 09:49:31 +0000 UTC😊 happy to welcome another member to TheWriteFiction fandom
GamerLegend09
2024-10-22 09:37:25 +0000 UTC😎 this is gonna be awesome
GamerLegend09
2024-10-22 09:12:12 +0000 UTCI know I’ve seen this artwork before back when Naruto was still on the air. I was always intrigued who drawn this awesome Naruto and DBZ art. Now that I’m seeing this art having an OP Naruto Uzamaki with strange but strangely familiar powers from other shows and anime combined with this masterpiece and getting a harem of powerful ninja girls then I’m all in.
EtheVoice
2024-10-21 23:38:02 +0000 UTCThank you
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-21 22:46:55 +0000 UTCDamn would’ve watched it earlier if I hadn’t orientation to drive to👀
The Jonizuka
2024-10-21 17:50:41 +0000 UTCI'm looking forward to this new story
Jesus
2024-10-21 16:20:38 +0000 UTCNah you got it right, you're talking about Tayuya from the Sound Four
Omni
2024-10-21 15:19:46 +0000 UTCIf I’m wrong let me know
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-21 13:17:59 +0000 UTCHey, the homegirls that was with the squad that took Sauske, forgive me I haven’t watched OG Naruto in a HOT minute
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-21 13:16:57 +0000 UTCgood i can wait for gilf 2
Juan Cuellar
2024-10-21 13:07:20 +0000 UTC
