New version of Chronicles is UP!
Added 2025-04-04 21:50:36 +0000 UTCSorry for the delay! New version is up!
MEGA - COPY THE ENTIRE LINK!!!
https://mega.nz/file/CKh22CbS#ApIwIsiQ5U786hN1lTVoFwM9q79Xsijhw01_j820TVo
Google Drive:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1BCpOanIZlsVM9r13M-cN0o_KWG2pO1l0/view?usp=sharing
Comments
The links don't work
Anti
2025-06-28 05:58:14 +0000 UTCsooo whats up with the link?
Jesse more
2025-06-16 01:21:56 +0000 UTCthe links not working
Timo
2025-05-13 05:52:46 +0000 UTCthe links not work ?
Nikolei Vi Britanja
2025-05-09 06:42:57 +0000 UTCMobile?
Linto Linto
2025-04-19 05:59:01 +0000 UTCAuthor, make the eating scene more realistic, i.e. a real dried body, because it looks like you're just having sex, not having your energy forcibly drained from you, that's unrealistic
Антон Капуцинко
2025-04-11 20:02:35 +0000 UTCThis is pretty good. I just have a comment on the text. This is something I see most of the time when you reuse scenes. Like the initial surrender and a loss. Or, in this case, the result of looking into the eyes at the start of the fight and after winning the fight. The scene and the text are identical. I am perfectly fine with recycling most of the text. But adapting to the situation with a couple of different sentences would make it more realistic and less repetitive, in my opinion. I think you were mostly doing it in ch1, maybe 2, but then you stopped and I think I have seen it just in a couple of cases.
MShin
2025-04-11 09:25:05 +0000 UTCThe new art is fantastic
Forest Taylor
2025-04-10 04:01:45 +0000 UTC
