Breast Quest - Chapter 9
Added 2025-10-24 18:00:11 +0000 UTCChapter 9 of my longest running Fem
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I hope ash and Mena hooks up next story
Matthefurious
2025-10-26 07:48:57 +0000 UTCAs I said in the Discord, there was a lot of pressure to deliver big on the boobage with this one. Not just from my own hyping it up in announcements, but just the nature of the story, it's such a long time coming. Glad it didn't disappoint! Really happy you pointed out juggling all those personalities, that was something I was fairly careful about. It is difficult when you have that many characters at once, but we do get a lot of time with them so it was one of the priorities to make them all stand apart to some degree. Loretta benefits a lot from development beforehand, usually she'd be the toughest to have stand out. I didn't necessarily intend for Ash to charm them all, just kinda happened with the flow of the writing. I think it does make sense though, given Auphemia and her maids very obvious obsession and pride over their busts, that they would appreciate such sincere and devout tit worship. Even when Ash's body is wracked and the lust is depleted, they still want that tiddy. It's not just a fetish, it's like their favorite hobby... even if they were a eunuch they'd probably still wanna rest their head on them. I think once they really get going with domming Ash, they pick up on that sincerity. With Asher and Mena, I thought it was important to broach on the idea of, what does Mena actually think about them playing around with other girls this way. Seems like the relationship wouldn't feel as real if that wasn't addressed. Mena's logic makes a certain kind of sense in how she approaches it, plus she's used to seeing girls dom the fuck outta Asher by now so that influences her perspective a bit. To some degree though she is kinda trying to convince herself that too, she probably does feel a tinge conflicted about it, but not to a degree where she wants to take it away from him. Of course she's also gunshy about a committed intimate relationship since she's spent her whole life not trusting people and never quite letting her guard down, so it can also act as a bit of an excuse to hold off on ripping that bandaid a little longer... but I'm rambling. For Loretta, it's an interesting thing... 'cause like, she doesn't have a crush, she doesn't wanna take Ash away from Mena, kinda the opposite. As we've said she's like their #1 shipper and rooting for them and all that, so considering this it was funny when I thought more about how to approach what she'd do with Ash in this context. Ultimately this, like a lot of my stories, is a world with a ton of casual sex and it's pretty lax about these things, but given Mena herself does bring it up, it makes it a bit more questionable what Loretta's actually thinking when she's doing this. But that's why she made sure to add that little line to give the couple their blessing, even after making Asher cum herself. When you take a step back, it's honestly really weird, but somehow in the internal logic of these femdom stories it works. As for the ending, I feel like people who are more like casually aware of GBH, maybe folks who watch all the videos but didn't actually play the game, might be like really whiplashed by the reveal. Just funny to think about but yeah, a little twist I've been saving for the entirety of the series there. Turns out those MacGuffins they've been hunting down this whole time had a payoff, they're what Auphemia uses to create monsters in this version of the story.
Femdom Fanatics
2025-10-26 07:30:24 +0000 UTCOh, this is good. This is VERY good. Forgive the obligatory pun, but this chapter really put the "tit" in titillating and then some. Not only was Asher's time with the maids hot as hell, but I found it genuinely refreshing how they each seemed to warm up to Ash and their undying love of tiddy. Like, Loretta and Alcia were to be expected for obvious reasons, maybe even the level-headed Sejna. But I was genuinely surprised to see Lusy and Camil apparently enjoying their time with Ash too. But it didn't feel forced either. Camil respecting the way Ash can tank plenty of her tit slaps makes total sense to me, for instance. Above all else, though, the relationship with Ash and Mena continues to be endearing. But what was just as endearing (as well as extremely hot) were the ways Loretta took center stage this chapter. Very satisfying to see her personally and sweetly reward Ash for all of their efforts she witnessed. The cliffhanger ending is great too. I'm very eager to see how you dive into that part of Auphemia's GBH lore.
almost929
2025-10-25 03:11:17 +0000 UTC
