It's decided! Liliana and Jazz are gonna see each other in the octagon
Added 2023-02-14 00:45:04 +0000 UTC
The results for the last poll i did to decide what other project i'm gonna do in parallel with the "dom squad" image set are here and this are the result:
- Liliana Vs Jazz( 41%)
- Lubed Games 2( 28%)
- Blonde Was( 21%)
Congratulations to the fans of Liliana and Jazz!
So, about this project, i used to work my comics writing an outline that it would with he basic tropes of the fight, most of the time this outline would change every week as i was designing the pages and of course this ended being very stressing and is not a good way to do this kind of projects. That's why this time i'm gonna do a proper script and storyboard before work in the final pages. Of course, it will take a couple of weeks before you can see the first pages but i'm gonna keep you updated here as i develop it
Before i start the writing i have some questions: What you want to see in this fight? more punching? more wrestling holds? more trash talk? more sex attacks? How you think ech girl is gonna react to the other? Let me know what you think so i can incorporate to the final project
Comments
Don't worry friend, hope that things are doing better for you this week. As for the fight, i think you will love what i'm cooking😋
H-SNACK
2023-02-22 15:48:20 +0000 UTCSorry for being late to this, last week was rough for me but I have some ideas if you are still looking for them. For me one thing I really like, perhaps a bit out of the usual, is that the fighters are friendly with each other, or are at least civil. Like for this I would like to see both of them being competitive but not being nasty to each other. While of course more bitter rivalries do occur in these types of stories for Lilianna and Jazz I would like to see them forge a competitive friendship (or something more) by the end. As for the action I like a good balance of striking, holds and sexual attacks. In this case maybe start with more striking and hold first, and if they start to warm up to each other than proceed with sexual attacks.
Samuel
2023-02-22 15:37:50 +0000 UTCPerhaps some wrestling holds, with more focus on sex attacks, and maybe a bit of slapping. And with Liliana putting some resistance at first but quickly getting overwhelmed, and utterly and sensually dominated. Also, when Jazz is weary and Liliana is utterly spent, those two blondes who dominated Jazz could come along and dominate both Jazz and Liliana, which would make for a really steamy sight. Although that could make the comic a bit complicated, so it's simply a fun idea. About how the ladies would react, they are both tough and aggressive and would really like to thoroughly dominate each other, but despite that they could be mostly friendly instead of really wanting to humiliate each other. For example when Jazz ravishes Liliana into oblivion, she could mention how hot she is, and how good she looks getting so thoroughly ravaged.
bob-warden
2023-02-15 11:12:25 +0000 UTCI'd prefer this to be more brawling than sex--at least until one is beaten or taps out. Liliana's had a *fun* history with sex fights, and Jazz strikes me as more interested in the fighting and proving herself stronger than her foe. So I suppose more punching and slams/holds, plenty of smack talk, that sort of thing. Two scrappy ladies whose first priority is beating the other, with sexually dominating them secondary. From the first few pics you've shown, they actually seem to be friendly ... But neither wants to lose, so I can see this getting rather *mean*, especially once a winner is declared and decides to gloat while using the loser.
D G
2023-02-14 00:54:35 +0000 UTCmore sex attacks and liliana get embarrassed the fuck out of :)
Swagmaster Supreme
2023-02-14 00:53:42 +0000 UTCmore sex attacks from these two wild ladies
Wanderer
2023-02-14 00:47:00 +0000 UTC
