An Agreement Gone Wrong chapter 3
Added 2022-03-09 22:19:37 +0000 UTCHey all, just messaged the link for the new story to everyone. Let me know if you have any issues accessing it.
This story is the conclusion of John and Christie's story! Hopefully everyone enjoys it :) I still have some other, bonus stories I have planned that take place after this, which will show up in future polls.
Contains: huge/hyper sizes, excessive cum and cum inflation, male on futa, futa on male, muscle stuff, all the way through, and lots of romance
Feel free to comment and talk about it under this post :)
Comments
One of the future chapters will be reminiscent/flashback type of chapter. It won't go back that far, but it will catalogue a lot of Christie's college conquests and activities
MisterretsiM
2022-04-14 01:14:45 +0000 UTCi love to see a prequel of this story. Story start with Cristie growing op thru puberty, thru school and dating John. i know that be a dream i can't be mad for trying
johnnie donald
2022-04-14 00:10:10 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed it! I think one thing is... it’s hard to talk that kind of situation out. While John and Christie won’t ignore the everything that happened and pretend everything is peachy, I feel like it’s something you play by ear. Sure Christie can apologize for some things as well (which I should have added in retrospect), but it’s not like John could just be like “Hey so you’re gonna stop fucking everyone now, yeah?” Because it’s just a bit more complicated than that. And at that moment, is what about emotion and not logic anyway. Christie and John were just so happy to be giving everything another shot that they couldn’t give a shit about the logistics! Anyway, happy to know you liked it and yeah I have at least a couple more chapters planned!
MisterretsiM
2022-03-12 05:02:38 +0000 UTCI was Just gonna comment on the ending and all my questions were already answered, awesome! I liked the ending, like a lot I’m happy that they got together though a bit disappointed they skipped straight to sex rather then going more in depth but knowing we get one more chapter? fuck it I’m always ready for more christie.
maners bams
2022-03-12 04:46:09 +0000 UTCFair. And, in my defense, that stuff was purposefully not included, mostly because it isn't interesting to read about them sitting down and discussing everything imo, and to save certain things like that for the bonus chapters that come after. To answer your questions though: John still contributed to the household as much as he did before chapter 1, as they have a joint bank account, but maybe a little less because he wasn't really around buying food and other necessities. He isn't going to quit his job either, especially not to just service Christie the entire time, and things may look up for him professionally as well. Things will be worked out more in future chapters, as I've been calling this more the end of their "main" arc, as John and Christie's story still isn't done. As for including others more, I had considered it, but it didn't quite fit the pacing of the story. I picked Megan because it seemed the most appropriate. Having separate scenes with his sister, Megan, and like, Raven, would have bogged down the story imo, and I wasn' trying to run it up to 30k words. A lot of that kind of stuff was ultimately cut down, because, in the end, my readers don't wanna read about John experimenting putting stuff in his ass that isn't futa dick haha. But I thank you for your comment. Calling it the end of their story may have been a little misleading, as they still have more adventures, and more things that will come up and put stress on their relationship. This was more to be the sort of "fairytale" ending that promises a better tomorrow for them.
MisterretsiM
2022-03-11 15:55:30 +0000 UTCI have to admit, while that was a great story - ending basically by going All the Way Through was a great touch, honestly - it really feels like there wasn't a conclusion/full ending here? The nightmare sequence is a somewhat (relatively) humanising moment, sure, but I feel like with how bad their relationship got, the fact it doesn't really say anything about how the relationship evolved, whether John's going to properly commit to, well, milking his hot futa wife from now on... maybe if she's making enough to support the two of them (was clearly covering the house while he was gone) either he's leaving his job/freelancing etc or he's moving into a position that helps his wife out more directly? Feels like more could be done with the folks that both of them interact with, I.e. Megan (I'm glad it's not a "Chris told her to put the thought in his head" moment, and the fanon outcome would be, if he quits, her acting as bootycall/helping John prep going forward, were it me commissioning it.)
HeraldBFC
2022-03-11 10:47:36 +0000 UTCHaha glad you enjoyed all the fluff! And yeah, had to strike a balance between the cute and the hardcore sex everyone still wanted to see haha
MisterretsiM
2022-03-10 17:08:31 +0000 UTCThat was some truely fluffy nonsense, i approve XD good job. Really liked how they both worked through things and it wasn't all just kristi fucking everything.
Lollipopmelons
2022-03-10 16:57:13 +0000 UTCHappy to hear you liked it. Yeah, I tried to delve into both of their psyches and feelings during the sex, and obviously Christie’s nightmare (which funny enough, was basically a spur of the moment, last minute addition), and I’m glad it came off strongly. Mhm. At one point, as enjoyable as it may be, being viewed as nothing but someone who fucks really well has to take a toll, and it’s definitely something she struggles with. But that’s where John is different and such. I always planned for them to have a happy ending and I’m glad I could make it happen in a satisfying way
MisterretsiM
2022-03-10 16:07:28 +0000 UTCGlad you liked it so much! I’m happy this seems to have hit a sweet spot for a lot of people - and yes I did indulge in the kissing quite a bit. Haha yes, you were the one to guess it, I just couldn’t help myself with that stupid reference. Good, and thanks for reading :)
MisterretsiM
2022-03-10 16:03:14 +0000 UTCCould definitely see that being a part of a future, bonus chapter. Something happens and he can’t drain himself and he has to go about his day cum bloated
MisterretsiM
2022-03-10 16:02:08 +0000 UTCReally enjoyed the conclusion! I especially enjoyed that nightmare Christie had at the end, shows that she still harbors guilt over her actions and overall shame in what she's accepted herself as. A monster, in her own words, built to conquer and dominate, not to love and be loved in turn. Glad she's getting the genuine affection I'm sure she's always been seeking, deep down.
novaforce555
2022-03-10 15:55:34 +0000 UTCHyper + Futa x Male + ...Romance (with good amount of kissing) ! Damn, it hits a lot of my weakspots x) I'm glad they finally have the happy ending they deserve (...and that I guessed right about the 3 breasted-woman from Total Recall was refering to a bulging belly ><). Also, I'm super hyped for bonus stories !
SeloSeaven
2022-03-10 13:52:42 +0000 UTCA fun side idea. Husband of a futa going to work with a bloated belly, with flashbacks of what happened the previous night, while people give him various looks. Could be a one off of the Agreement series or completely a new setting. Just something to help with the occasional writers block.
YesImCanadian
2022-03-10 04:22:28 +0000 UTC
