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Quality check

This one was an experimental illustration, I want to start playing with weirder concepts and elevate the insanity and creepy factor. I would love feedback on this piece here, do you think the colors were too saturated or dirty?

Quality check

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Ohh thank you very much for the feedback! Yeah, I agree that it seems to work better for an important moment, I need to start balancing the use of colors better so that moments like this are more impactful.

Leo Yoyoro

Graaaah I love this! Turning it 90 degrees makes it easier to "read" everything that's going on, admittedly. But either way it's an incredible piece. The perspective reaally adds to it, every little detail is hff, and overall the art goes real well with the color! I'd say it's best for like, a climax rather than a *whole* comic with the same lighting/color.

VrissyIRL

It was my pleasure ✌️

Max

I'm glad you liked it! And yeah her face is the focal point, I was actually thinking that I should have hidden her legs a little more, I think they are still getting more attention than I initially planned XD. Thank you for the feedback tho, I really appreciate it.

Leo Yoyoro

I see, nicee, thanks for the feedback!

Leo Yoyoro

I'm no artist but from my perspective, the color might just be a little muddy around her leg area? I get that the focus is on her face and everything, but it would be nice if we could see what's goin on down there a little clearer too. Other than that, really lovin the concept here.

Max

If you are trying to elevate the insanity and creep factor, keep up the colors. Gives LSD vibes

Blank88

❤️

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