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Ch: 121.1

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barely considered teir-1 in the magic community. Teir -> tier

Eliel Taskinen

Oh it is definitely up to the hype. Nice foreshadowing with the cleaning spell working on the poison etc.

Eliel Taskinen

Great chapter!

Steve B

Thanks for the chapter!!

Undead Writer

they should’ve been riving* on the floor as the toxic venom destroyed their bodies, => writhing

Samantha Lane

Great energy. Riving ----> writhing

Valderan

Right before the snake’s deadly attack engulfed them, Aaliyah chanted a spell. It was nothing more than a simple self-cleaning spell, barely considered teir-1 in the magic community. It shouldn’t have done anything against the snake’s venom, but it did. → tier

fh

Damn, nicely done utilizing that spells affects to counter the poison.

Straven

Hype af

agentjongon

Hype!

Cheuk Hin Ho

Great chapter! The third person perspective really works here!

Solopath

And I resubbed... Again... :p I'm weak.

worg

Fantastic!!

David Eddy

It's living up to it! I know they will continue to struggle against it as they try to escape but I secretly hope that they will accidentally kill the lesser dragon at the last moment before passing out from the drain followed by pacore arriving at a distance as he sees them land the killing blow. Dragon slayer aliyah

Scott Fellman

tyftc

pix

AYYYYY LETS GOOOOO!! Rest assured it's living up to all the hypeee, I've been punching the air constantly reading thisss. I think it's well written and not too drawn out on the descriptions so it's keeps the battle pace moving forward. Please keep doing what your doing, and I'll say it again I've missed you so much and I'm sooo happy you're finally back 😭

Gon of the Dra

I enjoyed the Chapter! Hoping the next one is soon.

Lord Porkalust

Thanks for the chapter. Like the different perspective

James Everhart

Me espero más relación de cuanto se enteren que Tabitha subió 7 niveles , jajdjajfja

Lilimu u.u

Love the fight intro, like a classic hero story.

Richard Öhler

Looking forward to the next chaps, and some scene back home with master pacore losing his mind over 2 of his disciples coming back with dragon scales

Annora D.

Small typo “But in the darkens, there was light.” Great chapter

Not Real

Aaaa!! Gritando de emoción. Me gusta, tenía una idea que usarían el hechizo de limpieza, pero me sorprendió el como y el ataque de Tabitha.

Lilimu u.u

Fantastic, Author-San. It’s definitely worth the wait. 💜

Holly Harris

I love it

B

A wonderful opening to something long coming. Don’t worry about it not being more as that is what the ramp up is for. We all know that this is going to be a knock down drag out fight of bloody survival but it doesn’t have to be that way from the beginning. You have the writing experience. Trust yourself. This gives the wonderful question in the readers head of “will they and can they escape just now” even if we know that it’s not possible. You have done the good work to put all sorts of Chekhov’s guns on the field and we are excited to see which one fires. Will they make the day and escape the beast at the loss of their equipment? Will they fight it to a draw and escape? Will they fight it to a win and kill it or drive it off? Will the kraken at the bottom of the mysterious lake be their final desperate ploy and they have to dance between two titans that could squish them with a thought? Any of those or others would make a satisfying ending. Do not change what you have built on behalf of us. Build your monument of a story and let us all enjoy every twist and turn of it.

Grant Daniel

The only problem with the chapter is this typo: ---- Alyiah swung her hammer ---- Typo in name.

PickledTink

it's been a long time coming, and it was great, thank you very much for the chapter.

Júlio Soares

Great chapter,

Charles Hughes

Third person with changing viewpoints works really well in this chapter. I will say that third person for the serpent works especially well thematically since, you know, it's too dumb to have a first person... Overall I really like it.

Matthew Uhlmansiek

Fucking sick as hell. Loving this fight

Shelbo

Fight was good; I especially liked the details on their motivations before the fight

heh


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