A Helping Hand - Page 11
Added 2018-06-20 00:30:57 +0000 UTCThings finally move into the bedroom!
Art is a bit rough in this one- still figuring out the new lighting for this scene. I think I made things overall a bit too dark, and I took the opportunity to play with an idea for painting the BG that didn't 100% work out, though with some adjusting it might...
Just lots of trying new things here, so it's a bit bumpy. Hopefully the next page will be a lil' smoother, but as always I hope y'all like it despite the issues. :P
As always, would love to hear your thoughts!
Comments
I more meant technique wise- with watercolours it's a little tricky to keep things clean when they get this dark, so lightening things up slightly might help tidy it up a little. If I do it right the room won't even look 'lighter', it should just look better. That's a fairly big 'if' though. x3
Ruaidri
2018-06-22 18:08:20 +0000 UTCAww, you're too kind. Thank you! :D
Ruaidri
2018-06-22 18:07:15 +0000 UTCI don't think it's too dark. I mean I keep my brightness down and blue-dampening glasses on and it looks just about right on my screen.
PsyMar
2018-06-21 09:38:22 +0000 UTCI cannot even begin to describe how awesome this comic has been so far. You really have a talent for the comic style. Even your dialogue is fantastic.
Shiloh Skye
2018-06-21 03:02:20 +0000 UTCAw, thanks! :D Fortunately they chastity thing isn't really a huge theme in this comic- it's mentioned because I couldn't see a way not to, but it's not really 'about' that. So it shouldn't become too distracting hopefully!
Ruaidri
2018-06-20 13:55:53 +0000 UTC"No talk, only do" :)
Bloudin Ruo
2018-06-20 06:01:34 +0000 UTCAlso keep experimenting, its like night and day between this page and the first. really good work
arcticfox12x
2018-06-20 05:37:20 +0000 UTCAs someone who has zero experience drawing, this scene looks great to me. I would imagine drawing darkness while portaying a scene in it is easier said than done. So good work!
arcticfox12x
2018-06-20 05:28:51 +0000 UTCI may not be into the whole chastity thing myself but my god Gale&Deer are *so adorable*
Magitechnician
2018-06-20 05:28:19 +0000 UTCHe definitely knows how to push all the right buttons!
Ruaidri
2018-06-20 01:53:18 +0000 UTCIt seemed like the most clear way to get his message across. :P
Ruaidri
2018-06-20 01:52:12 +0000 UTCLove that 3rd frame, pulling him in!
LexOunce
2018-06-20 01:29:43 +0000 UTCThere's something about Gale that is so enticing. That kiss <3<3
Nana Lu
2018-06-20 00:59:59 +0000 UTC
