Elven Desires: Distress Signal, WIP 14-16
Added 2018-01-10 19:55:32 +0000 UTCDon't know if what I do next will be okay, I had many different choices and consequences in my mind, but at the end this alien guys can become more smart and difficult as enemy for all, and this is a trap after all... They expect from Ruby one thing, they want her to serve for them and obey.(Thanks to Nene) I have no idea if this is a right choice, since Orcs was more like animals, but this ones is a different kind of evil.
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My English is pretty bad, I'm sorry ;( Nene, I like your joke a lot, and this perfectly comes in hybrid with my own ideas, but this all does not match together with what I want to show to in porn, and actual story, be cause, well, I want this to be more like a porn, or? Whatever... I know this should be different, I had the perfect logic for this monsters from the start, but now this all is nothing, after one morning I wanted to show different things in my renders, and all story was turned in a different way... damn. Now, I even don't know what I do, be cause after ED_Future_0006 this all must be turned out in a completely different way. So, the problem is in me, this is not your fault, and I'm not blaming you, I'm telling "Thanks to Nene", be cause I really grateful to you, and I think that every author should listen to different points of view.
X3Z
2018-01-11 21:02:01 +0000 UTCI like the way you think. :)
Nenenthalia
2018-01-11 17:03:59 +0000 UTC(Thanks to Nene) ... At first, I was happy to see my name said in your post. Then I read the post and misunderstood what you were saying and suddenly I thought I had done something very wrong. I also must apologize that it was difficult for me to read the way you wrote the sentences at first. My thought at first was my recent joke about "bestiality" and that it wasn't seen as a joke. Then I thought a few posts back where I talked about "monster fisting" and that I didn't like it very much (I don't take issue with human fisting if one is into that), it's just the size of a possible monster being hurtful is all. After careful reading, I think I understand what you are saying ... These creatures are meant to be evil and so (shall we call it in a safer way ... ) 'rough sex' could be had as a result in their character, is what I sense. If it is, X3Z you have nothing to fear as I get the horror sense in this already without being disturbed by it. Further more, your art is your own, I give suggestions, but only that. But then the question remains, "are your ideas about the story disturbing to you, enough so that you yourself question it?" If the answer is "yes," then perhaps it's best not to do so. I agree about the view with Orcs, but I know that this is fantasy and story-telling. Yes, there are lines that can be crossed, I don't think it is in you to cross them, but if you are asking for them to fist her, I don't see that as crossing a line ... it all depends on where you are leading the story and you have said in your post that Ruby becomes their sex slave and I am fine with that. Maybe I'm a voice saying that "subtle story-telling" with this evil theme in mind, is the safe way to go while pushing slight horror themes. I hope that is all that I have inspired? Meanwhile, don't let me slow you down. Keep going as you intend to tell the story. ;)
Nenenthalia
2018-01-11 16:58:29 +0000 UTCI like the look of this. Syndori can deal with the new ones later. She's got some nasty high kicks in store for them. 😉
X3Z Fan
2018-01-10 21:00:38 +0000 UTCThis is not very good, however, this one can remain on the character until it is necessary. Just imagine: what if I can cover her all with this?
X3Z
2018-01-10 20:39:25 +0000 UTCLove where this is heading. I do, however, preferred the texture of cum in Lost Innocence as opposed to this one. Looked more erotic, in my opinion...😅
PhoenixPrince
2018-01-10 20:27:51 +0000 UTC
