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Rewrite the Stars V — FULL lineup!

AND HERE WE GO!

The character lineup is finally ready. It always makes me anxious that people may end up disliking a character design choice I make, but I try to make these characters appealing and interesting to draw, while making sure there are some subtle visual cues regarding their personalities or character arcs.

I made some slight changes to previous characters (changing the color of Luan's pants), but this is the final lineup.

Some people asked me to share all the lineups so far from the previous comics, so here's a little gif to see the evolution of the characters through the years!

And now...

Now I'm ready to start the comic...

Rewrite the Stars V — FULL lineup!

Comments

The cover and summary are published. The first page will come out as soon as it's ready.

UnderratedHero

When is the comic coming out

Blue

This has been such a wild ride, heh. I can’t wait for the end and everything else to come! 😌🤍

Spawn

Bro they look goated can't wait for the new comic

TLSM 115

Oh, by the way, upon further inspection, I just realized, Hero - the collar and hem of Lincoln's shirt is red, while Lynn's shirt collar and hem are both orange. I'm 100% sure that was intentional on your part. It made me harken back to the previous volume where Lincoln told Lynn that that tiny piece of her heart belonged to him and vice versa. And what better way for Lincoln and Lynn to express that statement than through wearing the other's signature color? That was such a nice little creative touch there, Hero!

I.O. Penner

Lynn and Lincoln are about to finish the story. My curiosity gets the better of me findind out what will happen nexe. I'Fm very excited about it. The Final Horizon is coming....maybe? I'm foward to read the comic soon, giving u lots of love and support, Hero. Good Luck!

Godfrey Rugare

Looks great! Good job!

C.E. Zim93

The twins are 2 years OLDER then the mad scientist? I always thought the reverse with them being like 4-5 in canon to her 7-8.... shit..

Ralph Cornwell

They’re 2 years older than lisa

Xay

Excited now! Bring on the Lynncoln! :P

Hootsifer

The character desgin is fine and great and their Generation is perfect. Great Job this ia apeak lf u ask me

Godfrey Rugare

This is awesome and exciting! I look forward to seeing the first pages.

Paul Hoon

Ooh, that's deep! I honestly had no idea. But looking back at the pivotal points of tension between Lynn and Lincoln in the previous installment, now it makes more sense. That's why I love your train of thought, Hero - give me a ticket to ride anytime!

I.O. Penner

He'll still be wearing the beanie, occasionally! But the beanie represented the feelings he was hiding that were a part of himself, hiding them like how he covered his white hair, and now he doesn't have to hide anymore. There are some similar explanations about Lynn, her hair and the lack of #1 in her clothes, but I'll leave that for you guys to think about lol

UnderratedHero

I admit, Lincoln’s beanie in the last comic had started growing on me. But now he’s looking real snazzy, trading his gray beanie for that orange jacket and shoes. And his white hair looks a lot more refined and slicker – sorry, ladies, but you’re about to find out the Man with the Plan is off the market! And Lynn is letting her hair down now? Very nice touch. I do have to say, I honestly thought she was gonna keep the ponytail and the #1 shirt – that has been a part of her signature look since she was 13. But change can be a good thing! Check out that embroidered coat – I love the stitched-in initials! I also like the fact that in this line-up, Lincoln and Lynn are the only ones facing each other and not the fourth wall, like their other sisters. We can see the story and the secret in Lincoln and Lynn’s eyes, while the other sisters are still unaware of their sudden development. I feel so exclusive, being let in on this secret. I’m that much more excited for the next installment! I can’t wait to see how you work your magic, Hero!

I.O. Penner

I thought the twins were the youngest besides the baby?

Ralph Cornwell


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