A widowed mother and daughter and a corrupt authority figure Happy ending 2 "Revolution"

2022/03/20 5:32 I had uploaded another file and replaced the text file.

This is the complete version of the one I drew before.

By Kakeru, who has risen to the upper class.

It will be a manga about taking back and controlling three women who were taken from you.

You will find a 9-page manga, a difference manuscript without dialogue, and a text file with a summary of the dialogue.

It was supposed to be a very long manga.

It would be a totally non-erotic manga with no erotic scenes, about 30p.

I decided that what I should draw was an erotic manga, so I summarized it into 9 pages.

In case you are wondering what kind of story it was, here is the plot.

Maybe just reading it will fill your stomach.

■ Plot

Deprived of his loved ones, Kakeru wanders the streets at night.

There he meets a sergeant of a strange conglomerate and his mistress.

Impulsively, Kakeru strikes at him, but is immediately beaten back.

The sergeant and his mistress mock him. Kakeru laments his own weakness and pettiness and roars.

The only answer to his cry, which no one can reach, is the will of the earth (Gaia).

You want power...then I will give it to you!"

At that moment, lightning strikes Kakeru. Kakeru, empowered by Gaia, achieves super-evolution.

＜Kakeru, the superhuman who has awakened into a "nature (blue)>"-type advanced citizen, finds himself standing downtown, completely naked.

Adding his own male organ to his mouth is the sergeant's mistress. She is fascinated by Kakeru's magical cock.

Before Kakeru can try to figure out what happened.

The dark side of the "Authority (yellow)-type" upper class, the black clothes, appears, having come to the rescue of the sergeant who was knocked unconscious by the aftermath of the lightning strike.

Kakeru understands the change in himself through the explanation of the black suit.

He rapes his mistress and uses her as his own meth to confirm his power.

The story of Kakeru's revenge begins now.

That's what it looked like.

I'm glad I came to myself in the middle of drawing it.

以前描いたものの完全版になります。

上級国民に成り上がったカケルによって

奪われた3人の女性を奪い返し支配する漫画になります。

9Pの漫画と台詞のない差分原稿、台詞をまとめたテキストファイルをご覧になれます。

本当は物凄く長い漫画になる予定だったんですが、

30Pくらいのエロシーンの無い、全くエロくない漫画になってしまうので

自分が描くべきなのはエロ漫画であると考え、9Pにまとめました。

一応、どんな物語だったのか、プロットをここに書きます。

多分それを読むだけでお腹いっぱいになると思います。

■プロット

愛する者たちを奪われたカケルは夜の街をさまよう。

そこで出会ったのは見知らぬ財閥の御曹司と愛人の女。

衝動的にカケルは彼に殴りかかるが、即座に返り討ちにあう。

あざ笑う御曹司と愛人。カケルは、自身の弱さと情けなさに嘆き、咆哮を上げる。

誰にも届かないその叫びに、ただ一つ、大地の意志(ガイア)だけが答えた。

「力が欲しいか…ならばくれてやる！」

その瞬間、カケルに雷が落ちる。ガイアの力を授かったカケルは、超進化を果たす。

＜自然(青)＞型上級国民へと覚醒した超人カケルは、全裸のまま繁華街に立っていることに気づく。

自身の男性器を口に加えているのは、御曹司の愛人。カケルのマジカルチンポに魅了されたのだ。

何が起きたかを把握しようとするカケルの前に、

落雷の余波で気絶した御曹司の救出に来た、＜権威(黄色)＞型上級国民の暗部、黒服が現れる。

黒服の説明によって自身の変化を理解したカケルは

愛人を犯し、自身のメスとしながら自分の力を確かめる。

カケルの復讐が、今始まる。

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という感じの内容でした。

描いてる途中で我に返ってよかった。