Take Flight, Erasa?
Added 2024-02-25 15:17:09 +0000 UTCStory and writing by ME
Illustrations by TheWriteFiction
Since I loved the artwork my friend came up with (and I enjoyed editing it), I requested a short comic from him to cap off this month.
I always fancied Erasa, so this'll be an interesting piece.
Comments
Will we see new pages in the future
Jesus
2024-10-10 04:24:49 +0000 UTCPg 5. Sigh I knew from cover Gohan going get good romp from erasa she just can't go one night without can't she :/
Tobi
2024-09-04 17:36:57 +0000 UTCI can't read the new pages on the app or website on patreon even tho it says its 11 pages I only keep seeing 8 or 9 pages
Jesus
2024-08-31 23:49:23 +0000 UTC*Pg. 9* 🤯🤯🤯 OHH DAYUM!! She’s scarfing it down like she’s going to lose it bruh 😎
GamerLegend09
2024-08-28 15:34:06 +0000 UTC*Pg. 8* 😗🎵 lookit dem Melons work that 5 Dollar Foot Long
GamerLegend09
2024-08-27 14:02:40 +0000 UTC*Pg. 7* Shokuji o tanoshimu ☺️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰☺️ 😏🍆🍆🍆
GamerLegend09
2024-08-20 13:50:50 +0000 UTCCan't wait to see this story completed
Jesus
2024-08-20 13:38:05 +0000 UTCcan you please continue this doujins
Juan Cuellar
2024-05-31 14:13:56 +0000 UTCWill you be making new pages of this one as well
Jesus
2024-04-27 16:15:58 +0000 UTC🤣
GamerLegend09
2024-04-25 21:35:35 +0000 UTCPg. 6: I can't think of a more obvious sign that a girl likes you than her giving the "I don't mind if its you" line.
Giorno Giovanna34
2024-03-24 23:38:48 +0000 UTC*Pg. 6* 😅 and we’re veering off course from flying lessons…..😁 not that I didn’t see that coming, 😉 it’d be nice if Erasa was the next girl I see Gohan Bang in the sky other than Videl (😄 it was the GT variant of them Banging in the Sky from said Doujin)
GamerLegend09
2024-03-22 04:44:39 +0000 UTCI see them but I’m just not getting notifications for updated pages in the app
GamerLegend09
2024-03-22 04:36:18 +0000 UTCYeah, I just checked and it works fine checking Patreon through a browser even on mobile. It's just the app that isn't updating for some reason
Mrryn
2024-03-21 15:10:38 +0000 UTCI suspect it's an app thing. I opened it in internet/google on my phone and it worked. Let me know if the app manages to refresh properly.
TWF
2024-03-21 11:08:07 +0000 UTCSame problem
Paul
2024-03-21 09:44:38 +0000 UTCMust be just an app thing. Even the email noti says 6 images, but pulling up the app even from that link still just shows 4. Sadge
Mrryn
2024-03-21 09:22:46 +0000 UTCYou're right. I'm having problems with this on my phone, not on my computer though.
TWF
2024-03-21 09:20:55 +0000 UTCIs it just me, or are others getting notis linking to this but still only seeing the same first 4 pages?
Mrryn
2024-03-21 09:13:49 +0000 UTC*Pg. 5 Pt. 2* 🤨 also I’m a little surprised I thought Gohan had the tolerance of a saint by this point, or is this before he developed a safely tolerance to nude shenanigans?
GamerLegend09
2024-03-21 04:02:32 +0000 UTC*Pg. 5* 😛 This’s the Best, 😆 Wardrobe malfunction moment, 🤩 EVER!!!! (Now confirmed, 😤 Busty Blondes are a new hot fetish for me)
GamerLegend09
2024-03-21 03:15:48 +0000 UTCok i love this
Juan Cuellar
2024-03-20 17:03:18 +0000 UTCVideo and 18 comic to be continue????
Luis2002
2024-03-20 15:43:41 +0000 UTC*Pg. 4* **Top Right Panel** 😳 she’sonherknees! **Top Left Panel** 😗 oh my god you could Grind meat off tho- 😵 GAH!! **Middle Right Panel** 😬 from this angle, it looks like something is entering through the valleys **Middle Left Panel** 🫢& From this angle they look like apples 🍎 **Bottom Right Panel** 🤥 & from this angle, they look like melons 🍈 🍉 **Bottom Right Panel** 🫠 Helloooo Doggie
GamerLegend09
2024-03-20 09:15:41 +0000 UTC*Pg. 3* 😳..🙄😳🙄..😳……..ok I admit it…. Erasa Doujins are a HOT!! 🥵 Thirst Trap
GamerLegend09
2024-03-20 08:55:25 +0000 UTC*Pg. 2* **all 4 Panels** 😄 ah… way to show off them lethal Weapons Golden Boy (😏 luv it) **Bottom Left Panel** 🤩🤩🤩oooo that’s a cool new Design for a hover Car
GamerLegend09
2024-03-20 08:47:00 +0000 UTC*Cover/Pg. 1 Pt. 2* 😉 also, I love what you did with the title just like the take flight Videl episode in Z
GamerLegend09
2024-03-20 08:41:17 +0000 UTC*Cover/Pg. 1* 😆 I can just picture Goten saying “mommy why is she wearing underwear with no clothes on?”
GamerLegend09
2024-03-20 08:15:21 +0000 UTCInteresting theory 🧐🤨😜
Dean Zamp
2024-02-25 17:22:53 +0000 UTC😂
Dean Zamp
2024-02-25 17:21:28 +0000 UTCI like this. Given her carefree go with the flow type of style, it goes to show she’s a natural born talent at this compared to Videl. *Spoiler* Although it does make me wonder if she’s unintentionally using magic instead of ki.
Chris Cannon
2024-02-25 16:09:38 +0000 UTCVidel: (Scoffs) Beginner’s luck. Goten: Earlier, she also learned how to shoot pew-pews! Goten: It was awesome! Videl: WTH, Gohan!? Videl: I wanna shoot pew-pews!
Chris Cannon
2024-02-25 16:04:42 +0000 UTCErasa 😍 in her very own "Flying Accident" what a good idea TWF. Since you have lots of pull with Write I was wondering what you think about possibly some creatively unique sex positions for this project since both are able to fly & it's flight themed? Thoughts? Also Gohan for whatever reason is particularly... let's say "manly" in Flying Accident, could this be a sequel to that? Since this could be (I'm fairly sure it might be because they're clever); why wouldn't Write wanna build certain concepts together in an alternate universes pertaining to specific tropes topics that align.
Dean Zamp
2024-02-25 15:44:46 +0000 UTC30035
ShadowRipper
2024-02-25 15:20:49 +0000 UTCBooba
Kam
2024-02-25 15:18:04 +0000 UTC
