Diet Breach [alternate ver.]
Added 2023-01-02 08:13:00 +0000 UTCSee, this was originally going to be the main version and have something along the lines of Gregory getting spooked by Vanessa going off, like the in-game jumpscares. But it didn't really translate well into script format... oh well. At least this one has some funny robot banter.
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I guess the idea is okay, but the actual weight gain only happens near the end? And it's only her gut that gets big, right? I guess that at the very least, the ending was appropriate in how comedically dark it was, but it was still kinda random.
SonicStantz
2023-01-02 15:49:40 +0000 UTC
