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"Kuro he likes me?"part3 page 1

does the white line help portray the ringing nose of stresse? idk if it helps get the point across 

"Kuro he likes me?"part3 page 1

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Kinda like "static noises" so it works very well

Carrochan

it looks really good!! the lines work rlly well

ashley

realized I failed to include it in my original comment though meant to specify lines coming in from around the edge of the image rather than across, kinda like when vision becomes grainy after standing too quickly

Ruffled Wrenaissance

ahhh that's fair! Either way it looks nice~

Ruffled Wrenaissance

It really works!! This looks amazing

KodzuCatt

Well when he's looking down you can see the image is no longer blured so he's calming down not looking at them

mookie000

only a suggestion, but what if the staticy lines intensify more as the panel descends, almost as if the anxious feelings were closing in?

Ruffled Wrenaissance

ngl, when I read this my tinnitus got worse, so I'd say it was very effective

Beanie

YES! it works really well!

min

i love it !!!!!

Mimi

i feel like it does :D!!!

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