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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 55

Plan 'C'.

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I do like these pages for what I feel is a different reason than most. As a bit of globetrotter myself these pages do illustrate just how exhausting long trips can be. I like being in new places but I don't like getting to them all that much. I wish I could teleport!

TheLoreMaker

The bus has an A113 license plate xdd

EXELLISDUMB

Va a ver secuela?

Marilu 15

Almenos dígame que es un final feliz

Marilu 15

Well, as I guessed; I am surprised. Now the probability of getting caught is impressively low XD That was a really good plan and well thought to be honest.

Don't be afraid, I am kind

Thank you so much for the kind comment. In all likelihood, the police in this universe wouldn't go as far as doing an international search, or really conduct a super thorough investigation. They'd write it down as two teenagers deciding to run away from home, and it'd soon get filed as yet another case of missing children that the government agencies don't care to investigate to the final consequences. Or at least that's where I expect the reader's suspension of disbelief to go to in order to make the story possible lol

UnderratedHero

He called him and left a voicemail. ...cause otherwise I would have had to include Angus' response in the conversation, and that would've spoiled the reveal in the last panel lol

UnderratedHero

And really, you are kind <3

TendingHealer13

Thanks for explaining(ps the comic is amazing keep up the good work)

Fabinator

Ow, that hurt to hear

TendingHealer13

The movie huh? Scotland is surely faraway. My money is on Lily not meeting them again before she becomes a aunt. And I forgot this part, they contacted him with a public phone, but this looks more like a letter...

Moss1998

That was beautifull <3

TendingHealer13

I like the fact that the writer keeping this story as realistic as possible instead of going like the show's atmosphere (I mean it by extraordinary events). I guess, thanks to air travel records and bank transactions, probably Lynn and Rita going to find out where they actually gone. And Angus probably would be in a really serious trouble and could face legal consequences for harboring runaway minors. Maybe Angus secretly contact with Lynn Sr. about that. Or Someone WILL recognize them. The internet exists. A missing persons report could spread fast. Even thought it's a high probability (Around like 80%) that they going to busted eventually, the writer always surprised me so let's see what will be next. Good job mate, that's probably most talented and worked on Loud House fan story in the internet. Keep it going. No rush, do your best.

Don't be afraid, I am kind

<3

TendingHealer13

Español

TendingHealer13

None lol <3

TendingHealer13

Wasn’t expecting that

Antn100Q

<3

TendingHealer13

Is a pretty nice theory..good work <3

TendingHealer13

Ojala

TendingHealer13

Food for thought. Makes you wonder...

I.O. Penner

That's one theory

Paul Hoon

Ooh, it just hit me: if in this parallel universe Lincoln and Lynn fell in love with each other, does that mean their 1600s counterparts fell in love with each other, too? That would mean this forbidden love runs in their family. Maybe Lincoln and Lynn couldn't contain or control their feelings for each other because it's part of their lineage...

I.O. Penner

It will be addressed in future pages.

UnderratedHero

Eso es bueno genial, 👌👌

Juan Carlos Juarez

We'll find out soon enough.

UnderratedHero

Definitivamente les va a dar una mano

UnderratedHero

Que oh por dios ese el el plan C, vaya me quedé sorprendido 😯😯 veremos qué sucederá ojalá Angus los ayude eso espero

Juan Carlos Juarez

So are last couple of pages going to show the family?

Corey Peters

Yeah

TendingHealer13

Hahaha

TendingHealer13

Well, I guessed right. It was the castle in Scotland. Like I said before I have mixed feelings about this. A castle in Scotland is somewhere far, far away from Royal Woods, so it's a good place to hide. I like that they're in there and not in the gutter. However, I'm not a fan of that movie, even more not a fan of that fatass villain Morag, so I'm not overly fond that this comic is affiliating itself with the movie. Also, wouldn't one of the Louds guess that Lincoln and Lynn would go there if they've been there?

Paul Hoon

Same here, amigo.

David Mullins

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) ( Excited ) Oh boy, a new page for the comic... and on a Friday too! ( 1 Minute Later ) ( Shocked 😱 ) WHAAAAAAATTTTTT?! Wait, hold on a second, that was Plan C?... 😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯 ( Realizing ) Ooooooooh. Oh, now I get it...Plan C is for Castle. Man, now I really want to know what happens next. But in the meantime, I'm going to read the comic from the beginning. Still though, I wonder what's going to happen next on the comic. But for now... ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Next Page Of The Comic Comes Out ) ( Straw Poking Out Of The Sand So I Can Breathe ) ( Speaking Through The Straw ) Can't wait to see what happens next, Underrated Hero.

David Mullins

Bruh

TendingHealer13

So, um, holy fucking shit 😲

Muze Clark

Me too

TendingHealer13

Yeqh

TendingHealer13

I didn't know that historical tidbit, thank you for sharing!

UnderratedHero

Oh definitely. Having help from royalty does have it's perks.

C.E. Zim93

Okay but It’ll be soon when their parents set up a search party.

Double Gron

For starters, giving them a place to hide while they figure everything up

UnderratedHero

I'm sure having royalty as an ally will prove useful in some ways.

UnderratedHero

Help, but how?

TendingHealer13

Well see bro

TendingHealer13

Angus!? Holy crap! I should have known! This is interesting. Now I want to see more of this. I wonder what's he going to do.

C.E. Zim93

I don't believe it , Loud castle !? But how's Angus gonna help?

Thuren Miller

Bro, atlantic airlines, 10000% real lol

TendingHealer13

Lol

TendingHealer13

<3

TendingHealer13

<3

TendingHealer13

Dont worry <3

TendingHealer13

Absolutely! Lincoln and Lynn deserve to catch a break and their breath after all they've been through. Long may Lynncoln persevere!

I.O. Penner

Why do I feel like Morag's gonna be a problem still?

DarkHammer

But, thwy cant until 1 or 2 ywars, because, they dont have concent

TendingHealer13

Just me then, I'm clearly the fool. XD lol

Happychap2628

They've been through a lot already, I think our lovebirds deserve a chance to rebuild and start over from zero without such an imminent danger. They sacrificed everything, they deserve a clean start.

UnderratedHero

I think back in olden days couples would elope to Scotland as marriage wasn’t considered a sacrament and Scotland didn’t have as many legal restrictions as England did (like requiring parental consent if they were below majority age). Today’s it’s still legal for 16 year olds to get married in Scotland with parental consent. (But they can’t be related though)

Texas Gent

I love that idea, Hero. Now I can breathe a little easier. Thank you for that.

I.O. Penner

Well, I'm honored to be able to provide a good experience even if you haven't watched the show lol

UnderratedHero

Yes lol

UnderratedHero

Some people figured it out! Others got real close!

UnderratedHero

I hope

TendingHealer13

Excellent!

UnderratedHero

Even thi your hypotesis was almost right....

TendingHealer13

Glad to provide a surprise twist!

UnderratedHero

I know, right? Everything for you guys!

UnderratedHero

Lets wait an see

TendingHealer13

This was my opportunity to have fun by expanding into the source material.

UnderratedHero

Unexpected

TendingHealer13

Angus was their last hopes, reference for star wars again lol <3

TendingHealer13

Thank you!

UnderratedHero

Okay that makes a lot of sense and again I haven't watched not only the movie but I haven't watched anything regarding the loud house I'm here purely because of this story

Dynames67

Going by Lincoln's words, it doesn't sound like they're planning on staying in the castle for too long...

UnderratedHero

Facts

TendingHealer13

I'm copy-pasting an answer on a different post: In the first movie, Lincoln finds out his ancestor was the Duke of Loch Loud, a small town in Scotland. He briefly becomes the Duke, living in a castle and all. But by the end, he gives up the crown to Angus, a kind-hearted guy who works at the castle, and he and the family go back to Royal Woods. So now that he has nowhere else to go, he's basically cashing in a favor from Angus, in Scotland, far away from Royal Woods, his family, the police, etc.

UnderratedHero

I'm not gonna include Morag in this, that'd be too complicated haha

UnderratedHero

I think I've given them enough trouble for now, hehe. Let's say that thanks to Angus, Morag learned the same lesson Lincoln did, and her ambition to be the Duchess and have power over the people of Loch Loud is gone. She lives in town with everyone else and occasionally visits Angus for tea. How does that sound?

UnderratedHero

<3 tks

TendingHealer13

I would have never expected that

TendingHealer13

My man is a genkous

TendingHealer13

Hahaha, yeah, I guess without context it's kinda strange... In the first movie, Lincoln finds out his ancestor was the Duke of Loch Loud, a small town in Scotland. He briefly becomes the Duke, living in a castle and all. But by the end, he gives up the crown to Angus, a kind-hearted guy who works at the castle, and he and the family go back to Royal Woods. So now that he has nowhere else to go, he's basically cashing in a favor from Angus, in Scotland, far away from Royal Woods, his family, the police, etc.

UnderratedHero

Ah man, it was there "C" for Castle. Once again you fooled us all!

Happychap2628

Same

Muze Clark

Is the A113 on the bus a pixar reference?

Hootsifer

This is the point where I wish I actually watched the loud house cuz this Revelation as momentous as it seems means absolutely nothing to me I don't know who's Angus or what the castle means

Dynames67

Plan 'C' for Castle, huh? Simple yet elegant in its design. Okay, now I understand where you were coming from, Hero. I would’ve never guessed, though—Scotland! Well, it’s much better than Canada; at least Lincoln hasn’t been banned from Scotland. Wow, Lincoln and Lynn sure have been quite the international pairing throughout this volume. I can’t wait to see how these sibling soulmates start anew here! Although, I am a little wary for the moment because if I recall correctly, Morag is still here, now relegated to working as the Loud Castle’s groundskeeper. And we all know the vendetta she still holds against the Louds, past and present. And especially once she discovers Lincoln and Lynn’s new relationship status—that might give her reason to restart her campaign of vengeance once again…

I.O. Penner

At The Bus Avoids A Police Officer At The Airport & Left For State Of Scotland Of The Castle.🏰 I Realize Augus In This & I Hope Morag Is In This Castle Too From The Movie Even Since August 2021

Silvester Rodriguez

I'm very confused can someone please explain

Fabinator

Oh, you're tying the comic to the Netflix movie, huh?! I never watched it myself, but I heard it wasn't really that good. Lynn and Lincoln will be living a life of luxury at the castle. Hopefully, they'll be welcome with open arms, though, and Angus will accept their romantic relationship.

CipherRage0909

They were going to Scotland I know it. What a great call back

Darcy lee

My God... Castle McLoud. You're a genius man! I never knew you would connect the movie!

DarkHammer

Woah you are cranking out Page's.

Austin Hicks

Wow… now that was something I didn’t expect

SreznoJIG07

I had a feeling

Jachob(braineyac)

Ohhh, I'm at the edge of my seat. I love this romance

Dream_ Rat


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