First, off it will be a long time before this ever gets published, if ever (It needs a serious edit)
Second, I'm running behind on this chapter so I thought I would give you a nice image to look at while waiting.
Interested in feedback and thoughts about the image and whether it would work as book 1 cover.
Also out of the 140 odd chapters where would you end book 1? And where would book 2 start?