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The Fluffer - Page 11

Not my favourite page, it's got some issues in both the writing and drawing sides of things. I have to admit I did struggle a lil' to connect the first half of the plot to the second half so it's a bit rough. I did warn y'all that I'm no writer and that this was gonna be dumb. :P

Oh well, at least we're getting real close to the good stuff!

The Fluffer - Page 11

Comments

I bet he's going to think the horse must be ready to blow, but then the horse just fucks him for hours! Good thing he's a fox and can take it tho!

Matsi

Lol I hope he gets turned down.

Amber

is the naughty fennec gonna straight up offer to take care of the stallion in place of the tiger? will he try to be subtle and suggest a change of scene to the director? find out next time on The Fluffer

Shadewing

I actually flip flopped a bit on whether I needed him still hard here or not, since I thought I'd be making use of that in the next page, but even before it was mentioned I thought it felt a bit odd and was considering changing it. Having you bring it up pushed me over the edge in that regard. Having you point out the teardrop markings in every single page has made it a lot easier to remember. :P I still wouldn't be surprised if I do it at some point, but now that you've hammered it home a lot it seems less likely!

Ruaidri

So with the addition of color and eyebrows in panel #4, I think Kyle's expression doesn't seem as strange anymore, so great work there! For someone who doesn't get to do many equine characters I think you're rendering the stallion out great, especially considering the small size you have to work with. Two things I notice that make me giggle a bit--One is that you have yet to forget Kyle's teardrop markings, and I'll be sure to keep looking for them in every page, and two is that you've made our stallion friend less of a sex god by finally having him lose his mysteriously long-winded hardon! The colors are great as always, and your gradient from light to dark in the last panel is so smooth and awesome!

Bloudin Ruo

Alright Kyle, you got two minutes tops to think up your pickup line.

Whoops, had so much I needed to fix on this page that that one slipped by. Is fixed now!

Ruaidri

Are you not able to correct the “it” in “I got it”?

sonicmega


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