Starting New pg.9
Added 2022-06-16 12:05:09 +0000 UTC-hoping to be closer to each other-
Comments
While "like" isn't the right word, I'm interested to see where you go with this story. I've liked Page as a person best out of your characters since I ran across your art and I'm hoping that the conclusion of this story will let me like Jay more.
Daet Wolfuar
2022-06-16 22:23:31 +0000 UTCThank you and I don't mind at all. Helpful Criticism is always welcome and I always take note of it. ^^
Jay-R
2022-06-16 22:09:42 +0000 UTCTo be honest i'm understanding less and less why you want to show Jay as a complete asshole. We know he is refusing to show his true inside feelings for Page, but...making him look like that, was it really necessary ? I don't want to hate on any of your characters cause everything you make is lovable, but i personally disapprove what you are doing with Jay. Hope you don't mind that little criticism.
Indigo
2022-06-16 18:47:36 +0000 UTC
