A year of Beneath the Dragoneye Moons
Added 2021-07-06 18:41:28 +0000 UTCHello everyone!
It's been almost exactly a year (give or take a few days) since I got laid off from my job, and decided to write my own book. I figured I'd do some rambling on the matter
There were a million factors that went into it. Reading a ton of webnovels myself, and running out of novels I liked. Always having the idea "I should write a book". Figuring that I'd have a ton of free time every day after doing my daily job hunting.
I didn't do nearly enough research before I began. I had no idea that a large initial dump wasn't a thing, nor that most authors didn't have extra backlogs on top of their normal stuff. In those respects, I did well.
In others, not so well. Last second major changes? Baaaad idea. Patreon? I didn't do nearly enough research.
However, I stumbled along. I knew I wanted to write a fantasy litRPG, and I studied dozens of different Systems, seeing what I liked and what I didn't like. I wrote down every single stat I'd ever seen from the systems, and compared and contrasted them. I wrote down what magic and elements I liked.
My big brainwave was tying elements to stats. Sure, I had 8 elements and 6 stats, but that was fixable. It balanced the whole thing.
Then I went on to make the map.
THEN I started writing.
A few months of writing and work later (At the start, I could barely manage 200 words in a day - writing is like a "muscle"), and I had 40 chapters ready to go! I made sure everything was set up ahead of time - a patreon, a discord, etc., because one of the things I'd seen was too many authors stumble and fail trying to make the "leap" to patreon. (CoughCoughCadenceLeeCough).
I got some advice from RR to not dump all the chapters at once, to spread them out instead. And that's what I tried.
And then, on the FIRST DAY I was posting, I got my first patron. Months of effort validated by that - I literally cried happy tears.
(Heck, writing this and reflecting on it all I'm crying happy tears)
Of course, that meant I also needed to get everything posted in Patreon, and I had to scramble for that!
I got some attention, and help, from other authors, which I'm super grateful for. I got shout-outs and advice.
Then the ball slowly got rolling, and I *still* couldn't find a job, and I had a baby coming soon. Made it easy to keep going with the writing thing, and, well, after months of hard work and effort, here we are!
I can't tell you how grateful I am to all of you, from the $1 patron who joined this morning, to the people who signed up with me the first day I was here. It's been a wonderful, amazing, magical journey, and I hope to make many more of these annual posts thanking you all.
I'd also like to extend a special thanks to my Beta Readers. They're in the background, tirelessly fixing my typos, hitting me over the head when I flip words, and being totally willing to let me know when a plotline is bad, or something I'm trying to introduce doesn't make sense, or if people are just plain unlikeable or poorly written. Seriously, this story would be so much worse without their feedback and help.
Once again - Thank you, and here's to the second year of Beneath the Dragoneye Moons, and Elaine's epic adventure in Pallos!
Comments
Been great so far.
ShotoGun
2021-08-02 10:54:41 +0000 UTCI've wanted to write a book or two but I never have the time, motivation, or fleshed-out plot :l good for you
Sean Kenny
2021-07-09 20:46:42 +0000 UTCGoodluck on another great year.
Jason Oniemola
2021-07-08 06:53:07 +0000 UTCCongrats!
Yaksher
2021-07-07 21:56:31 +0000 UTCMaybe a bit more cowbell
Lowe K. Lyesmith
2021-07-07 07:52:36 +0000 UTCReally a great story so far. Very good work!
Lowe K. Lyesmith
2021-07-07 04:43:54 +0000 UTCYou have created a fantastic and unforgettable character and a world that is wonderful. You've crushed my first expectations so badly that I signed up for your patreon. I have a $20/month budget and you are one of the few I've signed up for and kept month after month. Here's to another solid year of this wonderful story!
Stephen
2021-07-07 00:02:23 +0000 UTCYou definitely went about it the right way. I wish I had taken the time to write a backlog, edit it and make sure the start of my story was solid. But I rushed it and now the terrible first draft of my story is forever sitting on RR, unfinished, taunting me to restart and do it right.
Signspace
2021-07-06 23:55:14 +0000 UTCMoL was nobodies learning experiance, and he mostly released only a chapter per month. Was always looking forward to those. Honestly, the writing could have used polish, but the story it selfe was just a great reading experiance. Still, i dont like grading stories with each other. If i like them, i read and follow them. Im just happy and grateful that there are so many people who are willing to share their stories with us readers. So, big thx to all those who write or at least give it a try. :)
D
2021-07-06 22:35:32 +0000 UTCCongratulations! I found BTDEM about 6 months ago, and since then I've enjoyed checking for updates all the time. You're one of the two main reasons I kept coming back to RoyalRoad (Memories of the Fall being the other one) and I admit I read all your chapters when they're posted on RR still even after I've read them here (Dark Mode is so hax it makes everything 25% better). So congratulations! I don't know if this counts as 'made it' but you're definitely supporting yourself by writing, and that's something very few authors ever get to say.
Keith Rice
2021-07-06 22:34:02 +0000 UTCI think PirateAba has a natural mutation that their body constantly produces methamphetamines or something. I've known a couple monster writers and by monster writer standards they're fucking monsters. Their output exceeds Brandon Sanderson's and I think Sanderson is three writing monkeys in a trenchcoat.
Keith Rice
2021-07-06 22:31:50 +0000 UTCMother of Learning is my all time favorite book, and it was closely followed by He Who Fights With Monsters with a sharp drop after that. Now I have MoL, HWFWM, AND BTDEM with the other two constantly pushing ever closer to taking that first spot. If I had to decide which of the two had second place, I wouldn't. I love both so evenly that they hold that spot together, until one day when (I'm predicting this) BTDEM takes that first place spot Little bit of a ramble, so Tl:dr, MoL, BTDEM, and HWFWM are my top three all time favorites, and I'm predicting BTDEM to soon take that top spot from MoL
Blayne Allsen
2021-07-06 21:44:45 +0000 UTCPirateaba is a monster by every metric. Don't even try. For betas, my initial beta readers pre-release were beta swaps with other aspiring authors in the writer's block discord. Then I got popular, and people asked me to beta read. Now I just recruit active discord users - one of the perks of success
Selkie
2021-07-06 21:06:20 +0000 UTCThank you for writing this. I myself wrote around 1000 words at the first day but the next day could do max 100 and then forced another 100 but deleted them all as they were sub quality at best.. That hit kinda sucked all motivation. I instat went ahead and tried to make my map first, thinking it will give me all the inspiration to write. Well after dozens of different tries i at least got the layout of the Map right but its a dam pain to set down the fine geography like deserts, mountain passes, lakes and all the special regions. Then there are the kingdoms and borders. They have to reflect the history and social structure of said kingdom. And there are also the really powerful beings and off course they have to influence the kingdom and geography of the world. Month pass and i am still working on the map. Mind you i spend most of my free time reading and PC gaming. .... I kinda rumbled on and went off topic here. Anyway that you "only" put out 200 words at the beginning really helps me start again. When i started out i had the believe that i need to at least write 3500 words a day. After all Abba writes 30000 words in one session. I keeper trying and failing to do the same quality and Quantity as the Wandering Inn and Mother of learning. Hell even the the worst novels i read out did me. I guess i just have to write shitty at first and redo it later when my "Muscle" is better developed. My only question would be where you found your beta readers? There is only so much room to improve by myself without constructive feedback.
Bookman
2021-07-06 20:25:10 +0000 UTCCongrats! I've always wanted to write and reading about these sorts of stories is always inspiring!
Sean
2021-07-06 19:38:11 +0000 UTC... For the third time* :P
Selkie
2021-07-06 19:16:06 +0000 UTCCongrats on the year and it looks like you just hit 1800 patrons as well so congrats there as well!
just_a_potato
2021-07-06 19:08:57 +0000 UTCCongratz on the first year! As a happy reader, I think you did quite a few things right. Not the least having a good and engaging story. Personally I believe the three key things to getting a successful patreon being: 1. A good/great story 2. Releasing 4-5 chapters each week that are not too short 3. Having a good amount of advance chapters for the patreons.
Magnus Benzein
2021-07-06 19:04:29 +0000 UTCBeen following sense you started posting on Scribblehub. You're lucky you caught me at the end of my Azarinth Healer binge and as I was getting into Melas.
Katherine
2021-07-06 19:03:04 +0000 UTCCheers!
Benjamin Powell
2021-07-06 19:02:42 +0000 UTCSeen :)
HydraSin
2021-07-06 18:52:34 +0000 UTCGreat to have you as well! The hype i had when i read of the formorians, Was only equalled and surpassed by the hype of seeing a dragon’s justice!
evyatar
2021-07-06 18:52:31 +0000 UTCYey for mangos
Taksu
2021-07-06 18:50:39 +0000 UTCCongratulations on a year! Here's to many more :)
Mundane
2021-07-06 18:43:54 +0000 UTC