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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 29

Halfway done with the chapter, things don't look too bright for our heroes.

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They literally not gonna give up in the name of true love.

Mark John Banzon

I second that.

David Mullins

Honestly, could have been worse. I really thought theyd send em to live with family or a boarding school for sure. I mean, honestly otherwise its kind of hard to enforce the no dating.

Kevin

Yeah it’s a really difficult negotiation. Do they really want to do this, are they willing to choose their unnatural relationship over their family 😕😥?

Double Gron

I Can’t Wait

Double Gron

I don't really think it's going to be easy for these two to "stop" being in love.

CipherRage0909

Couldn't have worded it any better myself

UnderratedHero

The sisters' reaction portion of the story is coming soon! Hang on a little longer!

UnderratedHero

… dang

Antn100Q

I second that.

David Mullins

I know this was going to happen because we are half way through the chapter and the story needs to play out. It will be interesting to see if Lynn Jr and Lincoln can win Rita and Lynn Sr over throughout the rest of this chapter. I'm mainly interested in the reactions of their sister's where do they stand on it?

Corey Peters

Yeah, they can't make a decision now. Not on the same night they discover that two of their children are in love and intimate with each other. After some time passes, who knows? Except you, of course. LOL Now, I'm curious how the other sisters will react to it.

Paul Hoon

Or in the name of their love.

UnderratedHero

It all comes down to how much they're willing to sacrifice for their love.

UnderratedHero

Who knows, maybe they'll reconsider. This is all too much to take in at once.

UnderratedHero

I'll be posting more regularly

UnderratedHero

29 more pages

UnderratedHero

Well okay If you say so.

Double Gron

It’s at least a step in the right direction for Rita and Lynn Sr. to slowly come to terms with the revelation that Lincoln and Lynn truly fell in love with each other. It is also comforting to know that they won’t exile their children from the Loud house, either. However, the parents also just told Lincoln and Lynn that their relationship has to end – that was the wrong thing to say. We already saw what it was like when Lincoln and Lynn tried to suppress their feelings in the previous volume, and that ended up being an epic failure. Who could forget the misery they put themselves through, trying to maintain the status quo of “normal”? And now, for the parents to force Lincoln and Lynn back into their previous roles of remaining just siblings? This is not going to end well. I know Rita promised Lincoln and Lynn earlier that they weren’t in trouble, but this actually does feel like a punishment. So now, this is where the term “separation” will come into play and mean one thing or the other. Lincoln and Lynn are at the metaphorical fork in the road, but now the biggest question remains: will they make the right choice for the family . . . or for themselves?

I.O. Penner

Really loving the comic now 😁

faris qusairy

Is it possible for the parents to accept it? They won't now, but maybe in the future? They're accepting the fact that they're in love and telling them it has to end, but they gotta know that you can't stop people who are in love. Sooner or later, Lincoln and Lynn will find a way to be together. That's how much they love each other.

Paul Hoon

Are you going to post regularly now

faris qusairy

How many pages left exactly? And this relationship between them is getting more and more depressing

Thuren Miller

Ok

El Pinche Barry

Escríbeme por X

UnderratedHero

There's SO MUCH more left lmao

UnderratedHero

Half-way done?! Woah, there’s still so much left, and I really hope it all pans out like we ALL hope… 🥹

Spawn

They're not forcing anything. They really, really love each other. I wrote four full comics to explore this idea lol

UnderratedHero

We Are Not Sure About This They Are Still Brothers And Sisters

Silvester Rodriguez

But do you think they’re taking some kind of connection they have and forcing it into a boyfriend/girlfriend thing😐😐🤷🏽?

Double Gron

Thanks! He was actually born on Thanksgiving

C.E. Zim93

Ok. Eso es muy interesante. Te quería preguntar si te puedo hacer una entrevista por escrito para mi blog?

El Pinche Barry

But is life worth living with only half a heart? D:

UnderratedHero

No me gustan las cosas muy trilladas que a veces pasan en estas historias. Estoy escribiendo (dibujando jajaja) lo que creo que realmente pasaría en un caso así, teniendo en cuenta cómo son todos los personajes. Por suerte, parece que los lectores opinan igual que yo jajajaja

UnderratedHero

Happy birthday to your dad!

UnderratedHero

Things can get really bad really fast. But they love each other too much to care about the possible dangers.

UnderratedHero

Happy thanksgiving!

UnderratedHero

This has to end once and for all. If they keep this up they might ruin their own lives so I agree with Rita.

Double Gron

Eliminando clichés de historias lynncoln. Ahora viene un diálogo muy doloroso para Lynn jr y Lincoln. La historia es muy interesante para todos los fans seas pro o contra del ship, único en su categoría felicitaciones mi estimado Underrated.

El Pinche Barry

Dang this is hard to read. And on Thanksgiving! And my dad's birthday

C.E. Zim93

Also Happy Thanksgiving 🦃

Silvester Rodriguez

Lynn And Lincoln Want To Stay Together As Loud Family And Not Sent To Boarding School And Aunt Ruth And Gramps If It Dose Happened Or They Must Stop Or This Will Get More And More Worst Of They Life’s.

Silvester Rodriguez


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