The second draft of the comic script is on-going.
It is mostly the pages layout, but there is quite a few minor changes, and one larger change around page 29-30 (also added an extra page)
2/3rd of the second draft is done. And the third draft will be centered around the dialogues.
(Note: All Pages with an "a" next to it mean they are on their second draft)
Click here to see the script:
Comic script (Google docs)