Hold me
Added 2025-05-28 11:01:47 +0000 UTCHaley really needs helps, but is Cassidy the best option for her ?
I fact, I'm not 100% satisfied of hte text. If anybody has better idea.
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I think the text is fine, but if you want to change it, perhaps something like: "Th-Thanks. I feel so useless with this cast... and this body..." or "Th-Thanks... I'm even more helpless than usual with this cast/my leg like this..." Or maybe instead of 'useless' you could exchange it for 'helpless' as that would further reinforce Haley's lack of confidence and her overall feelings regarding her position as an amputee. Also, I don't think Cassidy is a bad choice to help Haley. Maybe this experience will help Cassidy become more mature? Instead of playing up her own disability for attention she'll see that Haley really needs help and she'll step up.
FlaneurZand
2025-05-28 22:31:17 +0000 UTC
