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Thank you! English is not my native language so I always go back and forth between a translator and a dictionary when writing dialogue. I was always worried that dialogues I wrote wouldn't look like real English conversations. (I think this is my English anyway now. Because I can't check anyway.) But now I relieved by your words "they sound like real people". THANK YOU!
AlchRove
2023-08-06 12:50:41 +0000 UTCHonestly, the thing that convinced me to support you on Patreon, beyond the high quality of your art, was the dialogue in these kinds of scenes. It’s immediately clear that the characters love each other, and they sound like real people. There is also a slightly different dynamic between you and each girl as we see them in different scenes.
SerifOfLies
2023-08-06 06:08:10 +0000 UTCShe's infuriatingly perfect! Looks good sitting in your lap~
KitsatzHaderach
2023-07-28 21:25:20 +0000 UTC
