Naruto: Rogue - Chapter 2 - A New Ninja Way - COMPLETE
Added 2024-10-04 16:06:22 +0000 UTCHere's the start of the next chapter, just to keep the ball rolling and to see how this new retelling of Naruto is shaping up to be.
(P.S - Real Gs should be able to figure out the sources where the inspiration for Naruto's training featured in the first pages came from)
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CHAPTER LIST:
Chapter 1 - Prologue - https://www.patreon.com/posts/98583415
Chapter 3 - The Fox and the Lonely Flute - https://www.patreon.com/posts/114420295
Comments
I have a lot of catching up. Thanks to you my notifs are flooded with updates and post from here, I’m perfectly fine with that. lol Another good one and yet again I love how you’re taking the time to introduce this alternate world and characters before we get to the nitty-gritty. What I’m really loving so far is more exploration of the Uzumaki clan, which we’d on get mere tidbits off scattered throughout. I love the idea of each clan having their own unique taijutsu.
Chris Cannon
2024-10-30 18:02:23 +0000 UTCIncredible work.
Omar DeLaHoz
2024-10-22 22:53:41 +0000 UTC7. Same as Sasuke
TWF
2024-10-22 20:47:54 +0000 UTCHow old is Naruto again!?
AJ
2024-10-22 15:22:01 +0000 UTCOdd choice, but let's see if it can be pulled off without seeming weird.
Julian Fratzscher
2024-10-21 17:50:23 +0000 UTCOh man, so obito, the man who gave his dad such a hard time just lost his Mangekyo sharingan eye, the one which gave him his space time ninjutsu is gone…dang!!! Obito definitely didn’t expect Naruto to be there and he must have flung that small Kunai at obito so fast he did have time to activate Kamui. Now kakashi is the only one who can use Kamui.
Silverstrike
2024-10-21 03:08:03 +0000 UTC*Pg. 34* 😧 yet something else i didn’t see coming. 🤩🤩🤩 HOW EXCITING!!!
GamerLegend09
2024-10-21 00:27:07 +0000 UTC*Pg. 33* 😄 Hah, that means 2 things 😄 (😅😅😅 ohhh mama)
GamerLegend09
2024-10-21 00:13:36 +0000 UTCOnly Old School cartoon watchers would get that "Jump Good" reference, massive respect to you. Also, I like that cliffhanger, cant wait to see how that turns out
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-20 23:56:26 +0000 UTCObito is going to have a wakeup call
Chase Garcia
2024-10-20 23:18:14 +0000 UTC*Pg. 32* 😄 you know how to land too right?…….😅 right?
GamerLegend09
2024-10-20 23:17:16 +0000 UTCOn page 32 when Naruto said "Jump Good" made remember something and made realize Naruto's training was similar to a certain Samurai's training to Jump Good.
SparkyZinger
2024-10-20 20:37:20 +0000 UTCOne of the replacement Sharingan on the left. But note that the right eye that he got stabbed through is his Kamui eye. You know, the one that gives him his invincibility with absolutely no drawbacks. So what so you think this means?
TWF
2024-10-20 20:01:59 +0000 UTCWhen Madara rescued Obito he mentioned he had a lot of spares. Probably in case he needed to use Izanagi to save himself or something. He still had working Sharingan eyes despite giving his Rinnegan eyes to Nagato.
Calvin Morris
2024-10-20 19:57:21 +0000 UTCUh... wrong eye, or did Obito steal himself a new left one?
Julian Fratzscher
2024-10-20 19:13:45 +0000 UTCI look forward to seeing Naruto kick that Uchiha Man-childs ass. Seriously him and the leftover members had their dicks sucked to hard in the series. Fuck Kishimoto
Omni
2024-10-20 17:05:09 +0000 UTCBRING ON CHAPTER 3, BAY BAY!!!!!!
The Jonizuka
2024-10-20 14:32:15 +0000 UTCSo will this be replacing the fics you originally wrote as far as
Terminator1738
2024-10-20 13:52:20 +0000 UTC"Am I ready to become a Ninja?" Dude, you're overqualified, in the fighting Department at least.
Julian Fratzscher
2024-10-20 13:34:13 +0000 UTCAh, the Uzumaki dimensionhopped to other manga and learned techniques there.
Julian Fratzscher
2024-10-20 13:32:42 +0000 UTCI can't wait to see what type of chakra techniques this kid will use
Omni
2024-10-20 13:09:27 +0000 UTC*Pg. 31* 😁 Heyy good thinking…. 😅 that’s a LOT! to try and redraw in detail (🫠 it would’ve been literal hell to go through I’m sure)
GamerLegend09
2024-10-20 11:37:28 +0000 UTC*Pg. 30* 😄 🎶Rocket Maaaaan🎶 (🤭 don’t know why, the the song just jumped into my head when I saw the Bottom right panel)
GamerLegend09
2024-10-20 11:20:17 +0000 UTC*Pg. 29* 🙃🙃🙃🙃 just…broke apart like a sliced Orange
GamerLegend09
2024-10-20 11:15:29 +0000 UTC*Pg. 28* 🫢 Eeep!
GamerLegend09
2024-10-20 11:14:15 +0000 UTC*Pg. 27* 😨😨😨 T-Timber?
GamerLegend09
2024-10-20 11:13:19 +0000 UTC*Pg. 26* 😳 and that’s with no Jutsu?! Hot-Damn
GamerLegend09
2024-10-20 11:11:56 +0000 UTC*Pg. 25* 😁 time to see the fruits of all your hard work huh
GamerLegend09
2024-10-20 11:09:11 +0000 UTCBrace yourself for more cameos. It's gonna get wild.
TWF
2024-10-20 10:29:29 +0000 UTCHe is still below them. He is at a similar level you would consider Itachi when he was a Genin, and he was already capable of straight up taking on Jonin. However, what sets Naruto apart is that he is a genius in physicality, which is the main takeaway from this moment. This is all in preparation for when Naruto is expected to take on the big fish in the pond, such as boxing with literal Biju with his fists alone.
TWF
2024-10-20 10:28:59 +0000 UTCThe closest comparison I can think of currently would be when Temari cut down that entire forest, yes she had help from her summon but she still took out an entire chunk of forest to kill her enemy. Although pure physical talent, yeah I’d say that around peak Guy Sensei(not including Eight Gates) or Kage level
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-20 10:28:51 +0000 UTCGreat way to do it, I had to ask cause I was gonna be mind blown, I still was that you did that for him tho
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-20 10:26:04 +0000 UTCNah, that was from an existing manga panel, lol. I could if I wanted to, but drawing the whole village would be a bitch and a half. So I improvised.
TWF
2024-10-20 10:25:21 +0000 UTCIt also looks like you took stuff from Oni and Drifting fic and put it in here as some of these things I recall existing in this fic does that mean you will be adding antagonist from all 3 of those Naruto fics?
Terminator1738
2024-10-20 10:20:27 +0000 UTCWhile the final panel seems more like a copy and paste it does seem like your increasing the scale from the jump considering Naruto before he graduates can now cut a large hill into pieces that mean hes already Kage level here or the scale has changed and he's still belownguys like Hiruzen and Kakashi?
Terminator1738
2024-10-20 10:19:44 +0000 UTCDid you hand draw ALL OF THAT???
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-20 09:24:54 +0000 UTCDamn this manga is getting to be very exciting every time yaaaaaaaaaay
Jesus
2024-10-20 09:24:22 +0000 UTCNO YOU DIDDDDDDDDDDNT DO THAT FOR MY BOY, YOU ARE GOAT’D FOR THAT👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿🤟🏿🤟🏿🤟🏿🤟🏿
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-20 09:24:21 +0000 UTCYooooo, built kid Naruto is gonna have all the confidence he needs when he ends up on a team
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-19 09:30:51 +0000 UTC*Pg. 24* (said in a high pitched tone) 😄 time for the ne- 😅😅😅😅😅 judis Priest they say that with such a straight face
GamerLegend09
2024-10-19 03:02:43 +0000 UTC*Pg. 23* 🫤 damn…that boy is swoll as Hell
GamerLegend09
2024-10-19 02:53:46 +0000 UTC*Pg. 22* 😮 Wow that fox can hold their own pretty good
GamerLegend09
2024-10-18 19:16:42 +0000 UTCPg 22 foreshadowing that it’s about to go down🙂↕️
The Jonizuka
2024-10-18 16:23:43 +0000 UTC*Pg. 21* 🤔This reminds me of a certain episode from Ranma 1/2 in a way (the one where Ranma has the fight his arch-rival Ryoga after Shampoo's great grandmother decides to train them in the deadly Breaking Point)
GamerLegend09
2024-10-18 12:11:26 +0000 UTC*Pg. 20* Ummm ✋🏻😅 Tamamo-Chan Tamamo-Chan, 😅😅😅😅😅 isn’t that-….a bit much
GamerLegend09
2024-10-18 11:36:23 +0000 UTC*Pg. 19* 😊 trained by animals of nature, 🥰 such a warming site to see
GamerLegend09
2024-10-18 11:19:18 +0000 UTC*Pg. 18* **Top 2 Panels** 😠 destroy that bamboo!, 😡😡😡 OBLITERATE THEM!! **Bottom 5 Panels** 😯 oh? 😍 a new cute animal! 😄 and they’re a training partner too…🙃 feels like Snow White’s recruiting teachers here 🙂 I’m not complaining though, 🧐 I mean look at the detail put into this beautiful little swallow…..🥰 Cheep! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
GamerLegend09
2024-10-18 11:12:29 +0000 UTC*Pg. 17* Huh….🤔 so that’s how it works…cool 👍🏻
GamerLegend09
2024-10-18 10:16:29 +0000 UTC*Pg. 16* 😁 nothing to see here folks juuuust some Paperweight
GamerLegend09
2024-10-18 09:31:27 +0000 UTCyooo, that’s cool, instant glue. I wonder what the weakness is?
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-18 06:23:23 +0000 UTCSuch youthful training lee and gai would approve
Chase Garcia
2024-10-18 00:12:22 +0000 UTCYes, a lot of anime training methods aren't viable in real life, but that's because they don't have energy sources like chakra in Naruto, ki in DBZ, mana in every isekai, and parody in One Punch Man.
TWF
2024-10-17 00:28:35 +0000 UTC*Pg. 15* **Top 2 Panels** you know… I keep seeing some fitness videos Debunking Cartoon and Anime Training Methods **Middle 2 Panels** 🤔 but my curiosity’s eating at me… like to what extremes would be safe and practical in real life? **Bottom Panel** “😡 208, 209, 210” 😳 woof
GamerLegend09
2024-10-17 00:17:10 +0000 UTCSlowly reminding me of Zoro or Demon Slayer training
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-16 20:35:13 +0000 UTCNewbie gainz on page 14💪🏿
The Jonizuka
2024-10-16 20:28:52 +0000 UTCDamn best story arc so far I'm loving it a lot.
Jesus
2024-10-16 10:10:41 +0000 UTCKeep grinding Naruto 💪 my boi
De'Andrae White
2024-10-15 18:23:49 +0000 UTCI was wondering....Naruto doses have a school?
Key JX
2024-10-15 17:11:54 +0000 UTC*Pg. 14 Pt. 2* Is this prep work for the entrance exam in the Konoha Academy?
GamerLegend09
2024-10-15 14:25:37 +0000 UTC*Pg. 14* 😥 yeesh… kids pushing a bit hard from the start here
GamerLegend09
2024-10-15 14:23:52 +0000 UTC*Pg. 13* 😅 I almost forgot this was 3 months ago
GamerLegend09
2024-10-15 14:21:04 +0000 UTC*Pg. 12* 😃 cooool!! 😀and convenient
GamerLegend09
2024-10-15 14:17:55 +0000 UTC*Pg. 11* **Top 2 Panels** Now that’s sage advice right here **Middle Panel** 🥴pfft, “Paperweight” **Bottom 2 Panels** 🤔 do I smell foreshadowing?
GamerLegend09
2024-10-15 14:15:55 +0000 UTC*Pg. 10* 😄 I love hidden compartments like this one, kinda brings a sensation of safety in a way
GamerLegend09
2024-10-15 14:08:21 +0000 UTCYa can’t be OP at the jump, ya gotta start somewhere. I know people hate seeing the grind sometimes but I love a character that starts at rock bottom and rises to where they are.
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-15 14:02:02 +0000 UTCWhirling Tides Shadow... the Kage of Uzushiogakure.
TWF
2024-10-13 20:14:05 +0000 UTCInteresting family secrets, plus it makes it clear that some skills are best learned later on too unless your too curious
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-13 18:54:36 +0000 UTCUzukage?
Julian Fratzscher
2024-10-13 16:55:53 +0000 UTCStory is looking good so far 👍
MDD
2024-10-10 13:55:55 +0000 UTC*Pg. 9* **Top 2 Panels** 😁 absolutely, can’t go a day without having- **Bottom Panel** 😍……..,😍 what’re we talking about? 😍😍😍
GamerLegend09
2024-10-09 00:34:09 +0000 UTCWas wondering about that part anyway, if the Uzumaki clan had a place near/in Konoha, why didn't Naruto live there? Well, as an adult at least, as a kid he would have needed smth in the village.
Julian Fratzscher
2024-10-08 15:58:31 +0000 UTC*Pg. 8* **Top Panel** 😆 SO MANY FOXES 🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊 **Middle Right Panel** 😣 ouch!… my Mother injured her thumb one time too, 😓😓😓 a door closed hard enough for it to turn black……😅 luckily it took a week or two to heal and turn back into a normal color again **Middle Left Panel** 🤔 those doors are called Shoji right? ☺️ I always found them strangely relaxing. **Bottom Panel** 🥰🦊🥰 Lucky Kid, gets to hang out with an entire Skulk of Foxes🥰🦊🥰🦊🥰 AND they help make short work on repairs! 😍😍😍 I’d be in complete and total Bliss (😆 they’re so fluffy I’m gonna die!!)
GamerLegend09
2024-10-08 07:09:53 +0000 UTCOof, I’ve been there Naruto, I hate when I miss the nail😫
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-08 06:36:58 +0000 UTCThis one is Really Good 💯
Dusty Farqaharson
2024-10-08 05:32:21 +0000 UTC*Pg. 7* **Top Right Panel** Ook I see now, in this Timeline he developed this mindset to learn with focus at a younger age (😅😅😅 thanks for that refresher Write) **Top Left Panel** 🫢…😍😍😍 MIKON!? Omg🥰😆🥰😆🥰😆🥰 **Middle Panel** ☺️ Deepest Thanks to all Local Farmers far and wide, 😊 I always appreciate the healthy Veggies they Cultivate for us **Bottom Two Panels** 😄 also convenient… 😁 he can build a better relationship with other people outside the Village, 🥲 hopefully they’ll still see him as the child on the outside and protect him even if they learn the truth
GamerLegend09
2024-10-08 00:47:41 +0000 UTC………🥲 it’s been too long since I’ve watched Naruto….🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲 I am ashamed
GamerLegend09
2024-10-07 22:50:39 +0000 UTCPg 6 smart gal even tho the hidden leaf village occupants know he's a jinchuriki but others outside of the villages occupants don't know well played to her and to you matt
Tobi
2024-10-07 20:44:30 +0000 UTCI never really thought about the outer perimeter of the main village, cool to see that incorporated and cool to see little homie taking as much knowledge as he can to live life a bit easier
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-07 15:28:46 +0000 UTCThis is the Naruto we get BEFORE the Naruto in the canon timeline where the full goofiness persona he's famous for sets in. It was introduced in Episode 480 of Shippuden, where we see THIS Naruto struggling with loneliness, but shows extreme focus, resourcefulness, and a surprisingly level head on his shoulders. In the episode he doesn't have enough funds to make it to the end of the month, so instead of wasting the last of his money on ramen despite wanting it, he goes out into the woods, practices his ninja skills on his own, goes fishing, and searches for ingredients to make mushroom soup (which he shares with Hiruzen who appears out of nowhere, but he has no idea who he is). And we can assume he learned all of this BY HIMSELF, so the kid did have a sense of maturity before he became the clown he sank in to when he realized he could act like that constantly to get attention.
TWF
2024-10-07 13:21:39 +0000 UTC*Pg. 6* 😗 huh….🙂 for a kid so young he has everything planned out pretty far ahead. 😁 This boy’s far more mature than the canon series Naruto at this age.
GamerLegend09
2024-10-07 03:48:43 +0000 UTCWell, having a plan for the long run is nice to have
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-07 01:55:52 +0000 UTCGood that he’s got his own place now, but I’m sure a kids not gonna be able to fix all that up anytime soon
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-06 08:57:13 +0000 UTC☝🏻😤 Facts
GamerLegend09
2024-10-06 08:51:36 +0000 UTC*Pg. 5* Huh 😐……☺️ well that’s convenient, 🤔 i’m a little curious about what the property’s like personally
GamerLegend09
2024-10-06 08:50:25 +0000 UTCPg.5 The Third Hokege doing something besides just giving him money. That's how it should have been, he was literally born a bad hand. Everyone hated him for something he never did, or have control over.
Robert Walker
2024-10-06 05:40:29 +0000 UTC😊 hopefully it won’t take a disaster like when pain attacked the village in the canon Naruto series to earn that respect… 😅 but at this point I’m just raising a red flag hahhahhh
GamerLegend09
2024-10-05 11:04:37 +0000 UTCThank you, friend. :)
TWF
2024-10-05 06:52:21 +0000 UTCPg.4 At least there calling him fox boy better then being called demon glad to see some see him as kid instead of jinchurik Btw love first chapter
Tobi
2024-10-05 00:54:55 +0000 UTC😆 nice
GamerLegend09
2024-10-05 00:27:18 +0000 UTCAlright sounds good thank you
Jesus
2024-10-04 23:50:06 +0000 UTCHaha. You'd think so... but this, my friend, is the training of Samurai Jack! (P.S - You sent a DM to TheWriteFiction's old account, which was deleted. If you wish to speak to them, DM me instead)
TWF
2024-10-04 23:47:38 +0000 UTCHe better jump good after this
Efiong Uwah
2024-10-04 17:47:10 +0000 UTC(Naruto removes his weights and leaps a good 150 meters in the air.) Naruto:(Excited) I can FLY! Tama: Kon-Kon! Translation: Not fly, jump good!
Chris Cannon
2024-10-04 17:04:08 +0000 UTCHe is following Samurai Jack's training to Jump Good.
Robert Walker
2024-10-04 16:54:09 +0000 UTC*Pg. 4* **Top 2 Panels** 😄 hey she taught him how to understand Fox **Middle 2 Panels** 🤨 Either these 2 don’t know about our boy, 🥲 or they’re the Right kind of Adult that don’t see “him” as a monster **Bottom 2 Panels** 😊 now that’s improvement
GamerLegend09
2024-10-04 16:24:20 +0000 UTCOh yeah, I need to watch those movies agaain, its been too long since that 1 vs 10 fight
DarkTitan5010
2024-10-04 16:21:42 +0000 UTCYep, and with ridiculously heavy weights. Suffice to say, he's gonna be a power house in this one, with a fighting style like Bruce Lee's and Ip Man's.
TWF
2024-10-04 16:16:15 +0000 UTC*Pg. 3* 😳 Whoa.
GamerLegend09
2024-10-04 16:15:22 +0000 UTCTraining Rock lee style I love it
Jesus
2024-10-04 16:15:12 +0000 UTC*Pg. 2* **Top 4 Panels** 😁 hey a new store **Bottom 3 Panels** 🙂 Hm?
GamerLegend09
2024-10-04 16:13:56 +0000 UTC*Pg. 1/Cover* 😗 well….😄 never saw him train like this before
GamerLegend09
2024-10-04 16:09:22 +0000 UTC😎 here we go
GamerLegend09
2024-10-04 16:09:12 +0000 UTCI'm sorry but did Naruto just did Wing Chun?
Key JX
2024-10-04 16:08:23 +0000 UTCLET’S GO!!!!!
The Jonizuka
2024-10-04 16:07:17 +0000 UTC
