Disintegrity 73 and also 70 HD
Added 2020-12-12 02:39:22 +0000 UTCRight, first of all : SORRY THIS TOOK SO LONG. I'd like to blame Final Fantasy 7 but... It mostly just took long. I don't know why.
Secondly : There's a new hi-res page posted there ! I should have reworked it a little cos it seems like the linework is too thick but fuck it I don't wanna !
Only the new page :
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1axdXteUc7pbZZD6PljuDC7JINqTEkRoV?usp=sharing
The old and new :
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1rqvbs0AhHkXSvBJQgKu35UspVeCur6CM?usp=sharing
So now at last, let's talk about the redone page. Do I even need to tell you that there's very little left of the original ? Cos there's nothing left of it. It's not a mistake, these are both page 73. So I can't exactly go panel per panel detailing the differences. The drastic change is not completely due to the original page being bad, which it is but really not that bad.
The problem is that whole sequence of page is one I never really fond compelling. It starts with 73 above being weird, Larsen looking up at the camera is strange, it was supposed to show that Larsen was really feeling it in his butt yet Zee barely looks like he's doing anything soooo why is he looking at us ? Why is he going haywire at the bottom of the page ? It just seemed completely injustified and awkward. The page after that just looks like padding to me, but I'll talk about that when we get to it.
So that's why it changed. I just wanted Larsen to not just scream loudly for no reason. I wanted him to be a little more moany, like he's really getting into it, which will be more obvious in the next page.
So that's that !
Comments
Yep. Less random shouts, more subtle moans
RodVonBoche
2020-12-13 03:04:08 +0000 UTCHe already was, truthfully, he's just letting the façade slip
RodVonBoche
2020-12-13 03:01:42 +0000 UTCI'm super satisfied with this remake. Good choice in dumping the old for a new layout and poses. The Larsen body shot is UH-MAZ-ING and makes the new page an instant favorite.
Jarrod
2020-12-12 12:14:53 +0000 UTCLarsen is finally getting onto it
Diego P
2020-12-12 03:40:27 +0000 UTCthe new page is really hot. I love the feet,balls,cock..it`s all fantastic! oh and that ass of his is so nice and round! I love it!
Rick2tails
2020-12-12 03:11:49 +0000 UTCI appreciate the explanation of the thought-process that went into the change. The page certainly does a lot more to express the nuance in Larsen's experience of the situation.
Ethicist
2020-12-12 02:50:32 +0000 UTC
