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Aak Daar Dovah, Fent Zu'u? Niid. Ch 21

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Great chapter! The entire conversation with Rhaena was really nice and it certainly opens the door for interesting implications in how House Targaryen interacts with him. Coryanne's confusion on how he showed off his burning effect was also pretty funny. On another note, he started proving his word that he's "mighty as none other", SO Alyssane would be glad to see her first issued 'Quest' as a Queen can be completed.

Ao Black

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Jakob Mceldowney

Such a chunky boy! What a blast 47 pages are a good treat, nice chapter all in all, politics and court intrigue warped with some combat Currently he is just stretching the itch in combat I assume? Is he near as good as Redguard blademasters? I do wonder~ probably less specced for direct sword combat as actual Redguard blademasters that spends decades on one art but still he is used to things being on another magnitude of level or skills, vampires that lived for centuries might just randomally have the experience of centuries of sword combat training because one of them liked it

evyatar

TFTC

Cinema Man

I was imagining that scene from Sorzo's perspective... He must have been sweating bullets (though if he was, he still handled himself well).

mkdelux

To me the best thing about all of this is going to be her reaction when she sees his face I can’t help but imagine Aerae knows what he looks like so he removes and reveals his helmet. She just screams and panics because it’s a strange man/demon which nearly killed her dragon with his bare hands.

mohamad houmani

Maybe it's time for Alysanne to read the latest updates of her old friends book too

TAtro

Thanks for the chapter. It was done very well. The only slight remark is that Ysmir should have really taken off his helmet. It feels a bit unrealistic that he chose not to show his face to the queen tbh. I know its good for the eventual reveal and all tho

Tas

Definitely my favorite chapter over the last few. Every character feels like they play a solid roll and the action sequence was well done. Hopefully we get a tacky training montage in the near future where MC speedruns teaching the local dragon population how to cuss in Dovahzul.

Pope Yoda I

Thanks for the chapter! With all this focus on Ysmir, I hope that Aerea will soon catch him with his helmet off, but wouldn't be surprised if he manages to preserve his faceless reputation. Not surprised at Ysmir's weird little smile in reaction to Rhaena resisting the heat of his blood. If she can handle that, then that means she can handle whatever he has to give without burning up. The dragonborn was already waxing poetry about her looks, so with the knowledge that she's one of the few ladies in the world that can comfortably bed him, I don't imagine he'll let the opportunity run away from him. It remains to be seen if going ahead means he's courting death though, as Coryanne would be so inclined to believe.

Valkryia

Well at least there some progress but I wanna see some dragon on dragon action

Luis Z

Excellent chapter. Rhaena doesn't know how to handle a man who doesn't either look down on her, or try to curry favor. A man who treats her as an equal is Anathema to her life experience.

Luke

Great chapter, lot of action in this one.

TheAmorphousFungi

Thanks for the chapter. Always makes my day. Also Coryanne's misunderstanding about the meeting between Rhaena and Ysmir was hilarious. Would be funny if she insinuated something much more fun happened in that book she's writing

o0_JustDusty_0o

Hell yeah, now just to wait lmao for more lmao.

Sebas Tian


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