Chapter 29 of Broken Dreams is out for Squires!
Added 2026-02-17 22:23:48 +0000 UTCComments
Great chapter brother! Loved seeing Aegon’s thoughts and perspective on everything. Hopefully the Royal scribe’s account and later on Jon’s actions will change Aegon’s mind and he’ll see that Jon will be a worthy match for Rhaella. Loved the conversation between Jon and Arthur. Jon mentoring Tormund, Arthur and Brynden is already a legend in the making.
Lesion
2026-02-22 07:17:00 +0000 UTCI think it’s more of a shocked reaction like a heat of the moment thing. After her reaction wears off I’m sure that Rhaella will see why her grandfather had to do what he did. He had to kill the boy and let the man be born like Aemon said.
Lesion
2026-02-22 07:12:58 +0000 UTCLoved the chapter. Not sure why Rhaella is asking why. She knows why. Her brother is a cripple hand there’s no heir.
ND518
2026-02-18 22:24:11 +0000 UTCThis was really good! I just have one small problem- the next chapter is not out yet & I read this one too quickly...
Bovragor
2026-02-18 18:51:13 +0000 UTCPretty sure Gregor is a lost cause. That guy tortured his siblings from early age iirc. It's not really feasible for Jon to get to him early on to meaningful change him. By that point he goes out he would have already raped his sister and disfigured his little brothers face. The best thing jon can do is put him down the rabid dog earlier to save enough people afterwards
Lotus92
2026-02-18 17:00:47 +0000 UTCOverall enjoyable chapter!! Sadly for me I don’t like how you portrayed Aegon I feel like I read about a second viserys getting influenced from his council and Melisandre I can not imagine the Aegon from the novelas act like that Anyways that is just me !
nikos konteles
2026-02-18 11:16:24 +0000 UTCI like reading on the Webiste lol. :P
SilasDrekken
2026-02-18 04:15:23 +0000 UTCAlso feel like this may push Rhaella to maybe begin acting against the king? Excited to see
AceofValyria
2026-02-18 02:44:10 +0000 UTCMan this chapter was great. Feel like so many questions were answered w Aegon’s pov. Excited to see how exactly Jon overcomes Melisandre’s influence here.
AceofValyria
2026-02-18 02:41:00 +0000 UTCVery interesting. I look forward to Jon's return to KL. I especially look forward to the ongoing dynamic between him, Rhaella, Aegon 5, and Melisandre.
Alexander
2026-02-17 23:56:13 +0000 UTCShould be fixed. I sorta couldn't be bothered and kept on writing and by the time I finished it was all forgotten.
Gladiusx
2026-02-17 23:20:00 +0000 UTCThank you, and I have to say Aegon finally became a King as much as it probably killed him. It's a logical thing for Aegon to do, but for the realm, you must do things you do not like. I am enjoying seeing how Jon is getting his band to shape up into quite the impressive group. I hope Jon gets a chance to meet a young Gregor or Elia Martell. It would be interesting if Jon somehow tames the Mountain that Rides to become one of his men. I can't wait to see how Rhaella continues to expand her influence and keeps weaving her web throughout the Capital. I will be curious whether Rhaella sends Jon off to war, and he somehow ends up claiming Blackfyre, which would be hilarious if Jon ends up killing Maelys instead of Barristan Selmy. Great job as always, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
FallenMetalGod
2026-02-17 23:19:38 +0000 UTCLoving the story! So much going on and can’t wait to see where it all concludes. It’s interesting Melisandre sees Jon as the son of the great other. That’s gonna be fun to see play out
Mandragoran
2026-02-17 23:16:06 +0000 UTCFeel like im owed two more inane matters :p
Dixon Yermauth
2026-02-17 23:14:50 +0000 UTCAs always the chapter leaves me wanting for more. I know its still far off but I am looking forward you writing that War of the Ninepenny Kings with "spooky" Jon in the middle of it
Lotus92
2026-02-17 22:54:20 +0000 UTC
