XaiJu
牡丹M(Botan M)
牡丹M(Botan M)

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M Town 1(free version)

I drew a manga for the first time in about two years.

It's only six pages, though.

I wanted to draw a violent action scene, but this is my first time drawing an action scene, so the quality may not be very high.

The title is "M Town 1" for convenience.

I'm referring to the famous "O City".

I don't know if I'm not good at thinking of lines, but when I try to make them cool, they end up sounding like stinky lines...

I'm not sure if I'm a bad dialogue writer or what, but even if I try to make it cool, it ends up sounding like stinky dialogue... I've been thinking that it would be better if I didn't have any dialogue, but without dialogue, it's hard to know what I'm doing.

I also tried to include English for the international audience, but I think it looks cooler in English.


It's an original character, and there are only a few fight scenes, so you might not know what he's doing.

The story is about Mamoru Sakuramori, a garbage disposer (assassin), who infiltrates a mysterious organization, and suddenly the boss, Iceberg, appears.


I'm considering whether I'll release the manga for free later.

I'm considering whether to release the manga for free later, but for now, I'll just put up a page or two on pixiv.

M Town 1(free version) M Town 1(free version)

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