A Helping Hand - Page 15 (Inks)
Added 2018-07-24 01:47:03 +0000 UTCDONE. That's it, that's all the pages. I've just gotta colour up the last few and I'll be done, whee!
And this last page is a pretty good sendoff too, I think. As usual there were some inking slips, but I'm fairly satisfied with most of the actual drawings on this page. I'll admit the last few pages were maybe a little weak, but this page has some of the best in the whole thing I think, which is nice. If I can avoid screwing up the colouring, it'll be nice to send off this project with a bit of a bang.
Would definitely love to know your thoughts on the thing as a whole- I know a lot of people kept dreaming up interesting ideas in the comments that would have been fun to explore, some people were wondering if deer boy would become sub #2 or maybe find a dominant streak of his own, but really blue just wanted to get him laid. I'm pretty sure he'll take literally any excuse to watch someone fuck Gale. As much fun as it would be to run down this rabbit hole forever, I've gotta put this to bed, I've got other ideas I might like to explore! So I hope the very simple plot and ending isn't too disappointing.
Anyway, tomorrow I can start on colouring up the last few pages. Wish me luck. :D
Comments
Ah, thanks! Good to hear it all works out then. Truth be told, I kind of -want- the smut to be the main point, with story stuff as a little special sauce to make the smut more interesting, but so far the reaction to this has been pretty positive so I guess I don't mind that it leaned a bit more on the story stuff. :P
Ruaidri
2018-07-25 18:41:41 +0000 UTCI think you ended it well! The previous two pages seemed fast when looking at them out of context, but with the final page now in place, I think they work just fine as they are. The comic felt, on the whole, like an 'introduction' of these three characters and their relationships with the smut as icing on the cake, not meant to be the main course (even though it was all so delicious!). You did a fantastic job, be proud!
Bloudin Ruo
2018-07-24 03:02:52 +0000 UTCHehe good good, I love to see a sub get their fill. This comic was really cute though, despite the dom aspects of Gale&Blue, Gale&Deer were delightfully tender... I do have a thing for a virgin’s hesitant-but-excited first time scene.
Magitechnician
2018-07-24 01:55:20 +0000 UTCAh, don't worry. I think we'll be seeing that pretty soon. It might not be an official part of the comic, but it's gonna happen. x3
Ruaidri
2018-07-24 01:50:32 +0000 UTCBut Gale earned a reward! I wanna see him “cum buckets” :3
Magitechnician
2018-07-24 01:48:19 +0000 UTC
