sketchman

Behind the Scenes #33

Added 2022-01-15 16:00:06 +0000 UTC

Nanako's Diary Volume 2

This is the sequel we (Hyro and I) started to work on while I was publishing the second half of part 1. The first outline was also pretty different: it involved Asha and Nanako being even more aggressive towards each other and never making up, with Nanako challenging her to be diapered 24/7 like any true ABDL would do and Asha obviously executing, leading to embarrassing messing scenes in public. I'm glad we went with another route. I honestly thought fixing a quickly edited story (part 1) was a mess, but Hyro is a capable writer and made an awesome job. He wrote Volume 2 for the most part, I only had general directions where I wanted the characters to go. He also took care of the dialogues. Originally Mai wasn't meant to shit her pants or become a DL by any means and this thing changed drastically due to her popularity and also a pressing public demand. I fought this back at first but eventually accepted it, and tried to keep her reserved personality her major trait even after accepting the DL side. It's safe to say that Mai's character was shaped mostly by the community.

I've found an early version of the script we wrote. There's simply too much to read for a single post but it's kinda interesting to see some minor changes and differences throughout the early script and finished product.