The Celestial Tarnished 1
Added 2024-07-24 22:41:53 +0000 UTCStarted an Elden Ring snippet, posting it here for everyone's convivence, there will still be a chapter this Friday. Do comment what everyone thinks of it, it'll be updated more often depending on how this is received.
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Hhmm, not TOO familiar with Elden Ring. Still looks fun and I'm sure with you writing it even if it has CG it'll be a good read. Also lol at endgame Felix isekai'ing ppl😆
Orchamus
2024-07-27 01:51:24 +0000 UTCUnderstandable, the CG is a very broken system if cheesed but I'll make sure it doesn't get out of hand too quickly lol. The CG does have more than just broken abilities, lots of stuff in it offer tons of utility, and while he is still hella strong his power won't be unmatched in the Lands Between, not to mention in the Lands Between power is very subjective, the entire lore behind the game shows how a Tarnished of no renown can make it to the heights of godhood, even without spending any runes. The out of context powers will help him become truly unmatched with his worth ethic. As for the world travel thing that will be hinted at at the end of the story, I plan for this to be a primarily Elden Ring focused fic with him getting the ability to world hop at the end of his journey in the Lands Between which I may or may not write. Anyways thanks for givin it a read!
Basilisk Basilisk
2024-07-25 04:46:07 +0000 UTCHmm, its a very interesting premise and opener, I'll admit. I REALLY don't like the System thing though. It gets out of hand super fast with these kinds of things. Though, I like what it gave in Prologue, I kinda hope the CS Grimoire disappears now that its no longer needed. A 1 time thing is fine, but otherwise? Ehhh.... he's already hella strong now after all and doesnt really need that out of context powers anymore. I also don't like how it was hinted he may leave for other worlds, but Ranni does that in canon anyways, I think. Will Edwyn be much bigger once he's resurrected? If I recall, the Tarnished achieves a late growth spurt to become much bigger and properly fit the Elden Throne after becoming Elden Lord, doesn't he? I'm just imagining Giant Edwyn next to smol puppet Ranni as a reversal of their situations back during the height of the Golden Order, kek. It would also be amusing if he impregnated her the day before he left and that he's got a grown kid running around by the overprotective Carian of a Mother that is Ranni. :v But I'm not really the author, so its whatever really.
Deathknight134
2024-07-25 04:05:31 +0000 UTC
