TWNY Directors Cut V1E2: Estradiol, 2mg, Two Under Tongue Twice Daily
Added 2024-12-04 21:40:20 +0000 UTCYang has a stressful morning.
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Re-reading this. Again, fucking awesome, even as someone who typically doesn't read stuff too critically, I think your growth as an author is plainly visible reading the original TWNY and the "Director's Cut." One minor thing: Merriam-Webster says it's "Corded," not "Coreded" (page 8/14 on the pdf version).
MagicCarpetMadeofSteel
2025-03-29 18:40:34 +0000 UTCSeeing Yang thirsty already is fun. More background on the missing friend (+ her family) is good too, the original didn’t give us much on that. Also hormones, so Yang is trans then? I don’t remember if that was in the og but that’s fun too.
Julie Ann
2024-12-05 04:34:55 +0000 UTCMore interaction and I'm assuming she's been on remnant longer than the previous version? Or she's just immediately moving the expectations of cops in America over to cops on remnant. Either way not the best way to try to handle or deal with small town cops when you're still getting used to missing a limb and new found super strength and sensory abilities. Dope ass chapter tho
DaRelle Williams
2024-12-04 23:09:27 +0000 UTCA
Doug
2024-12-04 22:41:50 +0000 UTC
