The Rookie: 11-15
Added 2023-04-12 23:06:28 +0000 UTC5 new action packed for today's update!
Comments
Glad you like it 😄. I wanted Liliana to be more aggressive at the beginning of the fight so she could teach Jazz some humility and show her the full spectrum of what it means to step into the critical climax ring, which means that "if you're here, you're going to fight, but you're also going to fuck" 😉.
H-SNACK
2023-04-13 15:18:04 +0000 UTCDamn, the girls aren't playing around! This is nice and rough--love starting off with just angry ladies brawling. As an aside, I like the speed lines and the impact and sound effects--look realy fun and add "oomph" to the fights. The big page of Liliana kneeing Jazz, followed up by the kick is lovely, and that last splash page of Jazz collapsed against the cage is really good--this is a really fun match so far. Thanks!
D G
2023-04-12 23:44:30 +0000 UTC
